Disqualification Archive: [Text] AxyRocker vs d.o.c (1-0) |
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AxyRocker
Standard Member Joined: 16 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1297 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-40-1 Form: LLLLWL |
Topic: [Text] AxyRocker vs d.o.c (1-0) Posted: 10 July 2015 at 8:04pm |
10 lines
48 hours (thats the minimum limit) Best of luck bro
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d.o.c.
Groupie Joined: 11 February 2015 Status: Offline Points: 144 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-5-0 Form: LLLLL |
Posted: 10 July 2015 at 8:13pm |
Wow did not know that minimum deadline shit lol
Anyways will be posting sometime tomorrow Gl consider this check |
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d.o.c.
Groupie Joined: 11 February 2015 Status: Offline Points: 144 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-5-0 Form: LLLLL |
Posted: 11 July 2015 at 3:52pm |
Dismember ya body.
This a quick intro and leave axy dead when they enter my lobby. His residence full of foul shit. Gonna fill axy with lead fragments and bullets bitch. And there's no need for 10 ta kill this dork. Cuz for every dope bar there's another 300 you heard before.. Surround verses with barbwire. Cuz axyll be a fifth wheel the way im replacing his car tires. Tally up my votes this battle lobb-sided. Cause your fave a hexagon like a stop sign is. |
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AxyRocker
Standard Member Joined: 16 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1297 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-40-1 Form: LLLLWL |
Posted: 11 July 2015 at 5:31pm |
Like ISIS hostages, I will leave you nowhere to be found
Cuz after this battle you'll shoot yourself like Em's 'Space bound' Leaving you with scars with my punches swinging like blades from helicopter Break your collar bone and still be merciless enough not to 'Call you a doctor' You trying to battle, shit should now be classified in crimes And my bars will leave you more disfigured than your rhymes Leaving you with no chance to protect yourself like am pro in judo This battle will leave your existence more questionable than pluto's Man this ain't no battle of aces ! I can beat you just with the basics but the way am killing this black dog, looks like Rapper T ain't the only racist Expo - d.o.c/doc/doctor Black dog - his avy |
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d.o.c.
Groupie Joined: 11 February 2015 Status: Offline Points: 144 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-5-0 Form: LLLLL |
Posted: 12 July 2015 at 12:37pm |
Lol mate I wasnt finished with my verse but the site won't let me edit...didn't realize that when I posted that's why I dropped the same thing twice lol my bad
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 12 July 2015 at 5:40pm |
LOL this battle is terrible, neither verses have much in the way of punches thrown. They both lack when it comes to flow as well. d.o.c don't have your set up bar half the size of your punchlines it throws off your flow dramatically and both of you need to start using multiple syllabic rhyming because Axy basics and bitch bearly rhyme. You need to up your game a hundred fold both of you. Axy was slightly better in the fact he was slightly more direct in his verse but that isn't a compliment doc just came with a load of generic lines that completely missed. Anyways my votes goes to AxyRocker.
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AxyRocker
Standard Member Joined: 16 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1297 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-40-1 Form: LLLLWL |
Posted: 12 July 2015 at 6:55pm |
Sorry bro, but with a mutual consent this battle has been cancelled ! Would you please remove this one from battlefield?
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JBrenn
Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 13 July 2015 at 3:31pm |
I should give you both losses for waisting my time!!!! get your shit together!
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