Lyrical Lobotomy : Round 3 - Kiki Vs. DTK |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Topic: Round 3 - Kiki Vs. DTK Posted: 10 May 2013 at 5:05pm |
Verses due.. 20th May at Midnight BST
Same as before, blind drops 16 lines check in so i know you're cool good luck!
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 10 May 2013 at 5:44pm |
Check! Good luck Keeks!
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The original comeback kid
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 10 May 2013 at 5:47pm |
Check. You too mate.
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 14 May 2013 at 4:34pm |
Just for an FYI Keeks, I've finished writing my verse. So if you're done to let me know and we can get this cracking!
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 14 May 2013 at 6:03pm |
Mine's in man. Good Luck.
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 14 May 2013 at 7:29pm |
Don't think the verse get dropped till the due date (20th) anyway lol unless all four are in than it'd make sense just to post em
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 14 May 2013 at 11:24pm |
I'm sure that in previous rounds, battles that had both verses early got dropped.
I know that some battles were settled before me and Lucky's verses were even up on the site. But it's up to Cee.
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 15 May 2013 at 12:37am |
Well if yours is in, mines in, so there's no sense in waiting
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
Standard Member Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
Posted: 15 May 2013 at 1:13pm |
I'm going to drop them all at the same time as its the build upto the final, waiting on Kay and Spume to hit me up...
Then we'll have votes on all the battles at the same time so we should get results around the same time. |
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 15 May 2013 at 1:23pm |
Fair enough.
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:24pm |
Kiki
Chances hurled- he'll mess his words and get fed hate, Leave this nerd hoping for 3rd, like his girl had a 'headache', He's dead weight, verses N/A, I guess like some sodium, Obama and a mirror is the only way to ad-dress to the Podium, Canadian KO last round, guy, this is a KO to ya nation, You're like your airlines, think you're fly 'til you blow elevation, You're a nearly-dude, can't put the man to the vision, You can't plan shots, when you're braggin' 'bout my ammunition, You're laggin' in all your precision, so fuck what you say, Mr B on your dick - The only time you'll hear 'Dress T bagged K!' And here you lay.. You're owed black suits and flowers, That clocks ticking Joshua, last time I KO'd you in 24 hours, But that's all i'll allow us, you're slipping in a ruck, Got as much false confidence as Pacquiao pissin' in a cup, What will you go for? Poke at audio or the KO to O? Shut up, my guesses leave Dress up, with no where to go.. |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 4:25pm |
Dress
Expos : * First all, those pictures of are Kiki, the first bar is for the picture of him with his arms up and the second is for the joker/dress bar. Also, he really likes the joker. * to "x" something out is to cross something out, expire/x-spire * Kiki's real name is Ciaran which means little dark one * Cee said Kiki was sick during his last battle with Lucky D Kiki wants me to X-Spire from the tourny so I'm crossing him out!* Your getting rocked in this bout, no doubt you've done your best! You like the Joker? Ironically you both look STUPID when it comes to Dress! I run this set! My lyrics and execution are strong while your form is shallow! How do you expect to shine, your name has you destined for shadows!?* Your own clique endorsed my ammo! Kay wouldn't even defend crew! When it came to final predictions he quickly voted against you! (Tourney mag) Don't even pretend, dude! I bring death, essentially I'm fearless Your mic quality sucks because it's only resembling your lyrics! Kiki's Career's shit, it seems that no one feels his writtens It must be the fact that they only appeal to bitches! (Ouch) Knocked your chance at luck out last round, so ineitably I'm punching him better! And Kiki's only sick within a battle when he's feeling under the weather!* You running against me is like a parapelegic vs Bolt in a track meet I'll leave this rapper/actor in a wheelchair like Drake in Degrassi!* |
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 21 May 2013 at 7:46pm |
We put together a good battle my man. Props.
Uppin'. |
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 21 May 2013 at 8:10pm |
Agreed, bro. Good luck!
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DressToKill
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 12:04am |
Uppin!
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 2:43am |
Okay man, no hate to either.
