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MvC Kid Esco 
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 Topic: [Text] daydizzle89 vs MvC Kid EscoPosted: 20 August 2014 at 9:21pm |
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16 bars maximum
Standard rules and w/e |
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MvC Kid Esco
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Joined: 19 August 2014 Status: Offline Points: 72 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 20 August 2014 at 9:43pm |
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^Delete that post
At my sharpest I'm the ideal bar smith U not even worth darts, I'm in my truest form You've been a target since you were born Homie, you a birthmark, only if you'd work smart You'd realize I eat rappers, you "Kid's" meal-size, A cheap actor, just trash stashed beneath A sheet of neat wrappers, to see your defeat & capture? Would take no time even if you'd get the lead in cosigns From ya league of dappers, I'm sittin on a gold mine Day's the least of matters, but at least his masters Could keep him on a leash B4 he speaks his piece And chatters, he's too WEAK! He'll shatter Put his organs on the black market Let his fam keep some tatters, I'm that heartless |
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daydizzle89
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Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
Posted: 20 August 2014 at 10:08pm |
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This Kid
Esco still hasn’t learned his lesson, His words are
deafening and never the less, depressing// A deficit
of skills this cat holds is what I’m addressing His
attention to detail is still under development// His structure
is weak down to his core foundation A cluster
of oblique words, with no relations// His
calibrations are off like miscalculations This faggot
has no fucking prestidigitation// His
word-play is riddled with disorganization Quitting now
is his only call for rationalization// Let me dumb
this down so you can relate bitch Your words
bring deaf to my ears and it makes me sad.. He lacks
skills and that is what has had to be said His
attention to detail is under developed.. His core
base of skills are completely fucked He can’t
put two and together because he’s a fucking retard.. He raps like
a fucking faggot that can’t execute a single fucking bar I think
this idiot has dyslexia, he’s wrapping words together like it’s too hard.. So quit now
bitch before I leave you in this battle permanently scarred |
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Elite
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Joined: 16 February 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 3340 Crew: eNtiTy Audio Rank: #3 Stats: 5-0-0 Form: WWWW |
Posted: 20 August 2014 at 10:13pm |
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Well.. this was pretty one sided.
MVC - You never came out fully and went at your opponent. You just stated the things that you "would" do to the members of LA. No real punches that landed and flow wasn't the best. For someone who claims that they can body anyone here, you sure as shit came weak as fuck. OVERALL: 5/10 DD - You didn't have that great of verse, but at least you came at your opponent full fledged and kept saying him name and throwing punches directly towards HIM and him only. Flow was decent, and some of your punches landed. Overall I liked this verse way better than MvC. OVERALL: 6.1/10
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Elite
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Joined: 16 February 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 3340 Crew: eNtiTy Audio Rank: #3 Stats: 5-0-0 Form: WWWW |
Posted: 20 August 2014 at 10:14pm |
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i can't edit my last post this time for some reason to add it in, but DD89 gets my vote.
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 20 August 2014 at 10:22pm |
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Esco, Please read the Site Battle Rules, votes and verses only, thanks.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 21 August 2014 at 12:52am |
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Flow: Day
Delivery: Day Punches: Day (though neither of you really threw any) Personals: N/A Wordplay: N/A OVERALL: Day Explanation: Keepin' it 100, this was an awful battle that still managed to be onesided if you broke down the main points. Esco, I really expected more from you. What you came with really was elementary. Though, I did like your style. Some people here may not grasp how you wrote your lines as far as rhyming. But I did, it still didn't help you. For someone who wanted to be in a battle you really didn't go at your opponent in the least bit. That's like starting a fight and curling up into a ball. Day, I also expected more from you. All this shit talk back and forth has to spark some type of creativity for punchlines. I feel like you had some ideas but they were poorly executed. What you did do good was havea solid flow. I think that you also at least went in his direction. Overall, you both can step it up. |
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JBrenn
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Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 21 August 2014 at 2:56am |
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JBrenn
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Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 21 August 2014 at 3:00am |
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2-0 dazzle the votes were discounted for esco as they were Dickriding votes..... GTFO of here if you think either of these drops are an 8/10.
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JBrenn
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Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 21 August 2014 at 3:17am |
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TAKE IT TO A DIFFRENT THREAD this is a battle READ THE RULES!!!
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Junior Shade
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Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 21 August 2014 at 7:27am |
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One of the worst battles I have ever had the pleasure of reading...
Esco, you need to actually hit your opponent for me to even consider that a battle verse. Day, you have the basics, but miles to go still. Keep working on landing those punches, flow was tidy in this though. Vote: Dizzle
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JBrenn
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Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 21 August 2014 at 7:58am |
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daydizzle89 3-0 ko...
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