Open Mic: Slaying Snowflakes - Daydizzle / rhetorical

Wow can't believe I didn't see this earlier,my bad guys I must be tired or some shit..


The professional Vocalists
November: the festival of socialists
The snowflakes with their boastfulness
"Trumps Tone is as atrocious as it gets"
Their emotions get hit
A bunch of puppets to the noble globalists
Trump n the oval office "He a racist"
Baseless attempts at being persuasive
Want a job? Get out your parents basement
your fearing his hatred?

(some nice undertones here Dizzle,I'm feeling the vibe off this segment also,and
the line about snowflakes had some ripe subtle imagery tagging along with it,all
whilst making a valid point of view,i do enjoy me some political satire,(and these
politicians do make it easy),I like how your stating the parody here nice touch..)

Yet protesting an apparent patriot
Supporting a bitch who protected a rapist
The Clinton Foundation is filled with corruption
And for the Emails, it was Trump nd the Russians
You fucking Kids can't handle a simple discussion
Trump wins and your all about destruction
A liberals mindset is wealth reduction
yet the rich pay for 90% of the tax consumption
Aint that something? Liberal logic, im crushing it
Im clinging to my gun you punk bitch
Its IN GOD WE TRUST YOU FUCKING LIBS
A new age is coming with bliss
The illegals are running to the fence

(nice rant this,feel better now?,powerful statement here with truths attached from
your view point,this came off as effortless to read and dripping with vibe,I liked this
segment alot,as the emotion expressed was in the need to be heard,or read in this
case,this for me is some (not all) of your best writing for me,you still have that grit
and in your face style of yours cracking,but here it's impacting better..)

Rushing to get back over the border
Fuck the left and their new world order
Liberalism is a mental disorder
Abortion is placental horror
They support Murder in trimester four
Target allowing Trans through which ever door
If you have a dick, your a man for sure
Im a libertarian Asking Snowflakes for war
Ill stone a flake, there is no place for Social Justice
Fuck Michael Brown, Kate Jenner and homegrown Muslims
an Illegal, Fuck ISIS, This place i call home is Republic
Fuck a mullah, the double standard is troublesome
When the bubble busts, Ill be waiting with my Muzzled Guns

(preach brother man,your contents and aggression have been constant throughout
in this verse,it has come off as hard hitting from start to finish,and with the factual
angles have been a joy to read,plus it was an heart on sleeve affair too,and in a way
a ripe personal insight into you as a person,and to which side of the bread you liked
buttered,a totally ripe read..)


rhetorical..


O.k.

They fabricate lies that Obamacares affordable
You either stand with ‘them’, or your branded ‘deplorable’
Email servers in burn bags aint even searchable
Then attack Russians for hacking your illegal terminals
Lynch and Clinton positioned on a private plane
Sipping champagne with their corrupt driven campaign
Money funneled from the Middle East, a million at least
While these evil beasts feed the Socialists regimes

(damn man give a brother room to cut in,that flow was ripe,I didn't even want to break
it there to be honest,and the intended message was driven home well and true too,
about distraction and conceit nicely done,i felt it,it had harshness blended with truth,
ah the way of the world eh,I must say I'm enjoying this collab..)   

Three Thousand people dead in Chicago City streets
Fake news repeats the same police shooting for weeks
Protests turned looting to movements for sheep
And Social Justice Warriors claim their fighting for peace
Black Lives Matter as long as the agenda gets set
Keep your eye on All Lives while we go further in debt
If you don’t accept it your labeled a bigot or racist
Or just say its White Privilege as they spit in our faces

(Whoa,yep that hits not just the right spot,but all of them,this segment was again
class,loving the content/Concept and the live statement you set aswell,this had
some nice infusion of emotion in the way of spit and racist,tools that are degrading,
and meant to belittle and show vulgar power,nice..)


We invade their space? When liberals bend the laws
Got trans-MEN pissing next to little Jen in the stalls
Now children can’t even say the pledge in the halls
Without getting suspended or parents getting a call
Fuck you all. . its time we took this country back
Politically correct? (pfffff) you can kiss my dirty ass crack
Clinton commits perjury but Trump don’t have the “temperament”
Libs rally men and women to ban our second amendment
Meanwhile the borders are left opened or unattended
While Muslim extremist plot their next fuckin Nine Eleven
Ill never be a victim or bow to you snakes
Or sell my own values to appease you snow flakes
You’ll never take my guns or my love for this fucking land
United we stand
UNITED. . we'll Make America Great Again

(I liked the twist on words in this closing segment,in fact throughout really,your flow/everything has been on point,like Dizzle's your point of view is also on the
same wavelength,which just feeds overall a harder hitting collab,your a skilled writer,and here is the evident of that,a tremendous read here that caught me like
a fish on a hook,I really did get pleasure here..)

Overall SOLID,nuff said..peace.

Aight this was a pretty refreshing read. I suppose these views represent the silent majority that got Trump elected. Personally I don't find these very offensive, much of this it is just common sense if you have the audacity to think outside the media narrative. So I'm all for critizing anything or anyone really, let freedom of speech be free and all that. 

So, this was an interesting read, especially because of the different approach both of you displayed here.

Dizzle -
I liked the schemes here, the transitions seemed effortless at some spaces. And I generally enjoy your rather short bar approach. I feel like it's getting smoother with every verse you post, which is nice to see. For the content, well, it's good to see you expressing your opinion. I thought the very direct approach you went for here matched everything quite nicely.

Rhetorical -

Although obviously very similar in content, I thought your part was quite different in terms of concept execution. Especially your first few bars set the tone in a more descriptive and less aggressive way, compared to Dizzle. I enjoyed the schemes and subtle switch ups more in this part, it had a tone of naturalness to it, which I appreciate.

While I don't necessarily agree with the majority of the lines you formulated, I appreciate the value those lines carry for you. Interesting collab.