You both lived up to the hype. And come on now, you know if ya didn't I will tell ya! So this was a very complicated decision in voting this battle. But I'm going to do a bar to bar breakdown, then I'm going to add the scores and that's that. So at this moment I have read both verses and have not decided a winner, this overall will be a spontaneous vote. so here goes nothing .... Kiki Chances hurled- he'll mess his words and get fed hate, Leave this nerd hoping for 3rd, like his girl had a 'headache', Ki, I'm not really feeling the way that ya worded this, it just seems a bit forced imo. Almost like it was on the brink of not working out at all if you ask me. I just think that the concept has too many contradictions (on the "his girl" part). 6/10 He's dead weight, verses N/A, I guess like some sodium, Obama and a mirror is the only way to ad-dress to the Podium, Hmm, I see the vision that you are creating but this also seems forced imo. Though this concept doesn't contradict itself like I thought your opener did, it just seems blatantly forced to me. And I use "blatant" with the up most respect. So very creative imagery but a no go on the nameplay ... imo .. 6/10 Canadian KO last round, guy, this is a KO to ya nation, You're like your airlines, think you're fly 'til you blow elevation, This was well put together. Great concept, wording, and execution. 9/10 You're a nearly-dude, can't put the man to the vision, You can't plan shots, when you're braggin' 'bout my ammunition, I don't like the set up here Ki. It almost classifies as filler in my eyes. A little bit of sacrificing content for rhymes to me. For the punch, I like the concept but think that the execution lacked. I personally believe you took the wrong angle on this concept bro. Jus my opinion as others could very well feel different ... 6/10 You're laggin' in all your precision, so fuck what you say, Mr B on your dick - The only time you'll hear 'Dress T bagged K!' Okay, the nameplays here were creative but I just feel it lacked the impact. Kays statement didn't really seem like he was on DTK's dick imo. It seemed to me to be more of a short winded compliment, part statement. And to me the nameplay here really doesn't have much significance aside from you simply spelling out names. Again it was creative but not too damaging, Ya know? To me, there's not a second side to the nameplay here. Plus, with this being a tourney semi final I feel that the set up was dull (not shined) because it lacked any multis. 6/10 And here you lay.. You're owed black suits and flowers, That clocks ticking Joshua, last time I KO'd you in 24 hours, This is a nice personal It has a taunting vibe to it and contains aggressiveness. It comes off as more of a statement imo though. 6/10 But that's all i'll allow us, you're slipping in a ruck, Got as much false confidence as Pacquiao pissin' in a cup, This was well put together. Great concept, wording, and execution. 9/10 What will you go for? Poke at audio or the KO to O? Shut up, my guesses leave Dress up, with no where to go.. Not what I would have chose for a closer. It was decent nameplay but I'm not a fan of how your worded it. 6/10 No hate Ki, I hope I didn't sound too aggressive with that vote. I'm just trying to vote this as fair as possible. DTK Son, I seen you trying to flex! I'm suprised you got to this round! Kiki wants me to X-Spire from the tourny so I'm crossing him out!* When i seen the x-spire expo I thought I know that DTK aint about to use that played concept! But i do admit, you put a fresh spin on it. The pic was funny shit how ya clowned it. Great setup and execution ...9/10 Your getting rocked in this bout, no doubt you've done your best! You like the Joker? Ironically you both look STUPID when it comes to Dress! That was funny shit too. Nice wording for this. Great setup and execution ...9/10 I run this set! My lyrics and execution are strong while your form is shallow! How do you expect to shine, your name has you destined for shadows!?* Nice concept and Great setup and execution ...9/10 Your own clique endorsed my ammo! Kay wouldn't even defend crew! When it came to final predictions he quickly voted against you! (Tourney mag) Nice again man. 8/10 just because it was a tad statementish. Don't even pretend, dude! I bring death, essentially I'm fearless Your mic quality sucks because it's only resembling your lyrics! Nice little shot here, 8/10 Kiki's Career's shit, it seems that no one feels his writtens It must be the fact that they only appeal to bitches! (Ouch) Clever wordplay and nameplay here. Nice hit ... 8/10 Knocked your chance at luck out last round, so ineitably I'm punching him better! And Kiki's only sick within a battle when he's feeling under the weather!* Nice little hit here but imo "punching him better" sounds a tad bit forced DTK. But the concept and punch is solid. 8/10 You running against me is like a parapelegic vs Bolt in a track meet I'll leave this rapper/actor in a wheelchair like Drake in Degrassi!* funny imagery, but imo it seems ya got a little lazy on this bar. I would have used one of your more solid bars for a closer. 7/10 Well it seems that's that, Kiki - 54/80 DTK - 66/80 You both are great writers but there can only be one winner. unless my math is wrong, V:DTK Good luck on the win fellas! |
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 3:00am |
Thanks a lot, Game! 1-0 me
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 3:03am |
Surprised what you liked and didn't like tbh, but fair do's.
Uppin.
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 11:02am |
1-0 me, bump
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:58pm |
Am i allowed to vote in this? Thought id ask before i do since im the other battle
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