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    Posted: 06 December 2004 at 6:04pm
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    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 December 2004 at 6:52pm
    check
    I am the one that knocks...
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 December 2004 at 11:33pm

    check.

     

    by the way this is text. 

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 December 2004 at 1:04pm
    This has been granted like a 12 hour extension. Deadline is now noon (GMT) sunday... 1
    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 December 2004 at 3:12pm

    nah...take it off...i dont got work today orion...

     

     

    so tonight midnight is still the due date

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    i though it was tommorow....
    I am the one that knocks...
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 December 2004 at 3:46pm

    OH SHIT...I THOUGHT it was today...fuck it then, why the hell am i worrying?

     

     

    due date, tomorrow midnight, depending on where you live...P-M ya verse to Orion

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 December 2004 at 3:48pm
    oh ok...u had me worried...
    I am the one that knocks...
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    ...Sorted...

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 7:03pm

    Tequila Sunrise

    you below me, by my words kid you dont deserve to be it
    my expectations for you right now is lower than eternitys is [1]
    shit, ill give you time for you to say your final goodbye[2]
    cuz you missed out on elevation 'B', a thing you should try
    like russian rhoulette theres a good chance you could die
    and you praised me in ya crew offer, otherwise i wouldnt reply[3]
    send this to "O"at midnight, like ya record goes from 1-0 to 1-1[4!!!!!!!]
    keep lookin for "Help Wit Multis", seems you done found NONE NONE

    1. Eternity made a post wit "Member Goals" for front line people...and well
       out of all the goals set for each members...he got the shortest and weakest
       goals...http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.as p?TID=4839&KW=bolo
    2. He dropped a verse titled "FINAL GOODBYE"
    3. He and all of front line asked me to join them...bolo said i was nice wit text
       or somethin along the lines of that.
    4. today is december 10--->1-0 aka his battle record...at midnight, itll be
       December 11--->1-1 aka his battle record after im done...the new "1" being
       this loss...pretty clever aint i? :P

    Bolo

    Hmm…They protect u from sunshine wen u chillin outside
    …my bad…I thought I'd talk bout sombreros, instead of sayin' goodbye
    But farewell to this guy, cuz he bout to be history
    Miss'n me, this bitch can't see, I dodge shots like keanu reaves
    This hoe best leave, n I hope his plane crashes
    but if dre stays, he goin' be lost in the aftermath myst
    this cat plays tough, but its all an act
    He'll prolly run like a bitch now that x is back
    A miracle in beantown, but it ain't the sox
    Its that this cat is stays when hoes throw so many rocks

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
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    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 8:00pm

    you below me, by my words kid you dont deserve to be it
    my expectations for you right now is lower than eternitys is [1]
    lmao... funny personal... coo rhymes and flow
    shit, ill give you time for you to say your final goodbye[2]
    cuz you missed out on elevation 'B', a thing you should try
    again a quite funny personal... flow OK...
    like russian rhoulette theres a good chance you could die
    and you praised me in ya crew offer, otherwise i wouldnt reply[3]
    lol... dope personal... again worked simple... flow nice
    send this to "O"at midnight, like ya record goes from 1-0 to 1-1[4!!!!!!!]
    keep lookin for "Help Wit Multis", seems you done found NONE NONE
    very clever first line, but... these battles don't go on ya record... lol @ none none...

    Overall, simple but good flowin' verse... far from ya best

    Hmm…They protect u from sunshine wen u chillin outside
    …my bad…I thought I'd talk bout sombreros, instead of sayin' goodbye
    LMAO @ the personal... dope... rhymes/flow kinda off
    But farewell to this guy, cuz he bout to be history
    Miss'n me, this bitch can't see, I dodge shots like keanu reaves
    don't like the simile... and the rhyme is so loose the flow is just thrown off...
    This hoe best leave, n I hope his plane crashes
    but if dre stays, he goin' be lost in the aftermath myst
    a pretty coo nameplay there... flow OK
    this cat plays tough, but its all an act
    He'll prolly run like a bitch now that x is back
    nah not feelin' that... 'cuz he beat XX hands down...
    A miracle in beantown, but it ain't the sox
    Its that this cat is stays when hoes throw so many rocks
    not feelin' the finish... i thnk you gotta typo in here somewhere... but it's no edits as i told u online...

    Overall, you had a nice start, u used personal info where u could, better some places than others, but lacked a smooth flow.

    Close... Tequila edges it just for inclusion of more elements and better flow... Bolo had more personal info but didn't use it quite as well... I think Bolo coulda taken this... as Tequila went easy, but he still showed more command of lyricism, just about.

    BTW Tequila you only dropped half the max limit... it wasn't 8 lines, it was 16... lucky for you Bolo was rushed and only managed 10 lines...

    VOTE: Teq

     

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 8:14pm

    im Cool with both of u but this battle was actually Very 1sided

     

    intro-Teq
    punch-Teq
    Wordplay-Teq
    Creative-Teq
    Consistancy-Teq
    Flow-Teq
    Structure-Teq
    Personals-Bolo
    humor-Bolo
    Outro-Teq

    o/Vote-Teq took this with Ease...Pritty Weak battle Seen u both come harder than this

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 9:23pm

    Flow - Tie
    Multis - Bolo
    Punches - Teq
    Personals - Teq
    Wordplay - Teq

    Yup... one sided... and i know you can both do better... not an explained vote needed

    Vote - Teq

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 December 2004 at 9:24pm

    Eh...Teq KO, advances to next roundddddddd

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