Open Mic: Scampi Pasta (feat. Jay Homicide)

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    Posted: 31 July 2013 at 4:13pm
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Respect the Hunger....

[CHAIN]

I’ve returned like The Mack, I’m Morrison, Mark
Word is that I’m back to leave more than a mark
Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc…
Buchanan jackets meaning morons are marked…
For death once I utter these morbid remarks
As dark as a Moor, I am morgue-ing you marks
Green is mi amor, I’m evil to a Mormon
But for my peeps I would morph into Marx
I’m taking it back to my earliest phase when…
Germans were paying their mortgage with Marks
Morpheus mixed with Zach Morris, I marched…
With psychos who believed there were mortals on Mars
They mourned over martyrs, they’ll mourn over me
I’m more so unique, till Le Mort, C’est La Vie
Not for vendetta ‘ cause I’m morally pristine
Morgan Freeman with the bars…more than just serene


[Jay Homicide]

Can’t front on us, no doubt that our alignment in sharp
Visionary approach, we lead the blind through the dark
Follow suit, the honours due from the design of our art
Stellar steez better see this comes from combining the stars
The crew rolls deep, focus means our minds on the task
We’re at the finish, y’all stuck on the line from the start
This is exactly what you get when you think of greatness
You can try bash us, but y’all should just see that’s aimless
We’re the only crew left where every member poses a threat
Not gassing, it’s me telling you what you know in your heads
War with us? I wouldn’t advise it! You cunts ain’t go do shit
One hit has half ya squad missing like a rough day in Munich
The teams set, and it becomes clear every time that we rap
The chemistry’s on point, we’re like Walter White in the lab
So y’all better keep this in mind the next time that you speak
We’re above and beyond the next level you’re trying to reach

HG.



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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote U.N.L.M. Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 July 2013 at 7:10pm
Nice collab. I thought Chain's "mark" theme was crazy. Loved the morpheus mixed with zach morris bit and thought that this line was smooth as hell "Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc". Crazy verse. I like that Jay came with a straight up approach. Like the Walter White line and loved that opening bar with the visionary approach line. Good stuff. 
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Cheers for the feed my dude, yeah Chain's Mark scheme was insane. This will be the first of many collabs, if I have anything to say about it.
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This was dope guys. 

CHAIN, very risky doing the 'mark' thing, but in my opinion, it worked very well. And kept the reader intrigued about the piece from the get go. You knew this wasn't going to be your regular drop. 

Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc… 
Buchanan jackets meaning morons are marked… 

My favourite bit personally. 

Jay, liked the switch up in your verse. You started with all flow and attitude, which is 'your thing' and what you're good at. However, later on in the verse, you were confident enough to let the flow calm down and throw in a few social reference punches. Which I wasn't expected and really liked. 

Follow suit, the honours due from the design of our art
Stellar steez better see this comes from combining the stars 

My favourite bit of yours.

Well done.
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Nice collabo fellas....good shit...
 
Chains, I gotta say it was an interesting approach with the mark flow, but it def worked. Shit was fresh and I like the way you went about it. I actually read it twice just to make sure I was catching it right but dope.
 
Jay this was a solid verse. The opening was fire and your cocky type barz were spot on for this drop.
 
ya'll did your thang here
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LOL@ As dark as a Moor, I am morgue-ing you marks
Green is mi amor, I’m evil to a Mormon
But for my peeps I would morph into Marx<---That shit was clean ha ha!

The language twist was sick too. Who bettah to pimp this one straight out

....MY MAN!!!!

Whuttup JH!! I see HG done went into the lab and created the first AK with ether bullets. Like I said...I dig your style of rhymin Jay.....doesn't have the flash but still comes off rugged! Good work!



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I respect you 2 for still doing your thang in the face of adversity. Chain, the whole Mark thing was sick, the German line got me cos, just when you think your moving on to a new scheme, you swing straight back into the Mark thing (nh). Jay there was no killer plays in there which I'm used to seeing from you but you repped your crew well, flow and rhymes were on point.
Nice work fellas
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Enjoyable read right here from both of you. Definitely looking forward to seeing more from y'all. That opener was great!!!
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 August 2013 at 10:29pm
I like Jay's message

Chain

That verse was just stupid
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Cuba Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 August 2013 at 10:35pm
What the fuck did Chain just drop...collabo is over, open mic is over, someone shut it down!!

Jay, worst collabo ever...you actually had a cool 'say it how it is' type verse, but you literally got solar eclipsed on this thing...someone needs to tell Chain to roll back a few levels so he's only next level
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote The Law Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 August 2013 at 11:18pm
Chain definitely a dope verse here. Although the rhyming started to get a bit repetitive IMO, the plays on it were outstanding. Very well written. 

Jay your verse was solid also, just nothing standoutish like Chain had. It flowed very well and read smoothly. There was a few bars in there that I really liked also. Walter White line was nice. 

Enjoyable reads from both of you guys.
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Chain....... I had no idea the word "Marc(k) could be used in so many different context....bravo.Chain! lol
risky business but you came out sick with it!



Jay.......love the haters cuz most of the time they've got yur name in their mouth and it plays on in their minds more often than it does in your own......I thought both drops were hot sounded like you had sum shit to get off yur chest, you said yur piece and you fuckin said it well fam!


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CHAIN da gawd
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Chain the mark theme was nice. I felt some of it was a lil forced, but ya flow and rhymes always kill it.

loved this line..

But for my peeps I would morph into Marx

killer...


Word is that I’m back to leave more than a mark
Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc…

Sick fuckin flow and rhymes

jay the rhymes was nice thru the verse. Some good punchlines in this. Flow was good.

Fav lines..

Follow suit, the honours due from the design of our art
Stellar steez better see this comes from combining the stars

nice internal rhymes..


We’re at the finish, y’all stuck on the line from the start

simple but a sick line.



good shit yall.. weak that I wasnt included!
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CHAIN might as well be my favorite rapper here. Unbelievably dope, and a sick use of alliteration in the beginning.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2013 at 3:54pm
This really was top quality stuff
Great to see a hg collaboration
looking very tight Well done

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Lucky D Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 August 2013 at 5:12pm
This was fuckin' sick.

Chain--I don't really know what to say.  You amaze me everytime you write something.


Jay--For someone who doesn't drop often I'm surprised you can keep up with your skillz.  Dope shit.

OM of the month for sure
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Collab was ok because of the two styles but i really like the whole piece and the way it read with the language switch up was fresh... stay up stay dropping liked the post.
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This was sick as fuck!
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