Battlefield: [Text] D-NoS vs Bazooka bastard (1-2)

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    Posted: 03 November 2017 at 7:32pm
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^^^
You call yourself Fred Dice / Dice said Fred, you're dicing with death,
You should know I've checked ya soundcloud dice, n ya deaf,
And for the next one I'm incorporating slicing up veg,
It's like you're cutting onions with the reaper, that's dicing with death,

Your bitch has got so many lice in her head,
She's someone not even fake sex addict Jim Dyson would F,
Sick of so called punches sort of relating to dicing with death?
Well I'll panda ya eyes, black on both sides, like dice in with Def





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Intensive Aggressor Impressive Aggravater
Bazooka's a bitch an ass Ima undress her

B for Bitch... A for Ass.. 
You live in a Zoo and drive crap KA's (car-type) around

Challenger Challenging not a challenge I cant manage I'll manage him
Thinks he's a bastard but I guess his momma forgot to tell him 

bout that time I went balls-deep in, dicey creep up ya gals ladder fondling
on a regular occasion, I fit in your bitch like a cork in a bottle, ima Caucasian 
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I feel the punches were light on both sides. The two of you did attack each other though.
Bazooka seemed to be a bit less direct though by attacking his gf instead of him.
Also it made it seem kinda basic with rhyming "dicing with death" twice. Also that was a whack concept if you ask me.
But yes, for the reasons mentioned,
D-NoS takes this 
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This was a close battle here,i thought it was evenly matched really,anyways.


BB,so you went down the approach route of displaying different scenarios of using
dicing with death,each time using it as a different concept,you definitely got personal
with the name flipping too,and your punches were landing also,not to heavy though
but landing still,you also showed some skill by attempting doubling dicing with death
as multi's at the end of the bars as well,(and although i wasn't a big fan of the concept
initially,after another read it grew on me,I succumbed to it),and to extent i disagree with
WIY in the fact that it was spatial,you had the set up on the 1st line then punch on the
2nd,(standard format),battle verses are not ment to be rigid like a topical piece,and
judging from your last outting,this was more coherent,all in all the highlights to this verse is in the little things (multis/mechanics and usage of alias ect ect)..


D Nos this was definitely a big step up from your last battle verse i read,i liked the fact
that you were stressing and pulling words out of shape to make them mean more than
their intended use,i found your 2nd bar to be your strongest overall as well,your last bar
had for some reason a little humour factor withim that made me smirk which is also a
plus,as humour makes a punch a punch so props there,and like BB's drop this also was
better aimed and directed than your previous battle you had,the thing i have a gripe with,is your 1st bar and the 1st line of your 2nd bar seemed to repeat itself really,and for me i found that made your 1st bar in general a waste,and the fact you put B and A
in caps made me think an acronym was occurring,but it didn't pan out that way,still a
enjoyable drop..


Overall pluses on both sides here,both came with personals and directed drops,props
to both also for making me read each verse twice before calling a winner,and i'll say
now this was hard to call on the surface,i had to delve and break apart both pieces,to
see the bigger picture,and i found BB's to be my choice,here's why,i feel he had the
better contents and personals really,and he's mechanics/concept on the whole was
more my preference,sorry D Nos this wasn't easy to call so props dude..


Vote...Bazooka..peace.
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Got to disagree with Crimson this time, who is usually spot on.

My set was supposed to be a bit of a piss take, a how bad can homonyms get sort of thing. Creatively breaking down an opponent got boring for me a long time ago, it's almost too easy to be fun anymore.

I started writing bars about him building fences & writing bars on here meaning he spends his waking ours screwing up posts, his job being low paid n the dice not being loaded against me, but it just doesn't do it for me anymore. 

I didn't expect any votes but I hoped you'd see the funny side, maybe this the wrong place for that.
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Gotta disagree with Bazooka this time ...

Yes he took a big risk with this approach, but I enjoyed it, clearly done for the lolz, and as a multiple name flip it does class as direct & personal (you can't say it could be used for anyone else) ... not hitting hard though I'd agree.
Highlights for me, all of the first half.

Deano's round though... When I first read BB's I honestly thought "haha nice, but of course I'll have to vote for the other guy". But after reading it, I felt otherwise. You didn't need to do much to take this, and indeed your opponent fully expected you to ... but imo you still managed to fall short.
The rhyming was horrible even for 1 syllable rhymes, and half of it was indirect.
My favourite bit was the B A Zoo Ka scheme ... and I didn't like that at all
as it relying on rhyming Ass with Around.

Keep at it DNose but MFVGTBB
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