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    Posted: 04 August 2016 at 6:17am
Topic - Both take a form of suicide
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Edited by Endeavor - 19 August 2016 at 4:23pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 August 2016 at 7:06am
Ayyyy check.
He only here to warn us what the plan is
The hour is upon us, it's bananas
Born alone, die alone, no matter who your man is
Hope he live long enough to tell it to his grandkids
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2016 at 10:55am
For some reason we must've overlooked this battle. Ya'lls 10 days late! If there's no response by tomorrow I'm going to have to lock this.
#Bananas

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2016 at 8:14pm
3 months earlier

Has it ever occurred to you what this life means
Like what is it apart from the field n rife greens
As when the light rings through your head like a bell
Emptiness that follows you , you feel like a shell
And when you think you are fine but world is like a hell
You try to walk through , you tried to hike n fell

You catch the fish like you got heightened smell
But Bitch all of this still ain't chimin a bell

I met a girl, probably the girl of my life
then I asked her out if she would be my wife
but she was like -"look at ya fuckin lowlife"
moreover I don't like your style, you ain't my type
Begged her-"Give me a chance lady, I'll even do your chores"
Clean the floors, go to stores ! I'll always be on all fours
Nah that still ain't good enough you gotta learn stuff
At first I thought thats easy man ! Drugs ain't that tough

Present day

Now I am sitting in the lockup! your everyday junkie
All I feel like now is just another circus monkey
but the circus has moved the town and I ain't feelin funky
I had a future and now am a delinquent, a college flunky


All of this and looks like I still ain't her type
Oh wait! just received my pills, I take my last bite
I shall end my misery and I shall do it tonight
Hanging my self to the ceiling, start losin will to fight
Funny, I hope I remember this in my new life
Girls! I just discovered a new form of suicide

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 August 2016 at 4:23pm
I'm sorry, Axy. I don't think Flame will be dropping a verse within considerable time so I have to no show him. If you'd still like to battle him with this verse you can set up a new thread.
#Bananas

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