Forum LockedLyrical Lobotomy : Round 2 - Kiki Vs Lucky D

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    Posted: 30 April 2013 at 10:17pm
16 Lines, Same as the last round, Verses Submitted to me

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 May 2013 at 9:24am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 May 2013 at 2:41pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 9:53am
KIKI

Why am I battling a journalist?

Must have been a mistake.. 

Anyway, here's my winners interview..


I voted for Lucky D.. It was Smooth he reckoned he clowned, 
Smooth might lose, but only cos I wanted an easy second round, 
I'm title bound, got my weight up, and now i'm late crowned, 
Battling Ki.. So Cee LITERALLY wanted your 'tourney breakdown', 
Your prediction was pleasant, my response full of clever hints, 
I'm present tense, you're past, your relevancy hasn't been present since- 
Dinosaurs roamed- So get yourself grown with your waste sounds, 
You're a dud.. But give me a good shot and i'll send some great rounds, 
You fucking suck, watch me destroying Luck, like I burnt clover, 
Double irony.. About his leaf's - Now he leaves - Getting turned over, 
My verse colder.. You're older, but with the same reputation, 
Just a topical head that was dead after he got an LI relegation, 
Don't have to diss a nation for the mutilation of Luck D, 
Seemingly always trying to see me, even your name is 'LOOK! - KI!'  
Luck please.. I've known you go from 'new kid' to 'elusive', 
Now he's on his 'news shit'.. LUCK GETS KO'D.. There's your exclusive..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 9:54am
Lucky D

Bring heat to this fire, this bitch stay rubbin' on two sticks
Even with a postal service dawg you couldn't deliver kiks
I aim straight as an arrow, couldn't hold weight two by two
When from an even score before, to a top ten by joinin that crew (Hmmmmm)
It is what it is, seems like ya'll rollin' on tha dark side of tha trees
How many have ya been with dawg, LA's crew whore on his knees
Tracked flaws while my potion regiens, captured hardest with honor
Never seen a dude cry so much after postin' All this Drama
Now ya sort of some killer lyricist, you lace inc with tha best in tha biz?
90 percent of ya feedback comes from ya own crew sayin' you's tha shit
Ain't focused on my past, my future holds clear with a cloak and dagger
Been through real shit in my life, cuz this man ain't a fuckin' actor
Stapled ya stomach after you Felt Hungry, called back now ya bloated
Ain't known for startin' beef, but Keeks found out really what I'm holdin'
Slipped away to heal some pain, returned with a passion to easy
I'm surprised that Cee didn't just hand ya a bye, by goin' against Trizzy....

Me and Kiki had a back and forth OM battle.  All this Drama (Lucky) and Felt Hungry (Kiki)
Been in multiple crews
Was/Is an actor
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 1:16pm
Noth had good verses but it comes down to relevancy and punches and kiki simply had more of them, and they happened to be harder hitting too. 

"I voted for Lucky D.. It was Smooth he reckoned he clowned, 
Smooth might lose, but only cos I wanted an easy second round, 
I'm title bound, got my weight up, and now i'm late crowned, 
Battling Ki.. So Cee LITERALLY wanted your 'tourney breakdown', 
Your prediction was pleasant, my response full of clever hints,  
I'm present tense, you're past, your relevancy hasn't been present since - kiki

Luck didn't have  3 bars that matched the opening 3 for kiki, plus i liked his Toronto maple leafs play. points for that. 

Luck - I liked your ..
"Ain't focused on my past, my future holds clear with a cloak and dagger
Been through real shit in my life, cuz this man ain't a fuckin' actor" 
that was definitely a good personal.. and so was this; 

"I aim straight as an arrow, couldn't hold weight two by two
When from an even score before, to a top ten by joinin that crew" - lucky d

but those were the highlights of your verse to me and they didnt overpower kiki's 3 bars.. 

my vote? kiki spirez
Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 1:51pm
Appreciate the break down man. Nice verse Luck. 

Keep the votes coming.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 2:04pm
You too Keeks
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 2:45pm

You fucking suck, watch me destroying Luck, like I burnt clover,
Double irony.. About his leaf's - Now he leaves - Getting turned over,

Kiki- this like right here made me sit forward in my chair. Your verse had a lot of good punches, not many useless fillers. You really dug into lucky here.

Lucky- I don't know if I jus didn't understand some of your punches because I haven't been around for to long or what, but there weren't to many lines that stood out to me. So sorry but I felt Kiki's verse was a bit better. Sorry man

MVGT- Kiki
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 2:49pm
Appreciate it man, was proud of that line. 

2-0. 

Uppin'.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 4:57pm
kiki gmv

kiki, clever hits with the name play, leaf n tourny breakdown, real smooth multis, really liked the delivery of the closer, tho not really a hard punch just came off really well. flow was nice throughout the internals really helped that impressive tbh

luck. honestly liked ur verse. tbh too many crew punches, but liked how direct the verse was, the starting beef and 90% bars both had an extra syllable that messed the flow imo, and personally didnt like the kiks play, really feel youd of benifitted from more multis. that being said this battle was closer than the score and my vote makes out, its hard not to be critical in a battle with 2 decent verses, cause the little things make the difference
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 5:11pm
3-0 Kiki
 
Close it up...
 
waiting for topical tournament
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2013 at 5:13pm
Kiki Advances, though tbh i thought this one woulda have gone to 5 and not a straight KO... as both are experienced in the battlefield...

Anywho... 

Kiki Advances.. Locked
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