1-2 Punch League: S dubb vs Kiki Spirez - Playoff R1 |
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S Dubb
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Kiki's an obvious failure, it's not Some Mystery, look in here recent...
4 title matches and he only holds One Victory, that's 25 percent....
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Kiki Spirez
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This lame is through see, cos flames are raging through me, Now i'll have people laughing at a Dubb, without an Asian Movie.. |
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Rutter knows best
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. s dubb- you had a an okay angle if its true but the punch u killed the punch. The off rhyme didn't help and just came out flat. Your describing again, you need to be comparing. You do dig up decent personals you just need to find how to flip them. kiki - i had a similar idea with the dub movie. It was all pretty smooth on your end, could of been harsher but it came together nicely enough. v/kiki
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Crimson Juice
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. OK guys let the dog see the rabbit here.. S Dubb yeah I thought you did well on the personal approach here,the bar was well directed also,the punch hit but it was nothing to heavy really as like you stated in the punch itself,he's had alot of success to reach 4 finals and has took one of them too, so it takes some sting away for me,liked the angle though as it showed some good creativity,just wasn't excuted to well.. Kiki yep I was liking this,a simplistic approach here that worked well on the whole, the punch was good as it was coupled with some nice humour,and a good spot of wordplay that was effective,plus due to the simplistic route came off as slick,and the multi's helped there too,plus i liked the name flip as this was a fresh angle also.. Overall not to shabby guys,and i'm sorry S Dubb to be voting against you again,but I'm sure you prefer me to be honest,but Kiki was the better man here in this encounter at this time,good work though dude.. Vote..KiKi..peace. |
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Lord Puente
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. s dub, first thing I will point out is the end rhymes don't work. in audio you may be able to manipulate words to rhyme, but not like that in text. end rhymes are huge when it comes to 1 bar punch. in regards to the punch, I don't know how I feel about it... I mean 25% doesn't sound awful.... I don't see this as a punch, maybe something you'd drop in an OM This lame is through see, cos flames are raging through me, Now i'll have people laughing at a Dubb, without an Asian Movie.. kiki, not to content here either. the set up doesn't really connect to the punch at all... unless im missing something... but in regards to the punch, I mean, it was a little funny but not much of a hard hit either.... really the reason why is because I watch everything with subtitles, so the Asian is pointless but a word to rhyme. idk, this one hard to decide.... I chuckled on the inside I guess for kiki, but then s dub at least had a nice internal....punch wise, I guess ill go with kiki. should have been more put forth being that this is playoff time baby!
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S Dubb
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Okay, good battle Kiki....
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Dub-loon Yeah as people have said already Punch just wasn't flipped properly Came of statement ish, but a decent attempt to get personal Kaki A bit predictable and leaning towards lazy, would have liked to see a better execution and more depth Still you had enough to overcome Dubbs less work attempt, decent OK battle here Gotta give it to Kiki=Vote |
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Beans
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ya I ot Kiki here.. dubs end rhymes didn't work and the punch wasn't executed properly. The thing tho dubs is doing his research/paying attention because this angle on the personal could have been dope. Dubs your starting to turn a corner I think. Ki your bar was cool. Worded well the concept was cool I got you taking this formhaving the better executed bar V/ki |
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AxyRocker
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Dubb Percent and recent don't exactly work except that one awkward syllable, you tried to go personal with the punch but like everyone's already mentioned - doesn't quite work cuz 1 in 4 is still good and thus seems statementish Ki Well you should try Age of Ultron in hindi Dub , shit is crazy fuck lmao. I see the angle lazy but good and smooth enough. It was more like you saw his punch and thought this was enough and that it was. MVGT - Ki for smoother punch
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Rutter knows best
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voting closed kiki wins 7-0
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