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    Posted: 20 July 2010 at 6:25pm

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Kiki Spirez Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 July 2010 at 4:10pm
Your wording is top stuff-
 
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Audio Form: L 		Post Options Post Options   Quote Cuba Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 July 2010 at 7:47pm
Thought I'd commented before...t'was a mind battering of rhythm
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Post Options Post Options   Quote J504 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 July 2010 at 9:43pm
Some of the lines work, others need punctuation or other words in order to make it work.
 
agreed?
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Kosmosis Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 July 2010 at 11:50pm
yea...i kinda just wanted to show the flow....ya know?
 
 
 
 
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Manc Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 July 2010 at 11:52pm
Yea I see how ya did this to show the flow - and you got the right idea. Some of the words don't roll off the tongue too well but as you did this to show flow and multi usage - it worked nicely

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Kosmosis Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 July 2010 at 11:54pm
honestly j5 and manc..i am trying something rather ambitious:
 
a new level of multis which literally is impossible for the brain to register the first couple of times around...kinda like a toungue twister, or just a sickly flow where every word rhymes and yet still makes sense...yall dig>?
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Manc Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 July 2010 at 12:13am
Yea I "dig" - but isn't it a little judgemental to assume it wouldn't "register" on the first read??
 
I know exactly what you were going for and to refresh your memory if I may - I AM one of the ONLY people on this forum that understands your style enough to appreciate your skills, as you already know.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Post Options Post Options   Quote J504 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 July 2010 at 12:16am

I interested to see what you can do with it.  I like that you're trying to take something to the next level. What you think about something kinda like this:

 
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Kosmosis Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 July 2010 at 12:35am
Blast Radius expanding General commanding understanding
punches landing spanning solar standing planning planet grabbing
 
 
see the second line of this is far more difficult to say, but if one tries they will and it sounds sick...but notice how the brain struggles with it initially...at least mine does..
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