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Brotha Goose 
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 Topic: SYN BRAVADO Feat. Titu&ConcretePosted: 16 January 2014 at 4:47pm |
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TITU... T is filled with the phrases of destruction,so brutal drops.. my voice stay spillin' skills of being ill with the vocal cords, So mess with The boss and get lost while i focal block,, Then brainwash yo built in still born thoughts like the holly talks, Syns were already holdin'- all the heat,we atomic bombs, How these bitches gon survive the addition of Chronic Con, Immortal forms of mortal beings,im topped with the writing skills, Which gon melt yo nervous system more faster than dieting pills, No Ice can cool T - I wont buckle the trigger, Ill leave yall boozy from the punches like my knuckles are liquor, Yall can't catch my level if you could manage an upwards run, T is dad of the devil..if Big L was a devil's son, I'm leaving punks stunned as my tongue stay spittin' puns, With the flow more tighter than the pussy of nuns, Knowledge himself acknowledged the vocab intense me, I drop verses like Sickle cells,an instant kill of infantries, Intensity of the heat that T emits when he speaks, Is enough to deform the theory of relativity, I dont need yo 5 stars to honour my drops, Bitch! Im S Y N, its synonym for props, CONCRETE.... attention, wenches Enter the Henchman screaming fiends - I feel it all tension releasing savage senses seizing I need to represent the team while still a sentient being resentment is mostly driven by repentance I'm not giving more or less moral-less colder bets massacre your family with no regrets drop a punchline about the gory mess and that's just to make you more upset I deplore the set noobs claims skills blooming into all those awesome things a distinct scent is perfuming fresh-pussy-bouquets blossoming and that's supposed to be promosing? see, the difference is Syn wreck hindrances express shit brilliantly you flex ignorant shit signaling less dilligence meditate on nothingness, good ridance bitch let it harmonize with your own insignificance cause The SYN reps BRILLIANCE: pull destruction like towing trucks we'll go in rough to blow the spot foes are going soft, blowing cocks n say our "flow is off" - no it's not u boring fucks we called your bluff stop soulless drops, focus thoughts u atrocious joke-of-a-poser locust take notice of the coldest boldness exposing hopeless bogus hocus pocus this dope is closest to magnum opus bad-ass poems, the blackest omens u slacker poets lack the knowlegde we're attacking flawless, bond to rule Syndicate constantly stomping fools n it's the cold truth, ask my brother Gooooooooooooooooooooooooose BRO GOOSE..... If you're a beast then I am a matador Red satin sheets guess im fuck'n a spanish whore Im lavish more, I ravage cuz my passion's floored And You cud gather retorts, but can't fathom the damage enforced Dude's laugh at my battle score, but can't ignore, the scorched earth I give birth to drops that scatter cores If it's yur last resort, go ahead and pop off till yur cap is sore I'll catch ya candid galore, serve'n diss on a dish you hold yur hand out for more! But I regress.... Noobs give'n me stress test I've Been blessed.... So many boobs in fresh dress Can I assume It's gonna less the progress? Til I wreck'em a Pro Mess! I promise... No promethazine Just a gangsta profected lean A mean machine I confess this the 213 So who's lips pressed Said they was mess' n with me? The Real BG Close as you'll get to G.O.D Dudes trip like they spit'n Peyote So my rhymes say blow me It's go time Im hunt'n wild coyote No rewind come son'n so mind the flow G Don't procrastinate Bust out... Like the Show Me state Get loud... Watch my foes get raped Ya got a souless flow While I illuminate Fly cuz I elevate the guy to sky scrape Too high to navigate No thigh tights, No magic cape! |
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Nigma
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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 4:59pm |
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Have yet to read this but I felt the need to inform you that it is shaped like a giant dick. I will return at a later date with something more useful.
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Concrete
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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 5:51pm |
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Haha, you're right. That's prolly BG giving a subliminal message sayin we're going to FUCK everybody, lyrically I presume.
Anyways, looking forward to it Nigma. Titu n BG: Nice drops fellas.
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U.N.L.M.
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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 5:52pm |
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Titu: Grammar/language issues in that first half of your verse..I'll point out a few..."more faster": no need for more there..."so brutal drops" is awkward as is "focal block"...Don't get caught up in rhymes so much that it affects your wording/grammar...It throws me off cause I have to re-read and correct...I give you major props for being able to write pretty well in a second language, but I gotta mention the fact that it does lessen your lines...also, I have to mention that the second half of your verse was considerably better in both wording/grammar/etc so I don't know if you rushed the first half or something...The Big L line was cool, liked the sickle cell line...pussy of nuns is a bit played, but I really liked the second half of your verse...but I think your first half needed some proofreading/rewriting...
Concrete: I'm gonna be biased here cause I'm a fan of your writing...the alliteration (savage senses seizing) and the similar sounding words really make your verses cool to read...thought this set was tight as hell: more or less moral-less colder bets massacre your family with no regrets drop a punchline about the gory mess and that's just to make you more upset A real quality drop here... BG: I thought the structure/rhymes of the second set of your verse was pretty nice...The first set was good, no doubt, but I thought the multies/rhymes in the second half were on point and I really like the closer... Good collab guys...
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Titu
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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 5:55pm |
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Haha yeh that dick gon fuck the haters up. thanks,con bro. Props to you too. Good drops by both of you guys. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 5:57pm |
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Thanks for the feed, unLm. Really appreciate that.
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 8:30pm |
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Thx fellas
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IZIAH
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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 8:38pm |
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good shiiit. this was cool. liked the concept guys! flow was sick, overall this shit was nice... fresh!
good job, and stay up SYN! |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 2:41am |
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Thx IZ....when do you plan on get'n a verse in for a collab? Lol
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 4:34am |
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dope shit, nicely written flow was sick, this was a nice piece.
Stay up guys
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 4:48am |
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titu - nice detail, multies are off though..don't quite rhyme well in spots, flow is choppy at times, but you have some good wording here tbh, this what ur battle bars should look like wording wise imo, just fix the slant multies u reached on vocal cord/focal block/brutal chops but i did like ur verse the most
Concrete - Flow is dope, just lack detail due to such super short bars bro..besides that it was a breeze to read through like it, just wish you added more length and imagery to ur lines a bit. Shorter lines always sacrifice detail/imagery. also got basic with alot of the rhyme schemes and some lines weren't very thought provoking such as this the hocus pocus bit ehh "exposing hopeless bogus hocus pocus this dope is closest to magnum opus " Bro goose- liked ur flow its as good as concretes with more detail/imagery, better multie scheme than titty mans, but not as good in the wording but still nicely done, yet u did force a few things such as this part the multi here But I regress.... Noobs give'n me stress test <-- doesn't sound natural I've Been blessed.... So many boobs in fresh dress this was a nice read here
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 12:21pm |
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Thx y'all'
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 4:08pm |
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Well done
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 18 January 2014 at 3:09pm |
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Gud looks fellas
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Concrete
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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 4:08pm |
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Yeah BG, you def brought the FUNK in this.
If you're a beast
then I am a matador Red satin sheets guess im fuck'n a spanish whore |
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IZIAH
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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 2:50am |
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@goose.
idk man, i'll try when i can, talk to u on Fb about it,
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