Forum LockedLyrical Lobotomy : Round 3 - Kiki Vs. DTK

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:28pm
Reading it through first time I really wasn't sure who took it. kiki's was written better and DTK's was more at the mercy of formula, and because I wasn't sure I thought I'd do the bar-by-bar thing bg did, and it came out 47-40 to DTK, so not that close...and not that I'm one to vote purely on that, but gotta say on second read, the personal nature of DTK's was the difference-maker...even when he missed he generally had good material he was working with, so no complete duds (podium and tea-bag lines were bad)...similarly DTK's misses were also bad nameplays (shadows and the magazine one...didn't work)...but he opened and closed better, voting against you was as simple a punch as you could ask for but in terms of pure impact, outdid anything else in the battle

Sorry, first two times I've voted in (I would guess) five or six years and both on your battles and not for you...pure coincidence, no conspiracy...I did read the other semi-final too but it was honestly...I mean, no disrespect...just, not, good...I didn't even know what to say...so I came to this one

Vote: DTK
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:33pm
2-0 DTK... Kay you can vote providing breakdown is fair, and unbiased
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:53pm
Thanks a lot, O! Much appreciate the vote, dude.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 May 2013 at 11:19am
Uppin folks, votes are appreciated
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 May 2013 at 2:33pm
Fuck I just typed out a long ass break down but hit back on my phone..if its still open in a couple hrs ill vote again

Good battle guys
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 May 2013 at 8:32pm
Originally posted by DressToKill DressToKill wrote:

Uppin folks, votes are appreciated
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 May 2013 at 8:36pm
Damn!!
This aint decided yet?

Come on guys, this is a tourney.
Show it a little respect please.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 May 2013 at 8:38pm
FUCKING VETS.. COMING OUT OF THE BLUE, PICKING WHO THEY KNOW BEST.. FUCKING BRILLIANT.. ALL THIS WORK, THEN MR FUCKING NUMBER 1 COMES ALONG AND..





LOL I joke.


That's fair enough O, I know it's not hate. Thanks for voting.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2013 at 12:33am
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Chances hurled- he'll mess his words and get fed hate, 
Leave this nerd hoping for 3rd, like his girl had a 'headache', 
Too me this was kind of a weak opener, by your standards anyways. 1/4
He's dead weight, verses N/A, I guess like some sodium, 
Obama and a mirror is the only way to ad-dress to the Podium,
Excellent nameplay right here, very clever.  Set up wasn't the greatest though. 3/4
Canadian KO last round, guy, this is a KO to ya nation, 
You're like your airlines, think you're fly 'til you blow elevation, 
Not a bad set up, though the punch wasn't bad, maybe word it better. 2/4
You're a nearly-dude, can't put the man to the vision, 
You can't plan shots, when you're braggin' 'bout my ammunition,
Didn't like the set up and I get the personal, but it coulda been harder...1/4
You're laggin' in all your precision, so fuck what you say, 
 Mr B on your dick - The only time you'll hear 'Dress T bagged K!' 
Excellent bar right here, Nameplay, decent shot..well done 4/4
And here you lay.. You're owed black suits and flowers, 
That clocks ticking Joshua, last time I KO'd you in 24 hours, 
Decent shot at a personal here, nothing to sepectacular 2/4
But that's all i'll allow us, you're slipping in a ruck, 
Got as much false confidence as Pacquiao pissin' in a cup,  
Liked this one here, being as I'm a boxing fan...thought it was good 3/4
What will you go for? Poke at audio or the KO to O? 
Shut up, my guesses leave Dress up, with no where to go..
Decent closer.  Some might think its played but I haven't seen it..3/4

Overall not a bad verse.  Some real nice shots, but a couple of weak ones, opener in particular.

19/32


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Expos : * First all, those pictures of are Kiki, the first bar is for the picture of him with his arms up and the second is for the joker/dress bar. Also, he really likes the joker.
            * to "x" something out is to cross something out, expire/x-spire
            * Kiki's real name is Ciaran which means little dark one
            * Cee said Kiki was sick during his last battle with Lucky D

