Open Mic: "Stylin' On'em" - Trizzy Tre/Various LA artists |
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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 8:20pm |
Stylin' On'em - Trizzy Tre ft. CHAIN, Cuba, The Law, Brotha Goose, and Stalin
“We be the sickest, so we stylin’ on these bitches…”
Trizzy Tre Orchestrate my hate for feeble mc’s lack in penmanship… Planned vengeance shit so here’s my grand entrance bitch!! Ya’ll sensitive to my personal style, the way I slay assorted kids... Shots? Of course it hits, n turn lively crews into an orphanage! Killing a dying breed, no hide n seek from a barbarian’s pure defiance… Punches holdin weight of earth, wind n fire higher than the perfect science! Verse’s timeless! Run up on LA like the site is mine in optimal time… They searching for skillz like ‘Autobots’ in threads when I’m Optimums Prime! CHAIN The Law Go on.. Step into my uni-verse and take these shots.. Get a Dosage of Me My "Back to Back Punchlines" has "eyes rolling back" like 'star wars' Opening Scenes I'm Ruthless to every death in your family and imperfection of your Dignity I'll use it... Viciously, 'Dying Instantly' is your only Presence of Sympathy Using wordplay as my instrument to 'Trump' all you Damn Faggots 'Point never needed to string vm's base together' for ya'll to Jump on my Bandwagon Drumroll....... My flows flawless, a raw shine when I write, the finest, my bars a biological science In the ring, Ya'll haven't even 'scratched the surface' on this 'uncut diabolical diamond' Cuba Brotha Goose Its startin to show that im Progressive with Flo, Stalin My mind disperses rhymes in curses til ya lines is worthless |
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levy420
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This shit was dope to many quality punches to quote trizz opened up strong n set the tone n each mc fallowed wit heat stalin was a nice way to cap tjis off great drop guys
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Trizzy Tre
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thanks for the feed levy....
I think everyone on this collabo put heat down. good shit fellas.
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The Law
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I Lol'd @ at the 'scripting to bc' line by cuba.. really nice Definitely a dope drop here.. I enjoyed each of your guys verses.. Glad I got to be a part of this. |
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Point Blank
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Interesting combination of people on this which was refreshing...
You all did your own thing and this turned out nice. Good work |
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Trizzy Tre
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yea PB I was tryin something different here, more people with shorter barz.
Plus not just using crew to collabo wit either. Brotha Goose hit me up wanting to do something and me and Chain had a few talks about doing something too. So I figured lets all jump on something.
I like to see a bunch of dudes takes on a certain idea and then seeing them drop their barz.
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Brotha Goose
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This came out real nice, props to all involved.
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Proctologist
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Good job fellas dope ish...
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Dougysnuggy
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Yeah, Chain... You're a dick,bro! :p jp. Nice verse. I liked the play persay, with the p's. killed it.. Anyway, Trizzy your verse was average from you. Nothing to get hyped over and lose "control" get it? .. Stalin, I liked your verse at the beginning, it fell off towards the end, but hey. Nice multis in there. Law you had some nice word play in there, always a good read from you. Cuba, nice verse from you, I liked the first bar, all of it was dope though, constructed real well. goose, you had a rather unique verse. I liked it, but the end of it fell off imo. But you all came strong in this. I would've enjoyed it if it was longer. I think people on here need to do more audios.
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Trizzy Tre
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Thanks for the feed fellas...
Yea goose I think everyone did a nice job here
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U.N.L.M.
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Trizzy: You set the pace for the collab by opening it out. I like the aggression and that closer was real nice.
Chain: haha @ word to my prostrate. Really like the smoothness of the pardon the bravado and product placements line. Overall, it just seemed effortless from you. Dope as usual. The Law: Nice opener, and thought the bandwagon line was well constructed as well. Keep it up. Cuba: I thought this verse was really well done. The BC line was ill. I liked how each concept lead to the next. Brotha Goose: haha @ neurotic staplers. Good idea. Nice closer as well. Good verse. Stalin: Nice rhymes and verse overall. Really loved: My kindest words could silence more kids than violent wars did. Good drop guys, always good to see a collab with so many different people.
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JBrenn
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Many quotable lines here. I was feeling the combo drop. The flows all complimented each other. I really liked Cubas and stalins drops. But every mc had a bar I could put down as a quotable.
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CHAIN
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I told you to get your act together first...or you could just hit me up with a good concept. Be a boss and direct the movie. Shout out to Trizzy for letting me be a part of this, lol. Everybody gave it their best business. Stalin killed it. No disrespect to the team but cuba had the best verse lol |
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-Que-
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Almost missed this.
Yall came together on this nicely. Each verse held its own merit. Goose...Good to see you with seasoned writers. Cuba...Good attention to detail on crafting every one of your bars to link up into one massive concept...skill. Stal....lol....this is when you flow the best....when you hit'em back to back with those classic multis. Law...as always deep ideas. Trizzy....good collabo idea. Props yall! |
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-Que-
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Oh snap....I forgot a verse....Chain...as always unchallenged channeled focus....We should get a futuristic collab jumpin off one of these days. Let me know if you got some ideas...I would like to feed off of your energy......its been long enough. Time for a Chain Que creation.
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CHAIN
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I got you...Im on it
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Trizzy Tre
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Thanks for the breakdown feed que...props for checking this out.
Yea chain no doubt everyone did they thing. Cuba your verse was dope I gotta say. Lol A site wide collabo would be pretty sick if we were able to do it. Not totally sure how it would work but was thinking about that too... |
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spume corrupt
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Ya’ll sensitive to my personal style, the way I slay assorted kids... Shots? Of course it hits, n turn lively crews into an orphanage!
Toke Baggins they large my Ha-bbit Flo-though, makin'em think.
The fires scorchin inside the verses of the one ud like to worship "Wrapped up nicely Stalin"
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Manc
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Nice collab lads. Nice opening 2 bars Trizz. Chain n Stal killed it. Law did too. Sorry for the short feed. I'm limited on activity for the moment so can't drop an extensive opinion. Works relentless at the minute.
Good job to all. Enjoyed the read. |
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Trizzy Tre
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hey hey hey....it's all in good fun
Thanks for the feed spume and manc. props for checkin this out
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