Open Mic: Rusting off the Dust

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    Posted: 12 September 2019 at 3:13pm
Dusting off rust while catching tetanus
black death, when i write its septic
i talk shit and my triggers relentless
whooping cough after i wreck kids
leave ya in cardiac arrest bitch
bars so prison itll leave ya wearing those sheets as a necklace 
Like a CO without his weapon
Im willing to come to terms with this life sentence
beat you senseless while i rearrange your bones like tetris
Leave an Ayrian brother headless and play soccer with the Mexicans
Take his testicles, wrap em in leather and play tennis
San Quentin with this penmanship
Those in favor of censorship cant escape my pencil tip
Like Alcatraz, all is left is skeletons
bash a trans and feed em, her to some pelicans 
at bay, im the sort of specimen rejecting his medicine 
blasting Led Zeppelin while beating your brain into gelatin
i prey on those who display estrogen 
its hunting season, so bring out the waves of venison
Chain is feminine, always bringing up the melanin
his pen game excellent? Shit is archaic and repetitive 
mad at the world cause of the color of his skin so sensitive
I benefit from hard work and no excuse for my genetics
Like eating sugar and losing a leg because your diabetic 
half of what this bitch says is prosthetic
Call me what you want, schizophrenic, a weird dude with a fetish,
call me hectic, a loser with no connection 
At least im comfortable in my own skin and authentic
Your excrement, everyone is tired of stepping in it
Dont call out the Ethics of Dizz if what preach isn't present
BITCH

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Welcome back Dizzle it's been a hot minute, where do i start here, a verse
that's a selfhype horror core and a diss, i feel you have a love and hate
relationship with CHAIN, lol, this piece came off as a bombardment as
you had a lot going on within, i thought the assonance was ripe through-
out also,plus I think you did more than shake the rust off here, you bagged
it then sold it for scrap to a junk yard, quite a statement me thinks, nicely
done...peace.


And good to read your about again..
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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