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Nigma 
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 Topic: [Text] Nigma vs Amgin [3-1]Posted: 11 March 2017 at 5:29am |
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Topic - Borderline personality disorder
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Amgin
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Joined: 31 January 2017 Status: Offline Points: 140 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-0 Form: LLL |
Posted: 13 March 2017 at 3:30am |
 Borderline Personality Disorder Am I Nigma? is it him? Nobody really knows who I Am-gin, read my bio Backwards words in my profile, someone keeps changing my title, hell if I know Call me nuts for challenging an idol, I'm schizotypal, hes everything I'm not, an online jock I Grew up an awkward kid, typical allergies, no peanuts in your elementaries Patterned instabilities, no social skills, inept, I need advice She offered again, too nice, it be awkward to say 'no' twice, read my last rites "Thank you ma'am.. I would love an arcachide".. Fuck it, I gotta feed, gotta get my weight up No Epi-pen, just let me swell up, battling a vet Haven't even earned my stripes yet, but you've got a few? Nice record, I wouldn't know '14 and 2' Down the rabbits hole is what I'm looking through Must hurt a bit, they think this rookies you But thank you, for accepting this battle, 24 lines holding me back, shackled That number shouldn't come as a surprise, baffled? It matches the 24 carvings on my thighs, knives travelled Personality Disorder, "borderline", but I'm on the better side, why don't you come over? Red rover red rover, Nigma thinks he's Hova.. what a Yahoo! Do you wanna know how Google defines you? 'A person or thing that is difficult to understand', give it up man, you're not a professor Stop trying to lecture me, your lessons will be lost, stoned in history After 22 lines, Amgin is still a mystery Can't be 'Jekyll and Hyde', (sorry Law), but nice try That would imply Nigma and I are the same guy.. |
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Nigma
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Joined: 25 March 2013 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 4077 Crew: Elision |
Posted: 13 March 2017 at 4:06am |
 Hey. This is Shaun. Oh wait, or is it Shawn? Ah, don’t piss me off I’m the mythic God spawning fictitious pawns and insist I’m not I’ve considered stopping but didn’t, fault of conflicting thoughts Track my IP? Bitch I’m switching spots, giving off hidden plots So if I’m caught, it diminishes the risk, and this my zone of vengeance Every clone I’m sending in’s akin to bold intentions, like being Engrossed in the benefits pent within a broken friendship Extending a lone appendage to your codependents hopes to end it … Okay, now you see? Thats a circle of pain A bridge rebuilt just to burn it again So really, who am I? What's my permanent name Will I swerve and move to servitude or personal gain? I want to engage, cleanse my flaws and write, But when they say I’m not concise, I cross the line Falsify my flaws and I will contradict this loss of time with Columbines of fallen idols all across my conscious mind I’m fond of life but still in hell from dawn to night Halt and hide inside the guise that walls provide I stumble towards darkness and then crawl to light It’s all right there to harness, but I’ve lost this fight Will I erase a species or cage my demons in villains cells Will I enrage what feeds me or save what's seen as an infidel My brain is plagued, relieve me.. This page and leaning quill will help To kill the other side of me, but scared that I might kill myself... |
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O Block
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Joined: 07 May 2013 Location: Cincinnati Ohio Status: Offline Points: 474 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-9-2 Form: WWWNLL |
Posted: 25 April 2017 at 10:31pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Amgin- That shit was funny as hell! And brilliant I honestly think both pieces were a work of art.. I really have nothing bad to say. This is just a matter of who perfected it better.. Ur flow was really nice it kind of reminded me of eminem, A funny but gritty style.. Very nice read. Wow. Am I Nigma? is it him? Nobody really knows who I Am-gin, read my bio Backwards words in my profile, someone keeps changing my title, hell if I know Call me nuts for challenging an idol, I'm schizotypal, hes everything I'm not, an online jock I Grew up an awkward kid, typical allergies, no peanuts in your elementaries Patterned instabilities, no social skills, inept, I need advice She offered again, too nice, it be awkward to say 'no' twice, read my last rites "Thank you ma'am.. I would love an arcachide".. Fuck it, I gotta feed, gotta get my weight up No Epi-pen, just let me swell up, battling a vet Haven't even earned my stripes yet, but you've got a few? Nice record, I wouldn't know '14 and 2' Down the rabbits hole is what I'm looking through Must hurt a bit, they think this rookies you But thank you, for accepting this battle, 24 lines holding me back, shackled That number shouldn't come as a surprise, baffled? It matches the 24 carvings on my thighs, knives travelled Personality Disorder, "borderline", but I'm on the better side, why don't you come over? Red rover red rover, Nigma thinks he's Hova.. what a Yahoo! Do you wanna know how Google defines you? 