Audio Mic: Somethings up(full)

lol my boy barry... second verse is better then the first... just the fact that your putting effort into this man is great... like I always say your getting better man... and taking ownership of your craft....  keep up the effort man... props to you on this one

YEah this is a huge improvement again. You sound a lot more collected now. It just needs more style man. You still sound hesitant over the beat, but you'll get more natural the more you do it. The lyrics are fit much better over the beat here and Ransom's right, the second was better than the first. Good job man. Keep working. I'd also suggest rather than always recording the same song, write a new one and move on. Even if a song isn't stunning, it's a step in the ladder. Spitting over lots of different beats will be better than constantly spitting over the same one and you'll get more fluid quicker that way.

i def thought the second verse was dope as hell something about the beat and the whole attitude u brought jus sounded dope. I notice your trying to switch ur voice and stay entertaining throughout which is a plus. I think it would be better if u remembered it and then spit it from your head bc then u wouldnt have the distraction of trying to read as u go along. This was indeed an improvement and ill check out the rest of your work as u post.