Text Battle Archive: [TEXT] Blood Eclipse Vs. The Rap Daemon [0-3]

16 Bars (let's make 'em dope lmao)
3 Days
House Rules

Since my name was mentioned, I'll leave his head split with swift intentions/
You ain't got grit when you spit, your throat is slit, now quit contesting, Even if you were X-Men, you couldn't storm my writ selections/
And you'll get diced in X-Forms like I swung in unknown dimensions/
Since Rap Deamon is still talking,I know he gonna drop a sneak dissery /
He gets the ghetto Swiss chalet, spiked in steam rotissery/
I smoked you in your dreams, so you need a team for getting me/
I bet your regime wouldn't beam when I'm seen upon the killing spree/
You think you can diss Blood Eclipse ? I swear you're already in the crosshair/
I'm The Viet Kong artillery that moves with guerrilla warfare/
You think it's no fair? Catching 11 Ls, you battle me trying to catch a W but you're scared/
You think you can edge me because I'm new here, Bitch I'm nastier than nose hair/
You're in a matrix, but you're basic, you'll get your face lifted by the rhythms off dome, to blast like space ships/
Leaving holes in your body like time suffered a space rift/
Now why you sucker still talking?/ seen me battle, now you sucker stalking/
I'm The hungered SHARK in your local PARK to murder you off when all is DARK And, I'll drop you while you're walking/
I will, leave you running when I'm gunning you for all your gawking/
Don't get it twisted, you are more screwed than retarded body stretches/
And I'm gonna body your henchmen, they all sit aside like "keep hot the benches"/
I'm only dropping one diss cuz that's all it takes To erase you and your birthdates /
From the Terror's wall to the Cyphers in L.A, I'm standing over earthquakes, now one thing is bound and certain/
Ladies and Gentlemen, Rap Deamon is still a zygote, He thought I wasn't venomous/
I'm the foul child tearing you down like rotten curtains/
You get smoked for acting blunt, so pull tricks, i'll watch you stunt it/
Now kids scram, bank robbery, you get jammed Off your ice and shine, rob you blind, you slick fam? /
You get bammed By verbal hammers I throw, blasting grammar to slam ya and your Lil fam/
Then filter you like adding black an white to your funeral pic on Instagram/
Putrid spittings, Rap Deamon can't mess with the force legion/
I will body you after you been bodied again for no reason/
If you are leaking, i'll keep bashing til you're done bleeding/
Then switch out format of attack quick as the four seasons/
You rep but got beat by kicks quicker than Liu kang/
I've been too sane in here, now I'm dropping a new flame/
Haha, Its easy to mention your Name, Rap Deamon is nothing to the Game but Shame, he will get yoked harder than Hussein/

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This was a nice tussle here really,a little heavy due to it being 16 bars but still good,(except the voting for this to be slow via the lengths of these pieces,and with IC2
taking centre stage also)..


Blood your opening bars had a good concept with the superhero's entow,but it was in
the realm of generic for me,we could argue that dimension/Demons is linked,and if
so it still remains a forced or created personal,however you did pick up there after,
although still skating in parts on the generic rink,the personals became more and
more relevant,and you had some good punches within also,although nothing heavy
hitting as such,but they landed,your similes were working here which helped your
punches overall,(and do like me some similes & wordplay),but here at LA the focus
is personals/punches/humour/similes wordplay and metaphors,(not in any order),you seemed to go over the limit of 16 bars also,which on the norm should equate to 32 lines,by a few,(bars that is),still no biggie really as RD did also..lol.all in all a good verse on the whole,good work.


R Daemon your verse was good on the whole you to had some really nice similes too,
I also thought yours to be sharp and better thought out,your line lengths were way over
though,but like Blood they didn't become samey,your punches were good and landing
well too,and the personals were standing out also,i liked the directness you took here with the piece in general,seemed to give it some aggression and focus too,in parts you
showed some clever thinking behind your plays/similes which added weight to the
punches thrown here,again as with Blood an enjoyable read..also good work.

Overall I'm going to go with RD here's why,he did have the better aimed verse out the 2 on display,he also had the better play/punches too,this was like a battle of similes
really,both brought them within their pieces in abundance,props to Blood you just need
to get a little more personal,you had a wealth of posts to use against RD for ammo,but
seemed to have dropped the ball there,anyways well done to you both..

Vote..Rap Daemon..peace.

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Daemon gets my vote

Better verse structurally and better concepts and bars. Started off decent and fell off towards the end but maintained enough hot through. Blood your opener could have been amazing if you shortened it and got right to the point. Your flow was good but your punches didn't directly land on your opponent.