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    Posted: 29 September 2018 at 9:18pm

Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Listen bitch boy go get KO'd again and leave the adults to talk. no one needs nor wants your input.

LMAO & here you are responding to MY input... 


WHO THE FUCK WOKE THIS GUY OUT THE CASKET I LEFT HIM IN???



Warning shots
Le'go
Im a monster, beast, a savage W/beef wen Im rappin
Call ur self 'SmoothTung' on a site W/guys - must be a faggot
All the tough talk & site growth? got me laughin
only Growth U should worry bout is Ur kids & how their raised by an Addict!
Trust Im ecstatic to give U this static & slap kid
scum bag was stuck in a hole for years after my last diss
Just up an gone..Poof'd into dust like magic
Like ur family members after they found out U were taking crack hits
SORRY BRO!
I got stress built up so its right to fear kid
Ironic you hungry for feed, wen U should Feel Full From biting lyrics!
is there Muscle behind ur bars, or U emotional? Guys the weirdest
I'll see u the dope if its ur last push & send your mother my Dearest!
Fa'real, shit, Thought U knew better to be fuckin W/Beans
Ur kids'll be married and pass before this punk'll get clean
Poke me's like poking a vein, <-- Sumthin that run in ur genes
Kill U like cancer, while U scream how Herions a fuckin disease!
Fuckin punk, Needle in my hand'll puncture ur splean
Shouldnt have a appetite to be fuckin W/Beans
I'll Gas U up after Im done punchin the dweeb
Ur verses hold as much weight as a Zin battle...Theres jus nothin to see
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I liked this and can verify you wrote it.


nobody says punching this dweeb more than beans..this is just facts. google it. its iron clad his calling card.


nice warning tho.
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Dude you know this was slick as hell punch wise, you've got your wording fucking down pat. Idk what was going on with the TRD battle but you're wording is a lot meaner here. You're not reaching on your plays, their nice concise and precise.

Remembering personals from a while back is dope af. I like real beef not that candy ass name flip shit.
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Good stuff. The personals were hard. Yea I'm a junkie. Yeah I bit in the past. I dont want it with you or anyone. Just came to do my thing in the OM and keep it movin. Stay blessed.

Edited by Smoothtung - 29 September 2018 at 10:36pm
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Guess he got the warning
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Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Good stuff. The personals were hard. Yea I'm a junkie. Yeah I bit in the past. I dont want it with you or anyone. Just came to do my thing in the OM and keep it movin. Stay blessed.

Bruh you ain't even that great of a junkie. Werrd
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Diz back off the junkie jokes. I ain't done nothing to you. Don't disrespect me. And don't disrespect the people ive lost. I live with this everyday. I'm writing this from a shelter in nh right now. I ain't some name on a screen. I come here, give feedback, and i drop what I write. I didn't come back to cause waves. I said that it would be better for the site if it was used to write more than it was used to talk about drama, the dude didn't like it so he came out of the side of his neck at me. Whatever. But I ain't gna get into this beefing thing with half the site. Y'all are lining up to grab your pitchforks and crosses right now. That ain't what I'm here for. Writing is a good outlet when life gets tough and this is where I drop it. That's it. Y'all can hate me if you want but allow me to do my thing. Stay up.

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Originally posted by Neek Neek wrote:

I liked this and can verify you wrote it.


nobody says punching this dweeb more than beans..this is just facts. google it. its iron clad his calling card.


nice warning tho.


I’m so glad you could stomach this
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Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Diz back off the junkie jokes. I ain't done nothing to you. Don't disrespect me. And don't disrespect the people ive lost. I live with this everyday. I'm writing this from a shelter in nh right now. I ain't some name on a screen. I come here, give feedback, and i drop what I write. I didn't come back to cause waves. I said that it would be better for the site if it was used to write more than it was used to talk about drama, the dude didn't like it so he came out of the side of his neck at me. Whatever. But I ain't gna get into this beefing thing with half the site. Y'all are lining up to grab your pitchforks and crosses right now. That ain't what I'm here for. Writing is a good outlet when life gets tough and this is where I drop it. That's it. Y'all can hate me if you want but allow me to do my thing. Stay up.



