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    Posted: 07 August 2017 at 1:03am

https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-role-call-neek-diss

direct link if your having trouble - http://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-role-call-neek-diss



Despite the jocking and everything else i'll always respond

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I dunno about anyone else but it won't play for me
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

I dunno about anyone else but it won't play for me


Oh yeah? Weird link doesn't look broken, anyone else having issues?
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Works for me.
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Yeah it's not working for me either. I just see Judge Judy, but it won't play anything. 
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http://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-role-call-neek-diss

Weird, usually the embedding has no issues for me. Here's a direct link


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I think it's a bit shitty no one has given any feedback...surprising seeing as you seem to be pretty active on these boards

Nice conor sample

The hold weight/literally stuff felt like it landed and the humdrum/2001 bit was the highlight, and in general it was better towards the end. Earlier on it almost felt a bit too much like an extended warm up at times

Flow was an issue, at times it sounded like maybe it was even just in the production, like your tempo was fine but just a fraction out of rhythm like the audio track was laid down slightly out of sync. I think in general (and I'm not saying you don't) you gotta try and pay a lot more attention to writing bars specifically for the beat. And when it's a well known beat/track like this, as an exercise, I would even recommend copying the scheme (syllables, rhyming patterns) more or less exactly from the original, just to give yourself a framework of something you know will flow. Do that and record it and then if you're not happy or wanna play around with it then go ahead, but I think when you're recording your priority just has to be bars that match the track...you're making it too hard for yourself to deliver some of the bars you write, even tho it might be potential A+ material if it was delivered right

Still tho, you get a lot of credit for coming out and throwing down against a diss like his, which I think we can all acknowledge was pretty damn good. You gave applause, talked no shit and recorded a response...that's admirable
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Thanks O, obviously Neek has cemented himself with the audios so to me it's like what can I loose? I learned from the "beef" and came out better for it. Thanks for the feed
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Yeah Jamal is a natural...he had this same swagger when I first heard him on a track when he would have been the tender age of 21...he the rookie that been doing it 20 years, as we all recently learned...haha

Heard him on that track with ChinCheck (anyone who isn't Neek who can name it gets to battle me*) and was like OK, gotta find that guy and work with him...and here we is. Good times.



* not really
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
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Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

Yeah Jamal is a natural...he had this same swagger when I first heard him on a track when he would have been the tender age of 21...he the rookie that been doing it 20 years, as we all recently learned...haha

Heard him on that track with ChinCheck (anyone who isn't Neek who can name it gets to battle me*) and was like OK, gotta find that guy and work with him...and here we is. Good times.



* not really


Track = Cold world ft Neek + Ja Vid

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nah dress. the song definitely isnt on the internet.
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im trying to help you.


the song in question is 100% not on the internet.

as the guy who uploaded it. I can assure you of this.
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Haha. Good that you tried tho! But no it's older than that. Estimate autumn/"fall" 04, tho I could be off
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Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

Haha. Good that you tried tho! But no it's older than that. Estimate autumn/"fall" 04, tho I could be off


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Massive respect coming through with this fam, it can't go unnoticed how much effort you are putting in to your audio elevation
I gave this a good few listens and I liked a lot of the content you kept on throwing hits and a lot of it was working nicely
Some issues with flow in places but then a lot of the delivery was on point, can def recognise you in that early development stage but I see mad potential for you to become dope with this
Just thinking fam maybe some of the flow issues are due to you being such a prolific text writer in the past and maybe you need to let that go and learn to write more specifically for an audio delivery? Maybe
Keep up brother

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Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

Yeah Jamal is a natural...he had this same swagger when I first heard him on a track when he would have been the tender age of 21...he the rookie that been doing it 20 years, as we all recently learned...haha

Heard him on that track with ChinCheck (anyone who isn't Neek who can name it gets to battle me*) and was like OK, gotta find that guy and work with him...and here we is. Good times.



* not really



Mic Check or another one called H.E.A.T.

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Originally posted by spume corrupt spume corrupt wrote:

Massive respect coming through with this fam, it can't go unnoticed how much effort you are putting in to your audio elevation
I gave this a good few listens and I liked a lot of the content you kept on throwing hits and a lot of it was working nicely
Some issues with flow in places but then a lot of the delivery was on point, can def recognise you in that early development stage but I see mad potential for you to become dope with this
Just thinking fam maybe some of the flow issues are due to you being such a prolific text writer in the past and maybe you need to let that go and learn to write more specifically for an audio delivery? Maybe
Keep up brother


Thanks a lot Spume big ups bro
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Originally posted by DressToKill DressToKill wrote:

Thanks O, obviously Neek has cemented himself with the audios so to me it's like what can I loose? I learned from the "beef" and came out better for it. Thanks for the feed


Thats the attitude of a champion.

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Best part of this craft is the growing period

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