Text Battle Archive: RosenBoss vs The Rap Daemon (0-3) |
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RosenBoss
Groupie Joined: 05 September 2018 Location: Nebraska Status: Offline Points: 66 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
Topic: RosenBoss vs The Rap Daemon (0-3) Posted: 13 September 2018 at 12:16pm |
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16 lines - no extra lines earned - drop due in one week
Edited by Neek - 26 September 2018 at 11:54am |
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The Rap Daemon
Standard Member Joined: 05 August 2015 Location: Purgatory Status: Offline Points: 1108 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-14-0 Form: LWLWWL |
Posted: 13 September 2018 at 4:55pm | |||||||||||||||
His bars so milked out, it's showing that they're chymosin fast
I'm going down on a pussy, but not like his Rosen acts! Not much about this fucking clown to go on, but I know he's fag' Overheard he controls the work of 'semen' and he's no bosun fam'! This freakin' jerk's just weak 'n' worthless, he's berzerk To call himself a Boss on a rap site where his bars don't even work! Did Battle Practice and before that, you were Trying A Different Flow And Rhet' claimed it basic, stepping up something you didn't know! This Nebraskan 'tard can't grasp a bar, just face it 'n' quit it The only thing high in elevation about you is the state which ya live in! Been here 12 days and says no extra lines earned, he's a big weak farce If earning's based on days and dopeness shown you don't even deserve 16 bars! Had a piece called Non-Title, which is funny to question, yes? 'Coz other than Wack Kid, that is something you'll never get! All your OM's are fails, how can you embrace ya problems/flaws? Story Of Mommy - should've been about her mistake to not abort! |
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RosenBoss
Groupie Joined: 05 September 2018 Location: Nebraska Status: Offline Points: 66 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
Posted: 13 September 2018 at 7:56pm | |||||||||||||||
I'm the holy water holy Cross call me exorcism Boss
Leave daemon, exhault, for I come in the name of rap God's Demons aren't earthly but you are just plain out of orbit (gum) chewed up spit out early like your flavor I ignored it I'm in the devil's playground but never have an idol hand Stay busy with my shovel and slay ground for bodies I plant I will eat you alive and make you reborn as shit TuRDs Bet this dude thrives for some ass corn and waers skirts Hell I don't know, I'm fighting blind but daemon don't scare me I was born in the valley of evil, you could say Satan raised me I'm bullet proof your bars graze me so you should aim to kill I hope you got what it takes to beat this dude with no skill T-R-D more like Re-Tar-Ded, Hear it speak like Wee-Ta-Ded Keep-bars-weak like loaves of bread, hear them weap-da-dead 15 down - done - leave you and this battle minus one |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 15 September 2018 at 1:20pm | |||||||||||||||
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. TRD,yep nice start here,you opened up with a nice personal in that Michael Rosen play on his alias,and the set up was kind of a force via the w/play but it worked,and i'll also give you credit as you didn't have an awful lot of anno at your disposal either,i also liked the maritime play in your second bar too, in truth the whole verse was aimed well and directed,your w/plays certainty backed up your punches/personals,and to be honest i found them witty and creative for the most part,the main highlight for me in your verse was the humour factor,it added more weight to them,(like a fat woman carrying a lb of celery),you started with sprite and ended in the same fashion,so props for the smirks.. RosenBoss,not to bad for you 1st battle here,and like TuRD (sorry i couldn't help it,i found that bit funny,i know i know,it's the child in me),you also went with the personal route,and in parts got at him quite well also,however there were some drawbacks within, like in parts you had some filler content,that really didn't progress the piece in any way,these can and for most ppl here may be seen as waisted lines,sure its not a crime to have fillers within a piece, but on the norm their used either to bolster up what your saying,or used as transitions for a set up/play/punch,and the overall assonance was hit and miss too,some of the end rhymes didn't rhyme,may be that's a accent thing, but on the whole you gave a good account of your self,well done.. Overall,i liked the fact both went the personal route here,i thought Rosen did well on the whole,he had a few nice jabs at TRD,and in truth i was quite im- pressed really,but i feel TRD had no waisted lines,and each bar had a smirk seam running through it,plus his plays were cool also,props though Rosen, you ain't that far from being a handful in battle... Vote...Daemon...peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Hyperactive
Groupie Joined: 03 August 2015 Status: Offline Points: 113 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-0 Form: WWW |
Posted: 18 September 2018 at 5:15pm | |||||||||||||||
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. RD easily had the best bar of the battle, the “bars don’t even work” bar, which actually flowed nicely with the setup as well. Rosen had just 1 creative (if not a bit played) play, the “orbit/ chewed up” line, which was poorly executed. No offense to either of you, but this battle was actually very lackluster. RD had a better constructed verse, better flow and his punches landed better than Rosen’s, therefore he gets my vote. Vote: Rap Daemon |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 18 September 2018 at 6:52pm | |||||||||||||||
^^sorry but this vote does stand,and Hyperactive you need to give a little
more detail when voting on the why's who's and what's,type the whys it's you feel battler x beat battle x by/ie punches assonance personals ....... peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 26 September 2018 at 2:08am | |||||||||||||||
This one could be close to finish..bump..peace.
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 26 September 2018 at 2:27am | |||||||||||||||
Hyper says why he thought rapper won... read the vote
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 26 September 2018 at 8:08am | |||||||||||||||
Talking of votes,why didn't you leave one seens you were in here instead of
freeposting?..no disrespect intended but it does need improvment,because if you recieved a vote with little explanation,you'd have something to say about it,and you know how we do at LA where voting is concerned..peace. Again bump ppl..(and votes only pls). |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
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Ridley Squat
Street Team Joined: 20 November 2015 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 830 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-6-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 26 September 2018 at 11:40am | |||||||||||||||
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. T'rapDemon
Also I kept mistakenly reading it as "face n quit it" and found that sounded much better, and IMO can mean the same ... so how about ... "just face n quit it"/"the state ya live in". or if you don't like that how about ... "look mate just quit"/"the state ya live in" ... just a thought.
"problems and flaws" / " not to abort" ... much better. RosenJim
Plain out of orbit = 5 Flavour I ignored it = 6
Also sounds like you are doing a cryptic crossword ... but I can't work it out. For reasons ... MFVGT ... The Daemon of Rap |
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 26 September 2018 at 11:51am | |||||||||||||||
Rap Daemon wins 3-0 (KO)
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#Bananas
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