No Mercy: (SEMI-FINAL) King Jehu v Stalin |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Topic: (SEMI-FINAL) King Jehu v Stalin Posted: 20 March 2005 at 10:45am |
16lines max all verses must be in by "SATURDAY" March 26th 2005 at 12:00 midnight (GMT/British) If we lack votes whoever is winning at that time will proceed (To find out the time set your time 5hours head of the site time in your profile) Blind Drops send them shits to me |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 24 March 2005 at 2:43pm |
OK.. 1's done vote up *1 Most Urinals and public toilets in the US are made by a company named "American Standard... watch how my words upset, this worthless vet
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 24 March 2005 at 3:08pm |
first and foremost, oh fuck to stalin's closer. yikes. multi's: stalin sick fucking battle guys, but i think jehu won cuz he just kept punching, and a few were monster shots... you had yours too stalin, he just had more... great personals and wordplay guys, shit was tight. stay up g's vote: King Jeewho |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 24 March 2005 at 3:20pm |
This was hard... flow and rhymes even... both used 'em in ya own way... Punches... Jehu... Standard was OK, next five days was ehh, sentence shit was ill, punches never straight aight but people have done that quite a bit now, needs the help is cool but you coulda worked the personal simpler to be more effective IMO, missile crisis was hot, crutches was aight, floss with a rope was aight, closer was OK, but I've just realised it loses effect 'cuz it's CLEAR_LY... you gotta add to the word, which always diminishes wordplay in my eyes... but still a nice idea... Stalin... Immortal Tech was OK but not really used with any major impact, ripped intensely was a good idea but you can tell you wrote it like u did for the rhyme, doesn't sound that good, take these shots is good, but I did that shit on you, lol, so meh... swallowin' mines nah, been done... King of Israel was kinda jus throwin in the personal, and considerin' you use it better later on, this was unnecessary... last three punches were crazy... killed you on ya own shit DAMN... rewrite history tight... and the closer was funny as fuck, clearly taken outta context, but jus' like u did vs me for the title, it still works... lmfao. Stalin's closing made this really really fucking close... I'm gonna do the rate-a-bar shit, 'cuz I can't call it... Jehu: 60 lol. Great. Just great. Well, Jehu was more consistent... Stalin had more personals but his use of them was sloppy, whereas Jehu used some a bit too cryptically, like the closer, which takes time to sink in and whatnot, which isn't always a good thing, I have the same problem... Complexity goes to Jehu, charisma goes to Stalin... I think consistency matters in a battle... I think it matters over killer blows in most cases... Recently I voted for 20 vs 2s because 20 had more killer blows but that's because 20's weaker stuff wasn't missing as such... Stalin had one or two shady punches, whereas even Jehu's weakest shit wasn't swingin' and missin', it just wasn't hittin' very hard (e.g. next five days shit) Yeah that's it... decision made... Good job Renegades. VOTE: King Jehu |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Cuttin P
Standard Member Joined: 04 January 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 320 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
Posted: 24 March 2005 at 4:16pm |
Jehu Stalin the Best US cat on LA? for Jehu, that's slander (that was a very nice opener clever and flowed nice)
(these were a lil filler ish, nothing but multies here basic really)
(this line was str8 wasn;t hot but wasn't wack either... "Call me period" help the previous line... in the reason why he said it)
(lol, this was funny, made fun of him... and it's especial bad cause you ran the camp)
(ooh that was hella clever... nice setup too, nothing too flashy but the name play using IceC against him was nice!!)
(this was not so good in my eyes... didn't say much really, didn't like it)
(these two lines were also really basic and low level type stuff, Jehu you know you could've done better than that... floss with a rope? too used... seemed unoriginal) You have reservations like Hotel guests when facing me I'll beat you, CLEARly, cause you ain't reachin the final destination 3 *5 (I like the closer, it was clever and on point) (the opener was boring... didn't really hit em with a banger! more like a love tap)
(I liked this... you flipped his ego on him and hollowed it out.... nice)
(I like this one too, it's dirty and dead wrong but still you pulled it off nice)
(I didn't completely catch this... the girl swallowin mines lacked an element to follow... seemed sorta left out there to hang)
(lol, that was funny, dissin his audios and flippin his name in one line was pretty nice and you did it without it seeming rushed or forced... good work)
(LOL, that was smooth right there, you did alot of shit I liked in this from the King and throne to the Renegade shit... nice)
(this was cool, wasn't as hard hitting cause the concept was kinda basic but still it was bad either)
(the closer was kinda funny, nothing too special but it was cool)
hmm.... Vote: King Jehu as his lines hit harder the Stalin's did |
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 24 March 2005 at 4:21pm |
KO for the king
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