Open Mic: Return of P

Walked the wired, detrimental demented sire
Burn pyres, pyrotechnics blaze inertia fires
Jesters and squires, queens lit with juices
Grey gooses seduce introverts and medusas
Who this?
Back from 48 down
Assassinate the truth kids
Poetically drop phonetics havin kats thinkin im the new shit
I aint new bitch
Im Con Fed, a modern day martyr
Bartered back bars while cement surrounded my honor
New days call it karma,
Im trooped laced with boots
Swooped on 22s leavin ya grouped up on bloody stoops
Thats nothin new
Pled out the case, lip zipped take what they gave me
4 years later you think your bars could break me
Grown older, heartless sharks and soldiers
Cummin sober all over party tarts with bolders
Folded up, re hashed and smoke the sweet stash
Keys clack while i reclaim the stats of Ps facts
You seein Ps Ass, ten steps ahead beginning my mission
Tear down pyramids chippin inscriptions with egyptions
You get my vision, neck tied verbs and pearls drippin
Like my mom blowin blacks in the kitchen you aint spittin
Debated whether i should come back to drop a verse
Flipped through the pages and i see the assault just hurts
Im holdin back waitin to release the beast
Heat to boil the seas, this is the return of P

This is dope man

The concepts and schemes.

Creativity and Complexity

I can say you've been doing this poetic for quite a time

Though I don't know what you are on about.. but you killed it

Interesting self hype piece here,I guess you mean P's back as in out of jail and back in the community?,I must say the abstract nature here was solid,your vocab was a good
highlight in itself that came off as ripe for me,it has a great deal of a spiritual element
too,you also had a few nice similes/plays to bolster the overall piece,all whilst under a
simplistic rhyme scheme,I also liked the choices and placements of your words here,
that's an art in itself there,(i liked the use of inertia,that really stood out to me),anyways
solid verse and a pleasing read..peace.

Blood Eclipse,please when you enter someone else's thread,leave feed,or other posts
would be classed as spamming,plus its a little disrespectful to PoeticAssissin here,in
future pm me or whoever you want to contact,just some friendly advice..

ps i will check it out soon..


Now Please Guys Feedback Only From Here On..peace.