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    Posted: 26 October 2003 at 11:30pm

come on fag reply soon.........

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no hate/dickryde/cru votes

lets get this dun quick......so post asap not in 2 weeks

FUCK MEO N HIS PART TIME RHYMA'S.................

all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 12:19pm

My heavy artillery arsenals too much action for this arsenist,Ya claimin ill-powers a match for RR what a farce is this,My talents and skills are ever so extensive, you dont even have a fraction of the percentage,of the ability and lyrical prowess that my strengths is,I let this newbie get-with-my-crew now hes forgetting-who,helped him elevate his game letting him join RR was a regrettful move,don't ya know my crews deadly and yours crews dead,you always a crew emcee never a crew head,

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:08pm

 You let me in real rhymaz thats wot guna make this funny.

cos now this "cru head"  is not good enough to be my understudy/

am cannibilistic eat yea like my kentucky fried chicken.

meo's into hanging with domanatrix taking a whippin/

 "you helped me elevate",  that comment makes you mentally fucked up.

remember the *rebirth tourny, even joe got this girl shook/

 these skillz have overtook you and your cru along time ago thats  why i left.

meo skillz resemble a *mini metro, mines a nitrous kitted corvette/

when i say this direct  .u know am gonna be rite....

back down before you get dissed as worse as you did on *MYRAPSITE/

An fuck being complexed.aint guna waste my time ,sadly meo its all over.

you that much of a faggot you should change your name to BEN DOVER!!!!!!!!!!! (HAHAHAHAHAHAHA)/

 

*rebirth tourny= for those who dont know its the last tourny of the old l/a..(meo got shook write a half rhyme)

*mini metro= a shitty banged up car from the uk

*MYRAPSITE= scottys site before the old l/a.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:15pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:17pm

Aight... heres my breakdown:

2meo:

You've elevated quite alot...

Quote My heavy artillery arsenals too much action for this arsenist,Ya claimin ill-powers a match for RR what a farce is this,My talents and skills are ever so extensive, you dont even have a fraction of the percentage,of the ability and lyrical prowess that my strengths is,

- That was quite nice... but half of it was just braggin which doent hit ya opponent. The rest of tha verse was decent, personal.. closer was eh. overall verse seemed too short and poorly structured. seemed like u didnt really try.

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Quote back down before you get dissed as worse as you did on *MYRAPSITE/

^ Hahaha true

Overall ya verse was structured better and your attempt at punches were superior. You need to incorperate some wordplay tho.

Vote- Rule B

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:34pm

2meo, nice multis but the verse didn't flow right.  Maybe it was your layout but it seemed like a very short verse.

Rule B, more aggressive punches.  OK flow.

Vote: Rule.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:48pm

2meo.. I cant deny that you havent improved.. but the verse simply wasnt long enough. You had a horrible paragraph structure and the punches were lacking.

Rule B.. a better verse, seemed like you thought it out and put more effort into it than 2meo did with his. Some solid tries at wordplay and also some personals in there. Overall you impressed me more.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 8:52pm
you take round 1
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 October 2003 at 9:25pm

aite cheers for the votes .....

3/0ko

topic closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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