Open Mic: R.I.P

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    Posted: 18 April 2008 at 12:58am
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He was the son of a dope man, what he saw was what he learned
He left school, now it's finally his turn
To rob and steal, but he feels he needs to stop and chill
Cuz deep in his heart he knows that God is real
Mama still tries, to open his eyes
Cuz the way a man lives is the way a man dies
His father's doin' twenty-five to life
Cuz the love of money cuts like a knife
Blinding lights, he doesn't know which way to go
His best friend just got killed two days ago
He writes his Dad the first letter that he ever wrote
A little note, about how bad his heart was broke
Before the mail, could even reach his jail cell
The boy was murdered at a neighborhood hotel
Sellin' wholesale, just like his pop taught him
Rock bottom, a muthafuckin' cop shot him


We always will....
Remember you...
We always will...
Have love for you...
A taste of life....
And now your gone...

They met when they was teenagers, around the tenth grade
She fell in love, and now he wants to get paid
He convinced her to work at the buck naked
And everything she made dancing he would take it
She got a fake I.D., and a club license
A second life, that she had to live in silence
At seventeen, she got the strength to finally leave him
That's when she met the demon
It was a cold murder, he made sure that he really hurt her
Over dumb shit, but he had to take it further
Circumstances that led to last dances
She hit the canvas, now she at Saint Frances
Six o' clock services, feel the nervousness
Of having to look at death perfectless
I'm smokin' roaches burnin' the shit out my fingers
Rememberin' the words of the Church choir singers
 
We always will....
Remember you...
We always will...
Have love for you...
A taste of life....
And now your gone...



Another Mexican gangbanger
Set tripper, wig splitter
A trigger happy ditch digger
Itchy finger quick to blast upon a rival
Vida loca, another word for suicidal
diffrent color of skin, different color rags
Browns puttin' blacks up in body bags
Every two or three streets is a different click
They got no love for themselves so they livin' sick
For centuries we been fillin' penitentaries
It's plain to see, we're our worst enemy
The smartest, most talented of the raza
Is all dead or doin' time for a fuckin' Tronza
Geniuses, all dyin' meaningless
Cuz they can't find a way to break free from this
Needless to say, the gangsta that I speak of
is layin' in a grave that he dug


My gun is hot, My heart is cold
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 April 2008 at 2:10am
This was a cool story to read. I think it would make a good audio...Was this jus a story or was this really someone you knew?
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Yeah, pretty good, man!
 
Cool!
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Browns puttin' blacks up in body bags
 
 
be easy, essay ...........that shit ain't cute
 
 
solid drop nonetheless
 
 


Edited by CHAIN - 18 April 2008 at 3:53am
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Dudes a biter
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Great and Glorious Supreme Presidential Leader of the People's Democratic Republic of LA
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awwwww hell no....lmao...
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I know that damn song and didnt even catch this lmao.

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