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    Posted: 20 March 2005 at 10:45am

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 March 2005 at 2:43pm

OK.. 1's done vote up



Jehu

Stalin the Best US cat on LA? for Jehu, that's slander
But I don't need a urinal to piss on the American Standard   *1
Yes I slay, like techs I spray, your text's type gay
So Ima have stalin bleeding for the next five days
Call me period, I end your sentence as a renegade
You're not able to throw a decent jab, Dave, your punches are never straight  *2
You can't spit strong flames, you're spittin is weak as hell
How can I lose to a trainee who admitted he needs the help?        *3
My pistol's priceless, lyrical heat leaves you sizzled, lifeless
Even Cuba blew your shit up without a missile crisis              *4
Tell Stalin that when he's spittin
He should bring crutches to the battle cause you know he'll leave with them
You get hung trying to act like you'r boss and you dope
You wanna floss, I'll knock out so many teeth you can floss with a rope
You have reservations like Hotel guests when facing me
I'll beat you, CLEARly, cause you ain't reachin the final destination 3    *5

*1 Most Urinals and public toilets in the US are made by a company named "American Standard...
*2 He throws a lot of gay-type punches, a Jab is a straight punch
*3 When I did the Renegade Training camp shit, we talked on MSN. I said I was gonna do more, about longer multis, storytelling, longer multi chains, etc... he told me he needs work on those areas, especially storytelling.
*4 Cuba is IceC's Alias
*5 Read carefully: CLEAR Waters is the girl from Final Destination 1 and 2... she dies in part 2, so she's not seeing final 3. Stalin has ben in the last 2 tourny finals...



STALIN

beat him twice, his dads an alcoholic, King Jehu was a king of israel in the bible, ppl say Em murdered Jay on Jay-z track 'Renegade' and he did that thing where we had to use his rhymes to write a verse and I added alot more rhymes into it, im beatin him so bad its gotta go down in history how "jehu" died

watch how my words upset, this worthless vet
boring text but this faggot thinkin hes Immortal Tech
u force at best, the hits is endin the effects of whatever u gonna spit against me
thinkin ya shits impressing, so whys this the 3rd time u gettin ripped intensely
im facin plots of faggots tryina break my spot, ull replace ya pops
like father like son, so of course ima make u take these shots
wit my middle finger up u better follow the signs, I keep the hollows in nines
better just bottle ya rhymes,he aint gettin no pussy cuz his girls swallowin mines
expect havoc when I blast ya, its tragic but fact is this faggots a actor
fuck audio ya tracks is just wacker, how does a king of israel pass as a rapper
we on a Em and jay tip, u fake bitch, fuck a king ill take the thrown quick
leave me alone kid, closest thing u got to 'Renegade', was me killin u on ya own shit
u prewrite spits for weeks, he loves rydin orion more than he likes victories
u cant recite shit to me, the way im 'killin jehu', they gonna have to rewrite history
nothin in this thread could touch me, u 'bumpin more head' then thugs be
I got proof u a faggot, explain to the site why you fuckin said you loved me


Date         &n bsp;         &n bsp;         &n bsp;  
12/24/2004 

Time
5:55:29 PM 

From
Jehu (Happy holidays and shit)

To Stalin - Instead of a war on poverty, they got a war on drugs so the police can bother me, -Orion- || Fuck Jesus! ||, Levi

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stalin, u know I love u


 











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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 March 2005 at 3:08pm

first and foremost, oh fuck to stalin's closer. yikes.

multi's: stalin
flow: jehu
wordplay: jehu
punches: jehu
personals: tie, peronal madness, too hard to choose, great job both
opener: jehu
closer: stalin
enjoyability: jehu, stalin's verse was good and the closer was fucking hilarious to me, but jehu was more consistant

sick fucking battle guys, but i think jehu won cuz he just kept punching, and a few were monster shots... you had yours too stalin, he just had more... great personals and wordplay guys, shit was tight. stay up g's

vote: King Jeewho

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 March 2005 at 3:20pm

This was hard... flow and rhymes even... both used 'em in ya own way...

Punches... Jehu... Standard was OK, next five days was ehh, sentence shit was ill, punches never straight aight but people have done that quite a bit now, needs the help is cool but you coulda worked the personal simpler to be more effective IMO, missile crisis was hot, crutches was aight, floss with a rope was aight, closer was OK, but I've just realised it loses effect 'cuz it's CLEAR_LY... you gotta add to the word, which always diminishes wordplay in my eyes... but still a nice idea... Stalin... Immortal Tech was OK but not really used with any major impact, ripped intensely was a good idea but you can tell you wrote it like u did for the rhyme, doesn't sound that good, take these shots is good, but I did that shit on you, lol, so meh... swallowin' mines nah, been done... King of Israel was kinda jus throwin in the personal, and considerin' you use it better later on, this was unnecessary... last three punches were crazy... killed you on ya own shit DAMN... rewrite history tight... and the closer was funny as fuck, clearly taken outta context, but jus' like u did vs me for the title, it still works... lmfao.