'A person or thing that is difficult to understand', give it up man, you're not a professor Stop trying to lecture me, your lessons will be lost, stoned in history After 22 lines, Amgin is still a mystery Can't be 'Jekyll and Hyde', (sorry Law), but nice try That would imply Nigma and I are the same guy.. Damn! That was impressive on both ends, Im starting to think u guys really might be the same people given how close of a battle this was.. I read each one of your drop 4 times... I cant really make a decision... Nigma I gotta give u props because of how beautifully that flowed together and how easy it was to read like I could make it into a song almost... Both drops were incredible and this battle diserves alot more credit definately both of u guys are poets. But i have to give this one to nigma just for the simple fact that his flow topped yours by a teeny tiny bit, but everything else was dead even.. Good job u guys!! Nigma- Hey. This is Shaun. Oh wait, or is it Shawn? Ah, don’t piss me off I’m the mythic God spawning fictitious pawns and insist I’m not I’ve considered stopping but didn’t, fault of conflicting thoughts Track my IP? Bitch I’m switching spots, giving off hidden plots So if I’m caught, it diminishes the risk, and this my zone of vengeance Every clone I’m sending in’s akin to bold intentions, like being Engrossed in the benefits pent within a broken friendship Extending a lone appendage to your codependents hopes to end it … Okay, now you see? Thats a circle of pain A bridge rebuilt just to burn it again So really, who am I? What's my permanent name Will I swerve and move to servitude or personal gain? I want to engage, cleanse my flaws and write, But when they say I’m not concise, I cross the line Falsify my flaws and I will contradict this loss of time with Columbines of fallen idols all across my conscious mind I’m fond of life but still in hell from dawn to night Halt and hide inside the guise that walls provide I stumble towards darkness and then crawl to light It’s all right there to harness, but I’ve lost this fight Will I erase a species or cage my demons in villains cells Will I enrage what feeds me or save what's seen as an infidel My brain is plagued, relieve me.. This page and leaning quill will help To kill the other side of me, but scared that I might kill myself... MVGT NIGMA
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Sammy
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Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2223 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW |
Posted: 26 April 2017 at 2:00am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. ^^way to practice what u preach, my friend. i shall follow suit. amgin, lmao! very very strange verse. fitting (and i say with no disrespect intended). its like a weird amalgamation of a text battle with topical battle lol. strangely enough....it worked some how! Even the rhyme scheme had this blase attitude lol. There were quite a bit of clever lines. my favorite was: Personality Disorder, "borderline", but I'm on the better side, why don't you come over? ^^ that was dope. As far as negatives go, i wish there were a bit more conventional punches thrown in nah mean? Nigma, you too? lol whats with this topical text hybrid thing haha! regardless a nice verse. I wish there were hard punches. the flow is still as crisp and clever as ever. imagery was dope. Again, for a text battle wish there were more haymakers lol. vote/nigma. despite the topical/text hybrid, it had cleaner flow and more clever than Amgin.
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Sammy
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Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2223 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW |
Posted: 26 April 2017 at 2:07am |
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wait a minute, this was a topical battle? my bad, i saw [text] and assumed it was a text battle lol. regardless, my vote stays. i still thought nigma had the better verse. my bad guys.
