Forum LockedDisqualification Archive: [Text] AxyRocker vs DjFlame (DJ NS)

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    Posted: 04 August 2016 at 6:17am
Topic - Both take a form of suicide
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Edited by Endeavor - 19 August 2016 at 4:23pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2016 at 7:06am
Ayyyy check.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2016 at 10:55am
For some reason we must've overlooked this battle. Ya'lls 10 days late! If there's no response by tomorrow I'm going to have to lock this.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2016 at 8:14pm
3 months earlier

Has it ever occurred to you what this life means
Like what is it apart from the field n rife greens
As when the light rings through your head like a bell
Emptiness that follows you , you feel like a shell
And when you think you are fine but world is like a hell
You try to walk through , you tried to hike n fell

You catch the fish like you got heightened smell
But Bitch all of this still ain't chimin a bell

I met a girl, probably the girl of my life
then I asked her out if she would be my wife
but she was like -"look at ya fuckin lowlife"
moreover I don't like your style, you ain't my type
Begged her-"Give me a chance lady, I'll even do your chores"
Clean the floors, go to stores ! I'll always be on all fours
Nah that still ain't good enough you gotta learn stuff
At first I thought thats easy man ! Drugs ain't that tough

Present day

Now I am sitting in the lockup! your everyday junkie
All I feel like now is just another circus monkey
but the circus has moved the town and I ain't feelin funky
I had a future and now am a delinquent, a college flunky


All of this and looks like I still ain't her type
Oh wait! just received my pills, I take my last bite
I shall end my misery and I shall do it tonight
Hanging my self to the ceiling, start losin will to fight
Funny, I hope I remember this in my new life
Girls! I just discovered a new form of suicide

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 August 2016 at 4:23pm
I'm sorry, Axy. I don't think Flame will be dropping a verse within considerable time so I have to no show him. If you'd still like to battle him with this verse you can set up a new thread.
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