No Mercy: (Round 1) Orion -v- Ryder

10lines max
First to 4 / 3 KO
No Biting
No Recycling
No Dickryde Votes
Crew Votes Allowed (otherwise no1 will vote)
Votes MUST be explained
ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted!
No bitching after verses have been droped
keep it in the bitchin thread or see me

all verses must be in by wednesday march 9th 2005 at 12:00 midnight (GMT/British)
all votes must be in by march 11th 2005 at 12:00 midnight (GMT/British)

^If we lack votes whoever is winning at that time will proceed

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Plus whose-ever name is first in the line-up goes first

peace

Da General

LMFAO

*couldnt help it*

BIG muthafuckin' O

Orion your verse was rushed super rushed because you took this battle as an easy one..I don't know why illa gave you and easy oppenent but it seems like you've met your match..

 

 ILLA's done this as punishment kid, 'cuz we all hate you
You couldn't put an end to this sonnin' if you waited till Fall's breakthrough

was good but didn't really have any direction of hitting not any strength of punchI mawl fake dudes, why even try fightin'?
You couldn't spit off the hook bein' hit by Mike Tyson
If you like bitin', try it, I joke ya not
'Cuz ya rep's under fire as it is but still ain't close to hot

Mike Tyson I've heard of him before a million times man Played like a violyn homie good multy though>.
HIs rep is on fire and he is hot battling you lool so I don't see how that hits..

I'm too fast, you a tortoise, an' ya ain't fought well
'Cuz you can't get a hold of the Hare, like poor gel

by far your best line made me chuckle but only had one good bar out of 5....

and your finisher was weak as fuck man should have had the poor gel in there that could have done it for me..Over al the flow I don't know if there was any..One good punchline and some multies equals SUPER rushed..Which loses you points bro..

Now for ryder

Illa only dropped this tourney to see where the stars lie

Orion you talks skills but can't deploy like paraplegic delivery guys

that's a hilarious line and totally merks orions first line...good use of punch man hahaha

 wit all your verses spittin’ you can see you dieing to lose

brawl? you'll get left bruised setting the clock for this permanent snooze

Best line of the battle that's for sure ahahhahahahahahhaha


Orion your disorientated making no sentences cause I broke his point(pencil point)

smoking him out with punches we collaborated to joints

 

was good but more of a filler decent punch nothing special

 

 

Hot and RED shooting wild flames I’m Scorching lead Orions DEAD
Stop talking “superiority” I’ll decapitate you just so you can get A HEAD(ahead)

Good becuuse you are proving your hot man, orion is a superior he shows it many places he's a smart guy that's why..But good personal here and clever with getting ahead
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 I own this stage verbal man with rage orions last days ended with my first bar

I’ll beat you to death with your belts just to make you feel the winning SCARS

Perfect finisher man personal with orions belt constalation and the tournies he wins That wraps it up lol

Both verses were good but I have to go with the young newbie because he gave the vet a run for his money and obviously he out ran him

VOTE goes to ryder..NOt a dick or hate obvoius win..I explained it too..

I agree with Teq... Orion took this... Ryder, this wasn't bad, but he didn't have punches as strong. Orion didn't do his best, but the breaking the point and the A Head bars were weak and played as hell.. in a short battle, you can't afford to have half your punches be played and weak

Vote: Orion

Vote: Star Boy (Orion)

His Punches Hit Harder, More Direct, Feeling Every Bar Except I Don't Really Understand The Concept Of The Last Bar...I Have An Image Of What It Might Be Saying But I Don't Know(Explantion Please).
Ryder You Came Alright But Not Nearly Good Enough, Like Jehu Said In A Short Battle Against A Quality Opponent You Really Can't Afford To Have And Played Or Weak Punches, And You Had About 3 Of Them In There...But Much Props To Both Of Ya On This Battle.

(>1<)

Thats What I Thought...Props On The Win!

(>1<)

Orion took this for better flow, harder punches, better wordplay, just a better verse, only bar i didnt like in Orions verse was the fought well/poor gel bar, every other bar was hot.  Ryder had a couple bars that was good but nothin that really hit hard, so my vote = Orion

cool orion, you got me man, it was a good battle thogh man, thanks for helping me to elevate too, it was a good battle homie, well done man...peace