Stalin's closing made this really really fucking close... I'm gonna do the rate-a-bar shit, 'cuz I can't call it...

Jehu: 60
Stalin: 60

lol. Great. Just great.

Well, Jehu was more consistent... Stalin had more personals but his use of them was sloppy, whereas Jehu used some a bit too cryptically, like the closer, which takes time to sink in and whatnot, which isn't always a good thing, I have the same problem... Complexity goes to Jehu, charisma goes to Stalin...

I think consistency matters in a battle... I think it matters over killer blows in most cases... Recently I voted for 20 vs 2s because 20 had more killer blows but that's because 20's weaker stuff wasn't missing as such... Stalin had one or two shady punches, whereas even Jehu's weakest shit wasn't swingin' and missin', it just wasn't hittin' very hard (e.g. next five days shit)

Yeah that's it... decision made... Good job Renegades.

VOTE: King Jehu

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 March 2005 at 4:16pm

Jehu

Stalin the Best US cat on LA? for Jehu, that's slander
But I don't need a urinal to piss on the American Standard  

(that was a very nice opener clever and flowed nice)


Yes I slay, like techs I spray, your text's type gay
So Ima have stalin bleeding for the next five days

(these were a lil filler ish, nothing but multies here basic really)


Call me period, I end your sentence as a renegade
You're not able to throw a decent jab, Dave, your punches are never straight 

(this line was str8 wasn;t hot but wasn't wack either... "Call me period" help the previous line... in the reason why he said it)


You can't spit strong flames, you're spittin is weak as hell
How can I lose to a trainee who admitted he needs the help? 

(lol, this was funny, made fun of him... and it's especial bad cause you ran the camp)


My pistol's priceless, lyrical heat leaves you sizzled, lifeless
Even Cuba blew your shit up without a missile crisis 

(ooh that was hella clever... nice setup too, nothing too flashy but the name play using IceC against him was nice!!)


Tell Stalin that when he's spittin
He should bring crutches to the battle cause you know he'll leave with them

(this was not so good in my eyes... didn't say much really, didn't like it)


You get hung trying to act like you'r boss and you dope
You wanna floss, I'll knock out so many teeth you can floss with a rope

(these two lines were also really basic and low level type stuff, Jehu you know you could've done better than that... floss with a rope? too used... seemed unoriginal)

You have reservations like Hotel guests when facing me

I'll beat you, CLEARly, cause you ain't reachin the final destination 3    *5

(I like the closer, it was clever and on point)


STALIN

watch how my words upset, this worthless vet
boring text but this faggot thinkin hes Immortal Tech

(the opener was boring... didn't really hit em with a banger! more like a love tap)


u force at best, the hits is endin the effects of whatever u gonna spit against me
thinkin ya shits impressing, so whys this the 3rd time u gettin ripped intensely

(I liked this... you flipped his ego on him and hollowed it out.... nice)


im facin plots of faggots tryina break my spot, ull replace ya pops
like father like son, so of course ima make u take these shots

(I like this one too, it's dirty and dead wrong but still you pulled it off nice)


wit my middle finger up u better follow the signs, I keep the hollows in nines
better just bottle ya rhymes,he aint gettin no pussy cuz his girls swallowin mines

(I didn't completely catch this... the girl swallowin mines lacked an element to follow... seemed sorta left out there to hang)


expect havoc when I blast ya, its tragic but fact is this faggots a actor
fuck audio ya tracks is just wacker, how does a king of israel pass as a rapper

(lol, that was funny, dissin his audios and flippin his name in one line was pretty nice and you did it without it seeming rushed or forced... good work)


we on a Em and jay tip, u fake bitch, fuck a king ill take the thrown quick
leave me alone kid, closest thing u got to 'Renegade', was me killin u on ya own shit

(LOL, that was smooth right there, you did alot of shit I liked in this from the King and throne to the Renegade shit... nice)


u prewrite spits for weeks, he loves rydin orion more than he likes victories
u cant recite shit to me, the way im 'killin jehu', they gonna have to rewrite history

(this was cool, wasn't as hard hitting cause the concept was kinda basic but still it was bad either)


nothin in this thread could touch me, u 'bumpin more head' then thugs be
I got proof u a faggot, explain to the site why you fuckin said you loved me

(the closer was kinda funny, nothing too special but it was cool)


Jehu edged it in creativity and flow   Stalin in Multies and funny lines

hmm....

Vote: King Jehu as his lines hit harder the Stalin's did

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