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Who-Is-You?
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Posted: 10 December 2017 at 4:10am |
Cheeseburger Eddie
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lmao at first I was annoyed because I just wanted you to keep rapping good because the rapping part was solid and when you started talking about breakfast and all the sex it was like... okay... but then I realized what you were doing and what the song was and it was genuinely funny.
Well done. I think the rap parts could have been done a bit better, that might have elevated it a tad, but it's a fine line because if you get too technical I think that takes away from the comedy of it and the song worked for me so I don't know.
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Dntplywelwitothers
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This is a break from the norm,
Digging the beat...it gives off the right vibe for this track, like a "dream sequence" Quite the entertaining listen, and to be honest I dig the story telling aspect... and the plot. Sometymes people forget about this part of hip hop ... the "slick rick" type shit still works. The adlibs are pure comedy. Second verse was prolly the strongest I think. It had the most substance, and your flow was more natural. All in all, It's fuck-wit-able. |
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"My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...."
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Who-Is-You?
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Indeed. thanks for the listen and critique fellas. Much appreciated
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Nigma
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This was tight B. Peeped a couple of your tracks since you been back and you've improved a shit ton since the earlier stuff I heard of. At first your flow stood out to me the most but after the song I felt the strongest element the conceptual structure of it. Felt natural, executed well. This was cool
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Nick Genre
Groupie Joined: 17 November 2015 Location: Fort Myers Status: Offline Points: 66 |
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Mixing needs some work... I like the concept... Lol... You rode the beat nicely... Keep grindin sir
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