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    Posted: 14 January 2018 at 1:28pm

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Adam Done

a.k.a. AlphaOmegaMan

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Shipwrecked

And I had to row back

So know that

Borderline Schizophrenics don't know rap

All you other Elvis impersonators know that

Double Helix a toe tag

Cuttin no slack

When they try to mic Jackn ya Son

So I cuts and run

Histories just begun

When I been banned and removed from Television

I have hell-a-vision

So they brought in a visor

Quantum computers in disguise a a Human

Ancient Aztec Ruins

Check your math for bending spoon

Classes being soon

Cash me out begin the suing

Beaming through the sewers

Through to the Dark side of the Moon

Ghost ride the whip

That keep it moving with

No more air pollution

Just me polluting the air waves

In shooting down institutionalized star gaze-er

Who gets a four-point with no laze-er

This an't a maze no more you just a lame-er

ALPHAOMEGA the straight aim-er


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I have a beat I wrote this to, it is 01:00:00 "one minute." When I perform this, It takes that long. 
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Form: WLWLLL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 January 2018 at 10:53pm
I checked one of your tracks before I think
You played guitar? I remember thinking it was pretty cool
Would be nice to hear this one
I was feeling the wording, it’s reads nice
What it means though I have no clue

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It's about not making it to mars, but having to row back.

I am trying to get a microphone, I usually drop audios.
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Form: WLWLLL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2018 at 9:45pm
Just re read this one Homie
I didn’t see the the Martian ting .... Lol
Seriously bro, I get the swagger and I’m loving that fresh original feel you got going on here
The wording for me was what stood out once again
Real talk I like this kind of written stuff
You should drop more verses, just throw shit out man!
You got a a hot pen atm

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Cool Brother Corrupt.
I am talking about something other things on youtube. I put the pen down for the moment.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCADTWKjeumPivYXYJTF5QQQ/videos?
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I put this one together for you in Audios spume corrupt.
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Form: WWWWLW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Cuba Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 February 2018 at 6:09pm
I kind of liked the flow to it but you were writing like you were driving down a highway shouting out the shit you saw as you drove past it...

A DUMP TRUCK
CATCUS WITH A BUTTERFLY ON
DUST...BUNCH OF DUST
TURTLE SHIT
STINKING PILE OF IT
YELLOW STUFF
IS THAT A HUFFLEPUFF?
MUGGLE BUS
SMUGGLED A BLUNDERBUSS
UNDER A BUNCH OF STUFF
LIKE MY NEW HOCKEY PANTS
A REAL OLD POSTER OF HOLLY VALANCE
EMPTY TOMATO CAN
DIEGO GRAVELIN

Etc. Don't do it is what I'm saying
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Cuba, you say that. And I hear you.
I'd like to know what you think of my most recent endeavors.
I was kind of trying to make it action-packed and short fused. 
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