I hope you get well...
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Originally posted by Beans Beans wrote:

Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Diz back off the junkie jokes. I ain't done nothing to you. Don't disrespect me. And don't disrespect the people ive lost. I live with this everyday. I'm writing this from a shelter in nh right now. I ain't some name on a screen. I come here, give feedback, and i drop what I write. I didn't come back to cause waves. I said that it would be better for the site if it was used to write more than it was used to talk about drama, the dude didn't like it so he came out of the side of his neck at me. Whatever. But I ain't gna get into this beefing thing with half the site. Y'all are lining up to grab your pitchforks and crosses right now. That ain't what I'm here for. Writing is a good outlet when life gets tough and this is where I drop it. That's it. Y'all can hate me if you want but allow me to do my thing. Stay up.



I hope you get well...


You took that the wrong way and if you knew some background you'd understand why I made that comment. It's ok brother. Relax
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Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Diz back off the junkie jokes. I ain't done nothing to you. Don't disrespect me. And don't disrespect the people ive lost. I live with this everyday. I'm writing this from a shelter in nh right now. I ain't some name on a screen. I come here, give feedback, and i drop what I write. I didn't come back to cause waves. I said that it would be better for the site if it was used to write more than it was used to talk about drama, the dude didn't like it so he came out of the side of his neck at me. Whatever. But I ain't gna get into this beefing thing with half the site. Y'all are lining up to grab your pitchforks and crosses right now. That ain't what I'm here for. Writing is a good outlet when life gets tough and this is where I drop it. That's it. Y'all can hate me if you want but allow me to do my thing. Stay up.


You're feeding a self proclaimed low vibrational life form.
Don't ever do that again.

Peace.
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Damn Beans why you be on it like that,this was cold mean and to be honest kind of
brutal,in essence this is what a real diss should be,not pitta patta matter as we nor-
mally read,but up in your face feel that ish punk like here, i found myself thinking
damn on reading,this was drawn from factual content which made this so prono-
unced,this was straight fire man,that must of hurt because it got a reply from him.
ripe diss...peace.
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Yep, each punchline here really does punch.. Feels too brutal to be a warning shot.. It's like if a warning shot feels like a Sniper Rifle, a full-on attack must be a barrage of rockets.

Compared to the battle verse I fed, there's a mile of difference. Took more steps to improve than a recovering junkie! Sorry, I just had to make that pun.

Quit nit-pick. Not gonna spend a whole para' critiquing this because it doesn't need that, but avoid repetition please. Seeing 'fūçkïñg w/ Beans' twice really took the impact away from it.

Other than that, this is a perfect example of what a diss should be like.
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Originally posted by daydizzle89 daydizzle89 wrote:

Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Good stuff. The personals were hard. Yea I'm a junkie. Yeah I bit in the past. I dont want it with you or anyone. Just came to do my thing in the OM and keep it movin. Stay blessed.


Bruh you ain't even that great of a junkie. Werrd



Looks like we might have ourselves a good old fashioned junkie off

Jeffrey’s at the ready, lean back
Go
First one to OD wins free drugs for life
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Str8 up with that bully tactics man, you had some clean shots of heron my brother
You could’a done better though fam! I just did and still binned it
You know I love you ya bum, settle down and kill some cunt soon
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Originally posted by spume corrupt spume corrupt wrote:

Originally posted by daydizzle89 daydizzle89 wrote:

Originally posted by Smoothtung Smoothtung wrote:

Good stuff. The personals were hard. Yea I'm a junkie. Yeah I bit in the past. I dont want it with you or anyone. Just came to do my thing in the OM and keep it movin. Stay blessed.


Bruh you ain't even that great of a junkie. Werrd



Looks like we might have ourselves a good old fashioned junkie off

Jeffrey’s at the ready, lean back
Go
First one to OD wins free drugs for life
Beans
Str8 up with that bully tactics man, you had some clean shots of heron my brother
You could’a done better though fam! I just did and still binned it
You know I love you ya bum, settle down and kill some cunt soon
Respect



Thanks for the feed y’all.
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Ironic you hungry for feed, wen U should Feel Full From biting lyrics!
is there Muscle behind ur bars, or U emotional? Guys the weirdest
I'll see u the dope if its ur last push & send your mother my Dearest!
Fa'real, shit, Thought U knew better to be fuckin W/Beans
Ur kids'll be married and pass before this punk'll get clean

^^^^^^^^^......... this part was filthy...

Real hard diss here Beans, good to see you slaying the competition still bro...

Interesting stuff throughout this, strong plays bar after bar..
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Damn Gina you reallu dissed this fool hard with your peace... These punches we're fucking beast and personal as fuck. However I can understand where smooth is coming from when it pertains to that kind of shit because of the beef I had with DJ flame mentioning my mom as a diss during a battle 

That being however you went harder then the paint in this fucking drop and body bagged this fool sick as fuck 
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