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mcosta 
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 Topic: (Text) Mr. House vs mcostaPosted: 19 April 2014 at 8:27pm |
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House Rules No Flipping 48 hours
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mcosta
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Posted: 20 April 2014 at 12:31am |
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I'll give a friend advise, stay out of this battle, go eat some fries
'Cause only thing you'll get outta this is a surprise I grow faster then Pinnochio's nose when he lies Climbin' up the mountain to the top of this site All the fucking n00bs like you better get outta my sight If you wanna fight, nigga, you'll have a fight Now, put your seatbelt tight, prepare for a rough break in a red light
It says "No losers allowed", I can't go in, but you can, right? |
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Mr. House
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Posted: 20 April 2014 at 9:40pm |
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Lol your last bar implies that you're a loser, not me. Anyways, here's my verse. since you got single syllable rhymes and wack shit that isn't sick! Like stabbing an invalid, this dude can't protect himself Got four battles set up, and they'll all be him getting Ls! Another unoriginal wack "rapper", ruining the scene around you You said you're a teen who likes Em...so there's nothing unique about you! A decent noob is hard to come by, you thought you'd be getting love right? All you left was dumb rhymes, but credit for being able to set it up right...
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Mr. House
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Posted: 24 April 2014 at 11:24pm |
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The one and only up i'm gonna do for this
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Posted: 25 April 2014 at 12:20am |
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that's a one sided battle for sure Costa again your verse have no single punch all what's in your verse was statment and self hype your flow wasn't that bad good job but your rhymes werevery basic and your whole verse had no sense in a battle so again hit the elevation center practice and elevate Mr.House I liked your opener was very good also your 2nd bar but I think the 3rd was the best in the other hand I didn't like that you used the same word twice in the end rhyme but the punch landed any way so MVGT house for better punches and rhymesrhymes
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Posted: 25 April 2014 at 9:44am |
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Not the best battle considering punchlines, I suspect Mr. House saved the heavier cards for stronger opponents. Mcosta, basically just random statements lacking proper adress, for instance the "If you wanna fight, nigga, you'll have a fight" is not even filler worthy. Got to get more clever with the insults you know, throw in some more creativity both for content and rhymes. Mr House, dropping mostly tatements also, but unlike osta you had humor and personal flavor added in, did what you had to do to jack the W comfortably. Vote House
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Atlas
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Posted: 26 April 2014 at 10:04pm |
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I don't think I need to explane alot here
Mcosta : - no punches - all statments - What the fuck should the 3ed verse mean - you kidda dissed your self ant the 3ed and 4th bar Mr .House : as your mates here said - one sided battle (for you of course) - you seemed like you saved your best cards - you had a nice flow and structure so congrats House you just KO'ed him 3 -0 |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 09 May 2014 at 6:15pm |
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Atlas, you need to explain your vote better.
2-0 to House |
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Atlas
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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 5:18am |
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okay scotty I'll explain it for you Mcosta : I felt your verse was very generic you didn't have any real punch in your verse it seemed like all statments I don't know what were you trying to do but it didn't work Mr.House : your verse was much better than his you had a nice flow but as I said you seemed like you're keeping you're keeping your best cards for a better battle but yet you had what's enough to win this battle MVGT house is that good now scotty .
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Posted: 11 May 2014 at 2:21am |
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KO for House
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