Open Mic: Superiority Complex

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   There's a hater in the midst but I ain't fearing the God-sent 
'Coz I'm centerstage on the throne, now here on the top bench
And no can take me off and wipe me out, no steering me off-set
'Coz I leave a 'benchmark' forever, no inferior's got shit
To see out my demonic vision, it's clearer than Loch Ness 
That you think I'm a myth and I'm merely a jock fest/
Of a man... The only problem I fucking have
Is you not understanding me 'coz this superior's complex! 
I've got this rap biz all chained, it's my criminal
I own the killer lyricals, and you claim I'm a dick
Well I'll fuck you up, and I'm basically sick
Not a wanker's ball game, you're just raised to the stick
And I don't mean getting aroused staring gay at this lick 
Man, I'm blazing this quick, my most crazy of tricks
To get as dangerous with words as actually slaying you kids
Enslaving ya, my tactic-all changed now see I'm a jack of all trades!  
And you can't just steal that, you'll be lost in my vision
You can admire this fire but don't get crossed in the mission
'Coz to aspire to a higher power will leave you off in the distance
Trynna blow up looking up to me is some dodgy religion
'Coz you'll die trying, another suicide bomber is missing 
My strength's not deadweight... 
But carrying that burden will put a stop to you living
'Coz I don't give cheaply, get cut off with ya wisdom
'Coz even my freestyles have a higher cost than ya writtens!

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The Rap Daemon Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 05 August 2015 Location: Purgatory Status: Offline Points: 1108 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-14-0 Form: LWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote The Rap Daemon Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Superiority Complex Posted: 22 March 2018 at 1:30am
	There's a hater in the midst but I ain't fearing the God-sent 'Coz I'm centerstage on the throne, now here on the top bench And no can take me off and wipe me out, no steering me off-set 'Coz I leave a 'benchmark' forever, no inferior's got shit To see out my demonic vision, it's clearer than Loch Ness That you think I'm a myth and I'm merely a jock fest/ Of a man... The only problem I fucking have Is you not understanding me 'coz this superior's complex! I've got this rap biz all chained, it's my criminal I own the killer lyricals, and you claim I'm a dick Well I'll fuck you up, and I'm basically sick Not a wanker's ball game, you're just raised to the stick And I don't mean getting aroused staring gay at this lick Man, I'm blazing this quick, my most crazy of tricks To get as dangerous with words as actually slaying you kids Enslaving ya, my tactic-all changed now see I'm a jack of all trades! And you can't just steal that, you'll be lost in my vision You can admire this fire but don't get crossed in the mission 'Coz to aspire to a higher power will leave you off in the distance Trynna blow up looking up to me is some dodgy religion 'Coz you'll die trying, another suicide bomber is missing My strength's not deadweight... But carrying that burden will put a stop to you living 'Coz I don't give cheaply, get cut off with ya wisdom 'Coz even my freestyles have a higher cost than ya writtens!
	Faggot

Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 23 March 2018 at 12:13am
	Yep this'll work,on the whole i liked it,it was basic via rhyme scheme, and a few multi's syllables or inner rhymes would of lifted this verse up greatly i feel,but with that typed it still hit the spot overall,and the title was i thought enticing too, and via the title i must add,that i did expect a more complex/cleverer piece to digest,not that this drop didn't have its moments,just not enough of them,still it was worth the read,and worth 5 minutes of anybody's time..peace.
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