Shadow Boxing: Round 2 - Group 1 - Voting

This was cool... great variation between the two of you... Shade I liked it, not so centred around rhymes this time but even so at times the verse just felt artificial the way u worded it 'cuz of the rhymes, the real skill is bein' able to get rhymes seamlessly blendin' with the content of the piece... Anyway... definitely liked how u built up the atmosphere in the middle-end part but at other times the story was too mechanical... in a this happened then that happened kinda way... the opening was real slow which COULD work if you managed to get a crazy buildup to it, but u didn't really, and more specifically ya climax was really lackin'... so with that the slow buildup didn't have the effect it could have in conjunction with a crazy endin'... good verse tho, good story... Ice was on the next shit, some of ya rhymes were a bit sketchy, didn't catch the flow at all times but definitely liked how it all built up... Your slow start to it all was real dope, gives u background to it, then the chaos of the incident is crazy, and the lil twist at the end is nice... Maybe coulda made it a lil more "obvious" tho just for a real knockout effect but then fa me personally as a reader I enjoyed the subtlety of it... nice ending

VOTE: Verse 1

This was a nice Battle, Both came with a different sorta Vibe.

Verse 1..Very nice the multis kept that flow running Real nice. the image was sick, The way u described the scene was dope was easy 2 picture the scene in your head. the ending was nice too.

Verse 2..A different Approach, Shit was cool, the Flow was Solida Kept it running consistant. The imagery was cool it cudda been better on a few lines but it wasnt bad Kept it nice...

Vote- Verse 1

Its Just an Overall Better Verse more description and a better image comes from verse 1

Props 2 both