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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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Posted: 12 September 2019 at 3:13pm |
Dusting off rust while catching tetanus black death, when i write its septic i talk shit and my triggers relentless whooping cough after i wreck kids leave ya in cardiac arrest bitch bars so prison itll leave ya wearing those sheets as a necklace Like a CO without his weapon Im willing to come to terms with this life sentence beat you senseless while i rearrange your bones like tetris Leave an Ayrian brother headless and play soccer with the Mexicans Take his testicles, wrap em in leather and play tennis San Quentin with this penmanship Those in favor of censorship cant escape my pencil tip Like Alcatraz, all is left is skeletons bash a trans and feed em, her to some pelicans at bay, im the sort of specimen rejecting his medicine blasting Led Zeppelin while beating your brain into gelatin i prey on those who display estrogen its hunting season, so bring out the waves of venison Chain is feminine, always bringing up the melanin his pen game excellent? Shit is archaic and repetitive mad at the world cause of the color of his skin so sensitive I benefit from hard work and no excuse for my genetics Like eating sugar and losing a leg because your diabetic half of what this bitch says is prosthetic Call me what you want, schizophrenic, a weird dude with a fetish, call me hectic, a loser with no connection At least im comfortable in my own skin and authentic Your excrement, everyone is tired of stepping in it Dont call out the Ethics of Dizz if what preach isn't present BITCH |
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Crimson Juice
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Welcome back Dizzle it's been a hot minute, where do i start here, a verse
that's a selfhype horror core and a diss, i feel you have a love and hate relationship with CHAIN, lol, this piece came off as a bombardment as you had a lot going on within, i thought the assonance was ripe through- out also,plus I think you did more than shake the rust off here, you bagged it then sold it for scrap to a junk yard, quite a statement me thinks, nicely done...peace. And good to read your about again.. |
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