Audio Mic: shaking off some rust

quick phone recording to shake off some rust. been a minute since I record anything.

For this being what it was, there isnt too much feedback to give but .. It was dope .. Flow was on point, rhymes scheme was almost flawless .. If you work on breath control, the flow would be smoother .. Syllables was on point tho, that was my favorite part about this .. Beat was cool I guess, but I couldnt really hear it .. Then again this was a phone recording so, it's cool for what it is .. Overall dope shit bruh .. If this what you sound like rusty, I wanna hear what you sound like well polished

btw captive, in technicality some of my syllables actually fall inbetween the bars/beats. essentially, I tend utilize the area where more rappers use for breathing, thus me getting a little drawn out at times, also why I stopped and repeated the same line to strat and pick the flow back up. when actually recorded, I can record it in like 4-6 pieces per verse, so that im able to do that. I don't know, just something ive always liked doing

Nah son .. When I said syllables was on point I meant the rhyme scheme .. As you may have heard I do the same thing, not all the syllables hit exactly on point wit the beat, but it keeps them fluid

Just heard it and yep the flow be dope bro, keep slaying.