Battlefield: T2T Semi-final: spume corrupt vs AshleyKaos

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    Posted: 13 December 2020 at 11:13pm
The 2020 Tournament

Semi-final: Text (standard rules)

spume corrupt vs AshleyKaos

Verses are to be 8 bars or 16 lines in length.

Battlers have 14 days from now to write their bars.

If there are no decisive votes on the battle after 7 days once the verse is posted, then I will vote in an unbiased manner and decide on the winner to continue to the next round.

If a battler ducks, due to timeframes being accurately adhered to, if it quacks like a duck and walks like a duck, I'll be calling it a duck.

If you don't both check in then your battle will be discontinued and parties that check-in will progress to successive rounds but parties that fail to check-in will be disqualified.

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Stop "LI"in, bitch got this shit twisted like scoliosis
Snap LA'S spine in half easy like it got osteoporosis !
Light as a feather, sting like R-K-B, call me the next ALI
Already won cuz the KO in bloodlines made his extinct...
British Opp, jihaddi john aggresive coming towards me 
USA revenge, behead him now he's spumin like James Foley !
Identity theft"s a crime, stop pretendin you can flow 
Only see spume with bars if he violatin penal codes
Strange he talk's big game actin hard on the internet 
But in battle his punches just static that cant connect 
Your entire krew cant rap shit, we all knew that 
Thats why your lame ass became the king of wack
Lil Fag's cherry popped, he's developed great head game 
No lyricist, pure lame, only incorporates tongue suckin dick for spare change !
Havin Flashbacks? PTSD patient only label thats associated with your name sake 
Now 2 titles been ripped away from spume like a virgin getting Date Raped !.....

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Bringing blades, leaving this joke with a gashed throat and open wrists
When it comes to spilling blood I’ll back/slash Kaos and soaK the bitch
You bout to know her hopeless script is fuckin shit when the votes begin
We gone see Ashley disappear from the screen like she’s an Olsen twin
Underweight, got me feeling like an arsonist the way I’m managing lighter
Corrupt handles and fires AK with more confidence than a Taliban fighter
Number 1 female Mc till you die! Kill you now cos I’m bringing the horror
Dead cunt gotta believe that ain’t some B/S that could be written tomorrow
You’re never gonna be fly! That’s the murderous news in this verbal abuse
Word 2 goose jumped out ya troupe, now Syndicates only bird is a moose
Your ugly avy the proof, no need to talk about the break up of ya crew bitch
Saw the pic and knew I couldn’t mess up ya look cos ya make up beat me to it
So I’m kicking you in the cunt a hundred times, fuck up your Fallopian tubes
Do the world a favour, make sure no one ever born as fuckin hopeless as you
Rocking you out, body slammed so hard you’ll think your living in a mosh pit
Fronting on Ash with this W so cleanly it’s like I’m giving you a wash bitch

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AK//

Opener was solid, a mouthful but solid.
LI wordplay, and the spine play was clean.

The mo Ali play was forced and a miss for me.

Again wasn’t feeling the terrorist play.

The Identity set up was nice but the punchline fell flat.

Big game bar was amateur. Nuff said.

Krew bar was a light dig. You’ve basically just said his crew can’t rap and he’s the best of the Wack. Nothing hard hitting.

I liked the structure and flow in the cherry popped bar but again nothing serious here.

Closer was solid, set up was a tad stretched but the punch was quality and clever.

Overall// Your opener and closer was good but everything in between was not. A shame because I think if all your bars were thought out as well as them two then there was real promise.

SC//

The multie flowed well and the aggression was there but felt a little generic.

Second bar was dope and the Olsen punchline was nice.

The set up of your third bar seemed a bit redundant but the play for the punchline was solid.

Fourth bar was wack.

Fifth was average but I enjoyed the flow of it.

Sixth bar was poor again and what punch was there just didn’t read right.

Seventh was better, set up nicely for the punch.

Closer was mehh..

Overall// Started of nicely but fell a million miles off after till the seventh bar.

Vote - Spume. Very inconsistent drops from both but I felt Spume had the better bars that hit.
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Aiit I gotsta get a vote in on this one and on the Con/levy battle so we can hit up this final before the end of the world and there's not many other votes up in here but props to Mitch for his.

Ash, compared to your first two battles in the tourney, I reckon I read this one like it was written by someone shook versing an opponent that you were rattled about or like your verse is in a completely different style like you wasn't really in on this verse like you was in the battle against me. I real didn't like where you rhymed 'you can flow' with 'penal codes', that with no inner was real underwhelming to read as a bar, then you rhymed 'all knew that' with 'king of whack' and that was real lame. All up like while you were a bit racy with a few pretty personal concepts, it wasn't very direct or aggressive to read as a battle verse. I wanted more inner rhymes in there and more concepts and metaphors and similes, like writing techniques incorporated at a semi-final. Maybs u had to rush this verse out or something but it wasn't your best.

spume your verse was calculated at worst and raw fire at best, from backslash to the Olsens, the Talibans AK, bird is a moose, give you a wash were all noteworthy bars and stylistically your block, longstyle verse which was altogether pretty well shaped was way out of AK's league. Way more direct, personal and aggressive for me this was a pretty one-sided battle with

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