Open Mic: sliding str8 of the fuckin slopes

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    Posted: 12 February 2018 at 11:05pm
I’m sliding str8 of the fuckin slopes
Think Winter Olympics 
Go pressing the button
Providing the most 
Sinister digits 
So the best is coming 
Blessed eruptions 
I’ll be your Kim on some mischief 
Angle bringing ridiculous
All gold
Like the bling on my wrist is
Now fold! As I tell
you pussies I love ya
Reload and snub ya
Before I sing it to bitches 
What’s the time?
Fuck off!!!!!!! I’m above ya.....
with anything like scriptures

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this had good flow. Short but as we all knoe..... La dead as fuck
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Yeah agreed the flow was slick here,i also liked the structure too,i found this intriguing really,i was at first trying to decrypt it looking for hidden meanings,it pulls a reader in,
then i realised this was a selfhype piece,which had a subtle vibe cracking,(hence why
I didn't spot it straight away),i guess short and sweet rings true here,i liked it,it was
quirky and quaint,and i also agree its been spookily quite in LA of late
"Life Is A Form Of Animated Death"...R.I.P..Poetic/Gravediggaz.
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