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    Posted: 16 September 2005 at 5:56am
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  • Bolo
  • IceC
  • GhettoMike - Replaced by Legal Eyez
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Write a story of betrayal

Rules

20-24 lines
no biting or recycling
deadline: 24th September 2005
verses must be sent to me via email or private message.
Email Address: tournament@lyricalassault.co.uk

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Originally posted by Verse One Verse One wrote:


i see the dirt 'neath the nails
the grime 'tween the fingers
i feel the wear on my soul
the cold touch that lingers

got chills down my spine, hear the iced rain thats fallin
as it pounds on the sill, and it beats till the wall's thin
then a gust of strong wind, the roof collapses on me
a sudden flood rushes in, and now my town is the sea

lying alone in the gutter, the distance brings crimes over colors
and as i drink my last bourbon, i hear cries from young mothers

blood runs rampid on streets all around my home town
while the devil is safe just 6 feet underground
as he slips in his own puke all he hears is a lone sound
his neck had just snapped, 2 weeks 'fore he's found

she cries in her room, dries the tears with frail lace
alone in the dark, she closed her eyes, saw his face
20 years of her life, she was faithful and true
never lied, never knew... he said goodbye, he was through
she reached for her meds, took a few, slept real deep
they claimed suicide, i think her heart broke in her sleep

u may say that its fate, but its more like betrayal
when every breath that u take has a chance to be fatal
there's more elements in play than just hate, man or smog
its clear we've been bitch-slapped by the "great" hand of God


Originally posted by Verse Two Verse Two wrote:


We Were Brothers On a Trail Huntin -Golds-And-Riches-...
-Stolen-Pictures-...Haunted Me
When I Was Fuckin -Older-Bitches-...

Tied At The Waist...Dayum Son
You Lied To My Face
I Remember All, Even The Time and The Place

..Drugged-n-Poten...
All of My ...Trust-Was-Broken-...
Cause You Left With All My Belongins, Saw The Door and -Pushed-It-Open-..

I Was Like Jesus, But Damn -You-Was-Judas-..
My Life Full of -Ruthless-Tutors-...
We Know The In's And Out... Son, -You-Was-Stupid-..!

So I Was Broke, Envious, ...EyeZ of Hate...
Despised-Ya-Face...
I Want Ya Head On a Plate, The Size Of Cakes!

Hurtin-At-Will
My Anger Enraged Me a was Determined-To-Kill
I Was Sittin With Nothin, While Your Earnin-a-Mill!

I Was Abstract-And-Fact, The Levels-Demandin
Had a Asthma-Attack, Cause Ya Pebbles-Are-Landin
I Aint Blastin-A-Gat, I Aint a Rebel-Or-Commandin
Felt Like I Was, Stabbed-In-The-Back, I Saw The Devil There Standin..

Searchin For You, Ready To Unleash-My-Pain..
Get Beat-In-Rage..
If I Dont Get You Back, Half The Streets-Is-Slain

Located You In Vegas, Rollin-Chips
The Coldness-Wept..
I Hold The Fifth,
Aim At Ya Head, Damn It's Over Bitch!


Originally posted by Verse Three Verse Three wrote:


I was born a revolutionary, fighting government tyranny
Married my girl Tiffany, worked for the propaganda ministry
She passed me documents, blueprints, inside information
Warned me and my soldiers of upcoming litigation
That allowed secret agents to chase and execute traitors
She used to worry bout it all night when I used to penetrate her
I kissed her on the forehead, told her not to worry or sweat it
"You won't regret it, concentrate on your revolutionary efforts"
She looked at me coy, smilin, said she never felt greater
Than when she was freedom fightin for Allah the creator
I loved that girl, had a free spirit and never lived a shallow life
Sometimes I wish we could escape it all, bounce to paradise
But we're trapped in the revolution, my mind keeps spinnin'
And I stay up all night just relivin' the beginnin'
Kinda premitive sinnin' but we all got a role to play
But dam I wish that file didn't fall on my desk that day
The girl blew my breath away, a true asian beauty
It still cuts through me but dam a man's gotta do his duty
So i did it, public enemy always saying to fight the power
But did they ever see the Twin Tower's in their final hours?
Nah, it all falls down, in the end love can't conquer all sir
So I never flinched the second I got the execution order
When I pulled out the gun saw her face fall in amazement
Murdered my sweetheart, all in a day as an MI5 agent


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