Son, I seen you trying to flex! I'm suprised you got to this round!
Kiki wants me to X-Spire from the tourny so I'm crossing him out!*
Nice Opener, nameplay was good, decent start.........3/4
Your getting rocked in this bout, no doubt you've done your best!
You like the Joker? Ironically you both look STUPID when it comes to Dress!
Another decent line here, not as good as the first one, set up wasn't there, finish was 2/4
I run this set! My lyrics and execution are strong while your form is shallow!
How do you expect to shine, your name has you destined for shadows!?*
Set up wasn't there, personals should be true, finish was alright  1/4
Your own clique endorsed my ammo! Kay wouldn't even defend crew!
When it came to final predictions he quickly voted against you! (Tourney mag)
This was good, nice shot at the crew thing and personal against him with KB 3/4
Don't even pretend, dude! I bring death, essentially I'm fearless
Your mic quality sucks because it's only resembling your lyrics!
Not a bad shot again, set up wasn't anything special but the finish was decent..2/4
Kiki's Career's shit, it seems that no one feels his writtens
It must be the fact that they only appeal to bitches! (Ouch)
Didn't this this one was that good.  Again personals should be true IMO..1/4
Knocked your chance at luck out last round, so ineitably I'm punching him better!
And Kiki's only sick within a battle when he's feeling under the weather!*
Set up was the best part to this bar, didn't like the punch at the end..2/4
You running against me is like a parapelegic vs Bolt in a track meet
I'll leave this rapper/actor in a wheelchair like Drake in Degrassi!*
Decent set up and strong finish...nice way to close it out..3/4

Overall decent verse also.  The opener and closer were by and far the best part of this verse.  To me when dropping a personal it should be true, no one feels his writtens and his form is shallow is a bit of a stretch IMO

17/32

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2013 at 12:35am
Thanks for voting after you lost your original shit man. You've shown a lot of love for this tourney. 

2-1 to Dress.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2013 at 12:40am
His name is Ciaran..and it is defined as "little dark one"? I don't know how that isn't true.

Either way, I do appreciate you taking time out to vote
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2013 at 12:55am
I was meant towards that his form is shallow.  Its far from it actually IMO

BTW the break down is 

2 points per line, 4 per bar

That bar in question is 1/4

I run this set! My lyrics and execution are strong while your form is shallow! 0/2
How do you expect to shine, your name has you destined for shadows!?* 1/2
Set up wasn't there, personals should be true, finish was alright  1/4

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2013 at 1:10am
Yeah, I understand now. But it's not a personal really, it's a diss. We're battling yano? Anyways, no big.

2-1 me
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:10am
Kiki- Your verse seemed more smooth and was really well done, I liked it, the tea bag K line made me laugh a little bit, i laughed reading your verse you had some good shit, the opener had me laughing just because of the hoping for third like your girl got a headache, cuz i think thats soewhere everyones been ahah. good verse man

DTK- opener and closer lines where easily the 2 best, the rest was good, but IMO it wasnt as smooth as Kiki's verse sorry man 

MVGT- Kiki
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2013 at 12:14pm
Thanks Name. 

And thanks again to anyone that's voted in either battle. This tourney deserves the recognition, Cee's gone to a lot of effort with this.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 May 2013 at 11:08am
2-2. 

Uppin'. Let's not let this stay on for an embarrassing amount of time guys, yeah? 

All votes appreciated, and you know that me and Dress stay voting in battles and dropping Open feed.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 May 2013 at 10:53pm
Originally posted by Kiki Spirez Kiki Spirez wrote:

2-2. 

Uppin'. Let's not let this stay on for an embarrassing amount of time guys, yeah? 

All votes appreciated, and you know that me and Dress stay voting in battles and dropping Open feed.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 May 2013 at 8:50am
Decent battle, liked sections of both verses. Hard one to chose. Felt Kikis was slightly easier on the flow side of things and for that it came off the tounge better however I feel Dress came a little more personal with the punches and did just enough to land the knockout blow. Oh, Kikis podium line was pretty nice too, clever play.

However my vote goes to Dress, hope that's okay guys.

Goodluck.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 May 2013 at 11:02am
Cheers, Junior! 3-2 me
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 May 2013 at 6:31am
This needs votes so I'm gonna put one in.

Power Hits of the battle

Kiki

Obama and a mirror is the only way to ad-dress to the Podium

You're like your airlines, think you're fly 'til you blow elevation

Shut up, my guesses leave Dress up, with no where to go..



DTK

Kiki wants me to X-Spire from the tourny so I'm crossing him out!

You like the Joker? Ironically you both look STUPID when it comes to Dress!

How do you expect to shine, your name has you destined for shadows!?

When it came to final predictions he quickly voted against you!

And Kiki's only sick within a battle when he's feeling under the weather!

I enjoyed both verses of this battle and it was close. Flow wise I think Kiki slightly had an edge. But the more power punches and better more aggressive personals went to DTK, who won this battle IMO.

Vote: DressToKill



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