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    Posted: 16 July 2007 at 2:35pm
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Senor Perfecto:

Yo...

They say I'm not fussy and that I'll go for any hussy,
But I saw this nigger's head on Facebook stuck between his little sister's pussy,
And she's ugly and weak like Jehu who wouldn't want beef,
There's more holes in his punchelines than in his girlfriend's front teeth,
I'll punch geeks and fake gangsters from the net if I ever met them,
Plus this hacker can't touch me cos I have McAfee for my protection,
If you resent me then don't pretend to word things gently and befriend me,
There won't be a choice of liberty or death like Patrick Henry,
I'm the sentry of LA...  Stop and let your team think,
The sickest Latino rapper alive is Chino and it means "Chink",
My flow is mightier than the Royal Navy at the height of its power,
Your style is alright... until we take a bite and it's sour,
So I'll enlighten this coward and finally end his pretension,
America couldn't beat Britain without French intervention,
You can't go to Iraq without your allies behind you,
You couldn't beat the Vietnamese even though you tried to,
You thought that Sherlock Holmes was a housing project in London,
You talk so much shit... I find half your verses redundant,
My words are acrid and pungent...  You won't want to read it,
The Masters is the only time US swinging succeeded...

Adios...

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King Jehu:

Chows young fat refers to messing with young girls. Chow Yun-Fat's name is sometimes flipped since asian names are often last name then first name. He was known to date girls 10 years his junior. His audios sound like he's reading them with no regard to flow or the best it's on. Joe Budden was supposed to release an album called "The Growth," but it's been pushed back for 2+ years.


This is easy; I've seen Mr. Yau come wack
Movie Star? No, but I heard he Chows Young Fat
Get crossfaded, if you get your every loss graded
We'll see undeveloped 16s, like your broads dated
Your punches sacrificed for flow, but wait!
Your audios never flowed on beat, there's no debate
Your run-on sentences on rap, they show your state
Your punches are weak, I'll have you on the ropes today
My writing is cannibalistic, call me Thomas Harris
O ain't Capt, but had to let you battle so you'd be embarrassed
P only beat me as a newbie and he hasn't improved
UK's best chance was when O wanted to have him removed
N00b killer or SP the vet? I've handled them both
You're LA's Joe Budden, something must've stunted your "Growth"
You no vet, you were drafted but were never deployed
Crew so dead, dudes were shafted and forever destroyed
Hate Renegades all you want, but your game is wack
That's why we gave you half your losses, that remains a fact
Even compliments are backhanded, they call me the meanest
You're proof that an idiot can inspire a genius.

So thank you...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 July 2007 at 10:09pm
Ill vote this tomorrow...good battle yall
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 July 2007 at 10:27pm
nigger? really?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2007 at 5:28pm
Somebody, anybody wanna vote?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 August 2007 at 5:41pm

I do//will vote.. just hard one to vote on..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2007 at 8:08am

LMAO @ this not having a single vote yet.

Here we go....

SP - Opener. Im not a member of facebook, so i cant access the link, but still, im sure J wouldnt have his head between his sisters legs, thus deeming the punch pretty redundant for me. Again, the second bar i cant see the picture, but if this one is true none the less, its a pretty hot punch. the set up line was pure filler though, which isnt really what you usually come with. 3rd link gives me 'access denied' .. and the macafee shit is weak. there was an oppertunity for something hot there, but your punches are weak in this man. your flow is poor too, which is unusual for you. Henry line is ok, nothing solid there, the punches in this verse are really abstract, they dont hit really at all. Chino/Chink bar. What the hell dude? Thats not even a punch. You seem to deliberatly be throwin' down weak shit, thats not cool. bite/sour shit was witty, flowed a lot better and was a little more direct, still nothing that sstanding out as hot tho. french intervention was again a little indirect. the rest of the verse was average, the closer was nice, your best punch easy.

KJ - Opener was hot. funny as shit, nice direct personal, follow up bar was nice, nothin' too ehavy though, next 4 lines were a bit weak too, i mean, its obvious to see the attempts, but theres no pack in the punches. next bar was again indirect, a personal involved, but the punch was a bit lax. PB line is nice, Joe Budden bar was nice, crew bar was nice, half losses bar is nice, closer was funny. Bit of an inconsistent verse here J, you had a couple of real hot punches, the rest were just 'nice'. thats not nessecaraly a bad thing, but from the two battlers involved, this should have been a real hot battle.

Overall - Gotta say guys, this is easily the weakest battle of the lot. it lacked big punches, wordplay, flow and content. SP was mad weak, and generally his verse seemed disinterested in the whole thing. KJ seemed to put a little more effort into his verse, a few better punches. overall, Jehu got this due to that fact.

King Jehu GMV

Side Note : theres somethin' about this battle that dont fall right for me. SP seems like hes purpously thrown the battle with a verse that weak. Jehu didnt come correct either. Shady shit.







I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2007 at 11:11am
Quote im sure J wouldnt have his head between his sisters legs


He actually DOES have his head between his sisters legs...so no the punch isn't redundant for you

Anyways to my vote....

