Open Mic: Sporadic Thoughts (Keystyle)

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   Crazy with rhymes I rhyme words I'm not meant to
Y'all cringe when I rhyme porridge with orange 
You scream I can't rhyme it with door hinge
Appalling at how y'all are close minded
When I spit it's like the blind badly guided
I choke minors and their minders
Got blades in my hat like the Peaky Blinders
You can't sneak and find us I lie under radar
Takin out them who don't know where they are
I'll show you the Art of War like Sun Tzu
I come through with rhymes more gold than silver
I pilfer the words from the dictionary
I don't make 'em up I can't think of any
I'm a terrorist of verbs higher than any herb
Imma break your jaw without you biting the kerb
I'm brighter than electrified tungsten
All my rage and anger I keep it locked in the dungeon
Someone can't make me reconsider decisions
Writing the first line is like a surgeon making the first incision
I just speak my thoughts I got no filter

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Shankley Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Shankley Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Sporadic Thoughts (Keystyle) Posted: 27 October 2014 at 9:24pm
	Crazy with rhymes I rhyme words I'm not meant to Y'all cringe when I rhyme porridge with orange You scream I can't rhyme it with door hinge Appalling at how y'all are close minded When I spit it's like the blind badly guided I choke minors and their minders Got blades in my hat like the Peaky Blinders You can't sneak and find us I lie under radar Takin out them who don't know where they are I'll show you the Art of War like Sun Tzu I come through with rhymes more gold than silver I pilfer the words from the dictionary I don't make 'em up I can't think of any I'm a terrorist of verbs higher than any herb Imma break your jaw without you biting the kerb I'm brighter than electrified tungsten All my rage and anger I keep it locked in the dungeon Someone can't make me reconsider decisions Writing the first line is like a surgeon making the first incision I just speak my thoughts I got no filter
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daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 October 2014 at 10:05pm
	Like this style. Some areas didnt hit rhymes well. Still not bad for a quick key.

FCbritain Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 29 October 2014 Status: Offline Points: 12	Post Options Post Reply Quote FCbritain Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 October 2014 at 3:12pm
	Nonsense

Point Blank Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Point Blank Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 October 2014 at 7:45pm
	In comparison to your drops 3-4 months ago this piece is an awful lot better on a lot of different levels - multies, transitional rhymes, flow, content. I was just saying to nomedic how much he has improved and the same applies to you, it's good to see, and from this point you can only get better. Keep it up Shanks

Elite Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 16 February 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 3340 Crew: eNtiTy Audio Rank: #3 Stats: 5-0-0 Form: WWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Elite Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 01 November 2014 at 1:58am
	this was aight, you should try using more multis and internals tho, hey help flow smoother and help you transition thru bars easier. all in all this was some decent shit man, def a step up from your older shit.