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 Topic: Reviving Hip Hop- Red-B ft H4ZEPosted: 24 August 2014 at 5:34pm |
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https://m.soundcloud.com/h4ze-4/revivng-hip-hop-ft-h4ze Coming out the dark into my brightest days Becoming who I wanna be in the slightest ways Red-B n' H4ZE earn praise for our flows feel Earn respect n' elevate to make our shows real We do it for fans not for cash or fame Strictly to become insane bash more game We trash your name and slash the same Then we act, aim for the "BARS" that you claim We add to the flame so that are fan base grows Stay distant from fakes and plan to space those We remain "cased closed" and spit our minds But for the youth sadly the tower blinds Red-B N' H4ZE rebuilding hip-hop's core Willing to go to hell in back throughout the gore Gotta talk to satan there's so much to tell cause With red n haze hip-hop is alive N well H4ZE: It's haze and B, spit wether we make it or not Been writin for a while now and we're makin shit pop Thinkin we not? Just Sit back and watch the show We'll have you screamin out "we don't want no problems, yo" To be honest bro, red-B is comin up in the scene I'm teachin him the ropes and he does it comfortably Fuckin with me? You really wanna fuck with a beast? You hungry for beef? I'll give u faggots knuckles to eat Try to say some shit, man try some shit with B and H4ZE we can make you feel like shit, our bars will leave ya dazed Don't even make a move, fuck ya crew, I'll make ya people break you better watch out or you'll get knocked out when I see ya face Your ways are weak, do you really wanna make a scene Cuz its not gonna stop once you start fuckin with haze and B We'll make you think that you ain't shit, but to put it blatantly Your whole life is worthless and you'll never be as great as me Hate on me... man I dare you to try I will fuckin cuss you out as I stare in your eyes You think you're a fuckin beast? Dog you barely can rhyme And you ain't hustled once in ya life, man you're scared of the grind You swear I wont shine? just sit back and watch me While you're sleepin, I'm up and writin after dark, G Cuz if you really wanna make it man, that's a smart thing You gotta grind more than you sleep to show you have the heart, G |
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Ghul
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Posted: 24 August 2014 at 6:01pm |
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Red, you got delivery man, I really enjoyed your verse, the rhyme schemes were good too man I like the internals you added. Great job.
H4ZE, for the most part your verse was good. There were a few areas where I think you tried to fit too many words into the bar but you did a good job. You also had good schemes as well and you're getting better with adding internals to your schemes. Good job by you both
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Posted: 24 August 2014 at 6:09pm |
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Haha thanks for the feed. But I have to disagree on trying to fit to many words in parts. The flow was good for me and my schemes were pretty dope imo. But B, I told you your verse was dope haha. Just fix those few parts where your delivery fell and it sounded like u were just talking and you'll be beast for sure. This collab was fun.
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Posted: 25 August 2014 at 10:33pm |
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aye yall this was dope
i heard this the other day and i loved it B your really elevating man, you should really do a lot more audios Your flow was hot at some parts, and your delivery was clear H4ze you did awesome bro, your lyrics were top notch and you had nice schemes you also flowed really well and had nice delivery overall this was dope af, i cant wait for all of GTE to get on that one track i showed yall. Stay up guys and keep em comin
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Posted: 25 August 2014 at 10:48pm |
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Fucking dope.
Red- Your voice sounds incredibly good for this shit, to me. I think if you just grabbed a little more confidence, cuz I really thought that was missing in some parts, it would be even doper. The lyrics were great, flow and schemes were nice. H4ZE- Nice flow, schemes. The lyrics were great too. I just think your vocals were a little low. Other than that, really good. Stay up. Peace.
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Posted: 26 August 2014 at 10:29pm |
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Thanks for the feed yo
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Posted: 26 August 2014 at 11:04pm |
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Great collab guys, you both killed it. Haze had some nice lyrics with a good flow and great rhyme schemes, delivery could have been a bit better but hat comes with experience. Red you had some great multis and dope delivery but you need to be a little more aggressive on rhe mic, you need to own it but again that all comes with experience as they say practice makes perfect. But overall a dope collaboration here props.
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Posted: 27 August 2014 at 8:33am |
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3rd beat I like... Ya'll dont know I'm gonna steal these beats and make a profit cuz.
On topic: Red-B: Smooth flow, great delivery and the rhymes were interwoven well in the verse. I heard something I didnt like, though! During the end of this line "Earn respect n' elevate to make our shows real" You took a breath through your nose and as a result, I heard it :(. I know how frustrating it is to not be able to breathe through your nose and standing in the booth, drooling like a fucking mouthbreather but it's absolutely necessary. I didnt hear it anywhere else in verse, though. So I think it's a one time thing. H4ZE: You also have a very nice flow, easy to follow and on point for the most part. You had one or two lines where I was a little bit distracted. This was caused by a sudden increase in speed but you recovered them well. Honestly, there isnt much to criticize about this track. The lyrics were good and fit well together, ya'll had multi's, internals and all that stuff. AND I FUCKING LOVE THE BEAT.
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Posted: 27 August 2014 at 10:05pm |
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Thanks for the thought out feed yo
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