Senor

They say I'm not fussy and that I'll go for any hussy,
But I saw this nigger's head on Facebook stuck between his little sister's pussy,
Not hard hitting but a nice personal, wouldnt of personally used it as an opener cause its not a major hard hitting punch...but not bad
And she's ugly and weak like Jehu who wouldn't want beef,
There's more holes in his punchelines than in his girlfriend's front teeth,
Dope, nice personal and it hit....decent
I'll punch geeks and fake gangsters from the net if I ever met them,
Plus this hacker can't touch me cos I have McAfee for my protection,
Didnt really like this one to be honest, seemed irrelevant the way u worded it
If you resent me then don't pretend to word things gently and befriend me,
There won't be a choice of liberty or death like Patrick Henry,
Not bad
I'm the sentry of LA...  Stop and let your team think,
The sickest Latino rapper alive is Chino and it means "Chink",
What?
My flow is mightier than the Royal Navy at the height of its power,
Your style is alright... until we take a bite and it's sour,
Not bad
So I'll enlighten this coward and finally end his pretension,
America couldn't beat Britain without French intervention,
Not a hard hitting punch again jehu more against the american team...
You can't go to Iraq without your allies behind you,
You couldn't beat the Vietnamese even though you tried to,
Meh no direct personal on jehu so again was irrelevant in this battle
You thought that Sherlock Holmes was a housing project in London,
You talk so much shit... I find half your verses redundant,
Meh...
My words are acrid and pungent...  You won't want to read it,
The Masters is the only time US swinging succeeded...
Nice, like nep said easily your best punch

Overall a VERY weak verse compared to what you can drop, i agree with nep you definetly seemed to half ass this which was pointless...No real hard hitting punches like the ones you are easily caspable of, flow was off in areas.....

Jehu

This is easy; I've seen Mr. Yau come wack
Movie Star? No, but I heard he Chows Young Fat
lol nice opener made me laugh...good hit
Get crossfaded, if you get your every loss graded
We'll see undeveloped 16s, like your broads dated
Not bad
Your punches sacrificed for flow, but wait!
Your audios never flowed on beat, there's no debate
Meh...ur alot better than this
Your run-on sentences on rap, they show your state
Your punches are weak, I'll have you on the ropes today
Meh...ur alot better than this
My writing is cannibalistic, call me Thomas Harris
O ain't Capt, but had to let you battle so you'd be embarrassed
Not bad
P only beat me as a newbie and he hasn't improved
UK's best chance was when O wanted to have him removed
Nice
N00b killer or SP the vet? I've handled them both
You're LA's Joe Budden, something must've stunted your "Growth"
Dope
You no vet, you were drafted but were never deployed
Crew so dead, dudes were shafted and forever destroyed
Not bad
Hate Renegades all you want, but your game is wack
That's why we gave you half your losses, that remains a fact
Nice personal
Even compliments are backhanded, they call me the meanest
You're proof that an idiot can inspire a genius.
Nice

Overall like nep said inconsistent....some hot punches and others that id expect better from you, verse seems rushed but id even expected a rushed verse from you better than this to be honest...flow was on point and had a few nice punches

Overall - Weak battle compared to what i was expecting but jehu took it easily, Senor come really weak compared to how he usually does...Jehu landed more punches

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2007 at 12:18pm

me and the half-sister-in-law. The most beautiful thing in the world. I still don't want kids though...


(don't remember what that was in the hoodie pocket...)

with enough ingenuity, one could've easily found more interesting things to post. I didn't post a pic of my girl cause some have already seen her, the last time someone used that punchline.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 August 2007 at 3:20am
I think usin some one's girl as a punch is fucked up...
 
Agree wit Neppo...hit the nail on the head...
 
SP: Half assed this one...flow was ok, aside from a couple hot lines, there were too many misses in this one...dissappointed me cuz ive always enjoyed reading your verses but this one was a letdown....
 
KJ: Again seems like u rushed and kinda half assed this one...you had the more consistant verse tho...the "half ya losses" line was dope...
 
Vote: King Jehu
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 August 2007 at 9:28pm

i just typed this now i see theres a second page with a third vote. which i think means this isnt needed? but i typed it so live with it :P

senor perfecto

that opener was just nasty..people might debate the legitimacy of it but its still kinda funny how you did it. not so down with this "n*gger" business but ok. front teeth line is hard as well. strong start but you veered off after. french intervention is kinda good, vietnamese not bad haha. taking more general shots at the country towards the end, which is topical and not bad i guess. the verse was ok..but the beginning ended up making the rest a let down

king jehu

chows young fat not bad. that sorta thing could be funny in a smack battle if you say it right sorta thing, yeah not bad. that 16s line is nice, i feel it could flow better and hit harder with different wording tho. i dont have the backstory on this O and P shit youre spitting and you didnt explain it..but you explain it pretty well within the verse even so..and the disses are decent, kinda humiliating sorta shit..i like. growth line is funny haha. the end is less hard disses but still some good lines

i think this is closer than the votes indicate but there were less weak bars from king. though i think senor had a strong enough start to make this pretty close, i think king edges it with better disses

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 August 2007 at 10:44pm
Thanks. 4-0. Can we make this official?

P is perfecto. O is Orion. Orion protested until it was decided that perfecto would be out, then Orion changed his mind cause he figurd perfecto would end up facing me in an "old school LA" type battle. I actually thought the same thing. Put the washed up people in the wack battle, right? I actually don't think this battle was closer than that, but either way, Good verse, P.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 August 2007 at 11:23pm

I dont think you're washed up man, jus havnt battled in ages...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 August 2007 at 12:01pm

Given enough time for us both... this "could" have become a Classic battle...

King Jehu... rusty, definately... but nonetheless a good verse...
 
Vote: King Jehu...
 
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