Lyrical Lobotomy : Round 2 - Kiki Vs Lucky D |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
Standard Member Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
Topic: Round 2 - Kiki Vs Lucky D Posted: 30 April 2013 at 10:17pm |
16 Lines, Same as the last round, Verses Submitted to me
Good Luck
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 01 May 2013 at 9:24am |
Check.
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Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 01 May 2013 at 10:55am |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 2:41pm |
Lucky need your verse
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Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 07 May 2013 at 2:09am |
Its in
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:46pm |
Both Recieved
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 9:53am |
KIKI
Why am I battling a journalist? Must have been a mistake.. Anyway, here's my winners interview.. I voted for Lucky D.. It was Smooth he reckoned he clowned, Smooth might lose, but only cos I wanted an easy second round, I'm title bound, got my weight up, and now i'm late crowned, Battling Ki.. So Cee LITERALLY wanted your 'tourney breakdown', Your prediction was pleasant, my response full of clever hints, I'm present tense, you're past, your relevancy hasn't been present since- Dinosaurs roamed- So get yourself grown with your waste sounds, You're a dud.. But give me a good shot and i'll send some great rounds, You fucking suck, watch me destroying Luck, like I burnt clover, Double irony.. About his leaf's - Now he leaves - Getting turned over, My verse colder.. You're older, but with the same reputation, Just a topical head that was dead after he got an LI relegation, Don't have to diss a nation for the mutilation of Luck D, Seemingly always trying to see me, even your name is 'LOOK! - KI!' Luck please.. I've known you go from 'new kid' to 'elusive', Now he's on his 'news shit'.. LUCK GETS KO'D.. There's your exclusive.. |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
Standard Member Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
Posted: 08 May 2013 at 9:54am |
Lucky D
Bring heat to this fire, this bitch stay rubbin' on two sticks
Even with a postal service dawg you couldn't deliver kiks I aim straight as an arrow, couldn't hold weight two by two When from an even score before, to a top ten by joinin that crew (Hmmmmm) It is what it is, seems like ya'll rollin' on tha dark side of tha trees How many have ya been with dawg, LA's crew whore on his knees Tracked flaws while my potion regiens, captured hardest with honor Never seen a dude cry so much after postin' All this Drama Now ya sort of some killer lyricist, you lace inc with tha best in tha biz? 90 percent of ya feedback comes from ya own crew sayin' you's tha shit Ain't focused on my past, my future holds clear with a cloak and dagger Been through real shit in my life, cuz this man ain't a fuckin' actor Stapled ya stomach after you Felt Hungry, called back now ya bloated Ain't known for startin' beef, but Keeks found out really what I'm holdin' Slipped away to heal some pain, returned with a passion to easy I'm surprised that Cee didn't just hand ya a bye, by goin' against Trizzy.... Me and Kiki had a back and forth OM battle. All this Drama (Lucky) and Felt Hungry (Kiki) Been in multiple crews Was/Is an actor |
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 1:16pm |
Noth had good verses but it comes down to relevancy and punches and kiki simply had more of them, and they happened to be harder hitting too.
"I voted for Lucky D.. It was Smooth he reckoned he clowned, Smooth might lose, but only cos I wanted an easy second round, I'm title bound, got my weight up, and now i'm late crowned, Battling Ki.. So Cee LITERALLY wanted your 'tourney breakdown', Your prediction was pleasant, my response full of clever hints, I'm present tense, you're past, your relevancy hasn't been present since - kiki Luck didn't have 3 bars that matched the opening 3 for kiki, plus i liked his Toronto maple leafs play. points for that. Luck - I liked your .. "Ain't focused on my past, my future holds clear with a cloak and dagger Been through real shit in my life, cuz this man ain't a fuckin' actor" that was definitely a good personal.. and so was this; "I aim straight as an arrow, couldn't hold weight two by two When from an even score before, to a top ten by joinin that crew" - lucky d but those were the highlights of your verse to me and they didnt overpower kiki's 3 bars.. my vote? kiki spirez
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 08 May 2013 at 1:51pm |
Appreciate the break down man. Nice verse Luck.
Keep the votes coming.
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Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 08 May 2013 at 2:04pm |
You too Keeks
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No_NaMe
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 2:45pm |
You fucking suck, watch me destroying Luck, like I burnt clover, Double irony.. About his leaf's - Now he leaves - Getting turned over, Kiki- this like right here made me sit forward in my chair. Your verse had a lot of good punches, not many useless fillers. You really dug into lucky here. Lucky- I don't know if I jus didn't understand some of your punches because I haven't been around for to long or what, but there weren't to many lines that stood out to me. So sorry but I felt Kiki's verse was a bit better. Sorry man MVGT- Kiki |
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 08 May 2013 at 2:49pm |
Appreciate it man, was proud of that line.
2-0. Uppin'.
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fuckoff
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 4:57pm |
kiki gmv luck. honestly liked ur verse. tbh too many crew punches, but liked how direct the verse was, the starting beef and 90% bars both had an extra syllable that messed the flow imo, and personally didnt like the kiks play, really feel youd of benifitted from more multis. that being said this battle was closer than the score and my vote makes out, its hard not to be critical in a battle with 2 decent verses, cause the little things make the difference
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Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 08 May 2013 at 5:11pm |
3-0 Kiki
Close it up... waiting for topical tournament
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
Standard Member Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
Posted: 08 May 2013 at 5:13pm |
Kiki Advances, though tbh i thought this one woulda have gone to 5 and not a straight KO... as both are experienced in the battlefield...
Anywho... Kiki Advances.. Locked
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