Text Battle Archive: Ridley Squat -vs- Trizzy Tre -vs- spume (0-1-2)

*Blood of the Belt qualification round*

Edited by Rutter knows best - 26 November 2016 at 1:23am

Fuck Triz'n'Corrupt, I'm the best of the crop, wiping u out if u ready or not.
Always Squat over Spume, like I'm catching a wave and I'm ready to pop!
Fuck that American yob with the hell-of-a gob, he ain't getting a shot!
Cos when I jump on Tray he's going downhill fast ... that's a Skeleton Bob
Are these references lost? ... or have u caught the scheme?
That killing you guys is just sport to me!
3 Olympic podiums ... but they're ALL for me
Cos neither of you can even hold a torch to me.

#PointlessHashtag

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Ki leaving LI made u cry, exposed Corrupt on some faggot shit...
Crew inactive bitch! Got more people 'Jumpin-quick' then hittin Siri on accident! - Like this, good reference and a clever punch. 8/10.
U can't imagine it! ur whole roster is Corpses, a dying breed we can see the proof...
Cuz bitch you don't earn 'strips' Leading the Dead .....that's Beatle Juice! -Like this reference, also links well to the subject matter of the previous bar. 7/10.
Yo Ridley, Crewsade? Ur crew layed to rest by Empire, ur set to losing...
Syn's battles got more "thumb's down" like a King's signal for execution! - This was meh to me, solid and made sense, but I have higher standards of you than this. 5/10.
My Shots make Points, his Hooks wont capture Titles ur just a phony...
Ironic how Rid keeps getting "ate" in LA, yet he's still nothing like Kobe! - Solid bar, like the reference, but obviously not a haymaker, doesn't hurt him too much. 6/10.

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OK guys let the dog see the rabbit here,and see what we have..

Trizzy..

Yo...


Ki leaving LI made u cry, exposed Corrupt on some faggot shit...
Crew inactive bitch! Got more people 'Jumpin-quick' then hittin Siri on accident!

(I liked the way you opened here,straight with the aggression,i do feel you were
trying to make something from the quote but didn't quite capitalise really,however
you did manage to get the momentum going with the actual punch at the end of
this bar)

U can't imagine it! ur whole roster is Corpses, a dying breed we can see the proof...
Cuz bitch you don't earn 'strips' Leading the Dead .....that's Beatle Juice!

(now this was a good punch and reference here,the personal although crew based landed also,the wordplay tied in good with actual punch/personal a good hitting bar
I thought,your strongest so far)

Yo Ridley, Crewsade? Ur crew layed to rest by Empire, ur set to losing...
Syn's battles got more "thumb's down" like a King's signal for execution!

(hmm,have a mixed feel about this bar,in parts the concept was nice,but the delivery was so so,plus for me it didn't rhyme to well,well not at all really,maybe it's an accent
thing,I did like the set up though,the play was in keeping with the concept of your take
on history with King's and crewsades was good here,so it kind of landed as a punch,
well more of a jab)

My Shots make Points, his Hooks wont capture Titles ur just a phony...
Ironic how Rid keeps getting "ate" in LA, yet he's still nothing like Kobe!

(good closing bar here,the punch and personal along with the play was consistent
too,plus it flowed well on the whole,for me the wordplay was the highlight within this
bar,it was worded well that just enhanced the punch overall,this for me was your best bar,save the best till last eh)


Ridley Squat..

Fuck Triz'n'Corrupt, I'm the best of the crop, wiping u out if u ready or not.
Always Squat over Spume, like I'm catching a wave and I'm ready to pop!

(firstly nice flow here,the punch was good,coupling Spume to wave via wordplay was
a creative touch I feel,plus it turned out to be a good personal,and the concept of the
last line was good also,nice start with some added sprite)

Fuck that American yob with the hell-of-a gob, he ain't getting a shot!
Cos when I jump on Tray he's going downhill fast ... that's a Skeleton Bob

(liked the set up here I would of liked to of seen the word one instead of (the) before
the hell of a gob part,and this is my only gripe with this bar wording,there's another
wording issue towards the end aswell,using the word that,before the skeleton Bob made it feel a bit statement-ish,if the word like was used it would of came of as a
similie,which for me carry's more weight,with that said this was still a good bar in the
way of punch,the wordplay was good even with my gripes)

Are these references lost? ... or have u caught the scheme?
That killing you guys is just sport to me!

(yep I'm still with you here so your references are present..lol,nice flow to this first of
the shorter bars,liked the way your mocking and clowning them here,it also served
as a nice statement like their not on your level,us it had a nonchalant feel about it,I
liked it good bar)

3 Olympic podiums ... but they're ALL for me
Cos neither of you can even hold a torch to me.

(OK so i see the intended wordplay here,but it didn't really stop this from becoming a
statement type filler really,yeah the Olympic/podium/torch was a good concept and
for you thankfully helped overall,made this closing bar a good jab rather than an all
out punch,still it all counts to sway a voters opinion)


#PointlessHashtag

Spume Corrupt..


Both these shit Candidates think they home with votes, but when the punches hit em
Then we get to see Tr's dome exposed, and I ain't talking bout Trump's wig slipping

(well the opener had the lol factor,so that would suggest you had a good punch here,I
do like to read humour in a battle it really does make an average bar standout and up,
but here the simplicity masked a decent bit of wordplay if not viewed rightly,that went
hand in hand that made the punch work,candidates/votes/Trump)

So punk's keep tripping, cos any front Rid's bringing, gets fucked like bitches with beavers
These hits be lifting two scared tits, higher in the sky than when Ridley cast Weaver

(now this was a clever bar here,more aimed at Rid's with the Alien film concept,but included Trizzy on the whole,well played there,the wordplay was fresh and popping,
and the punch hit home too,i also thought the personal was correct and direct,as
of yet the best bar in this battle)

You shitter's are mad dreamers, so any thoughts bout taking the belt are not sincere
I'm showing you how Tre holds no weight that's felt, cos he's left carrying Squat from here

(this bar I'll state now is good,if a voter gets complacent they might believe this to
appear as a filler bar,the reason for that is we been spoilt by your opening bars that
they make this seemed toned down,but it's not toned down,in fact it was a good shot
at both here,quite creative on the whole,plus the plays and flow were good)

Fucking bury the bottom tier's, Tre planted with an E hit, cos my bombing he cant stop it
What I'm also saying there is Riddles underground like that squat Gollum in the Hobbit

(again not as heavy as your previous bars,but still had some humour attached to it via the Hobbit line,I was feeling the personal against Rid's more out the 2 presented here,
the play again was nice too,decent closing bar here)

Overall nice showing from all 3 here,all had good swings at each other, all from time
to time landed aswell,so props there guys,but for me there was a winner here, and that was Spume,why?,he seemed more focused and his verse was better directed,he was also more consistent with the stronger punches and wordplay, coupled with humour
also, props though Trizzy n Rid's,just SC was the better man here in my opinion..

Vote..Spume Corrupt..peace.