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Crimson Juice
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Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 26 April 2017 at 10:59am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Amgin you came here with an interesting verse i thought,you done well capturing the elements of duel personality,i also feel you got at Nigma quite well via humour too,you displayed some good personal references within this piece that i believe found their target square enough also,the funny thing i noticed whilst reading your verse was how direct it seemed,with a subject topic matter being about a split persona,i feel you only dipped your toe in the pool of angles when in reality there's a wealth of concepts to be had,you could of gone the route of a ramberling madman/Nigma's consciece or (a quick plug for my crew) an alter ego,you took a route from a solo person's outlook a 1st person view so to type,still you offering to be honest was nice,and creative in parts,a ripe read.. Nigma.. Yep you had some very subtle slants with your piece,you had in parts a detached vibe popping off, which i would expect from a delusional being,I also found your verse to be quite creative and clever in parts as well,you had some fine imagery on display that brought along a depth to this verse on the whole,your flow/tempo via some multi's worked well too,it just seemed to add another layer which heightened this drop further overall,your wording was bordering on being poetic for me here as well,you've shown some nicely crafted elements to a topical piece also,this has been a solid read from start to end which i have enjoyed reading.. Overall,damn hard to call a winner here and here's why,do I vote this as a topical battle ie via pen game,or do i vote this as a battle?,the reason i type this is because Nigma had the craftsmanship and Amgin had the personal/humour elements bordering on punches,hmm not easy at all,fuck I'm going against the grain here.. Vote Amgin..peace. |
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Neek
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Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 07 May 2017 at 1:16am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Nigma #2: Am I Nigma? is it him? Nobody really knows who I Am-gin, read my bio Backwards words in my profile, someone keeps changing my title, hell if I know I like your style. reminds me of my own. you cool bruv. keep at it. Call me nuts for challenging an idol, I'm schizotypal, hes everything I'm not, an online jock I Grew up an awkward kid, typical allergies, no peanuts in your elementaries you really allergic to peanuts? that sucks.. Nigma said we could do a picnic in Hongcouver and hunt down Cougars sometime, but hes a liar so… Patterned instabilities, no social skills, inept, I need advice She offered again, too nice, it be awkward to say 'no' twice, read my last rites I hate with a fervor using the same word twice in a verse, in particular when its unnecessary. awkward like that back to back just ruins my evening. thanks jerk. "Thank you ma'am.. I would love an arcachide".. Fuck it, I gotta feed, gotta get my weight up No Epi-pen, just let me swell up, battling a vet the theme is smooth tho, solid angles. I dig it. Haven't even earned my stripes yet, but you've got a few? Nice record, I wouldn't know '14 and 2' Down the rabbits hole is what I'm looking through Must hurt a bit, they think this rookies you bodybag. But thank you, for accepting this battle, 24 lines holding me back, shackled That number shouldn't come as a surprise, baffled? It matches the 24 carvings on my thighs, knives travelled Personality Disorder, "borderline", but I'm on the better side, why don't you come over? slick. not sure if serious with the cutting shit. if so hope you resolved it and live a happy life. peace be unto you my friend. Red rover red rover, Nigma thinks he's Hova.. what a Yahoo! Do you wanna know how Google defines you? 'A person or thing that is difficult to understand', give it up man, you're not a professor the fact Nigma thinks hov is trash made this line for me. Stop trying to lecture me, your lessons will be lost, stoned in history After 22 lines, Amgin is still a mystery Can't be 'Jekyll and Hyde', (sorry Law), but nice try That would imply Nigma and I are the same guy.. solid outting. I liked the continuous themes… felt free flow and fun. had some zingers.. good shit fella. Nigma #1: Hey. This is Shaun. Oh wait, or is it Shawn? Ah, don’t piss me off best opener, ever. I’m the mythic God spawning fictitious pawns and insist I’m not I’ve considered stopping but didn’t, fault of conflicting thoughts Track my IP? Bitch I’m switching spots, giving off hidden plots So if I’m caught, it diminishes the risk, and this my zone of vengeance Every clone I’m sending in’s akin to bold intentions, like being Engrossed in the benefits pent within a broken friendship Extending a lone appendage to your codependents hopes to end it real ill flow wise. I hope that appendage was your middle finger and not your nose you snob. … Okay, now you see? Thats a circle of pain A bridge rebuilt just to burn it again aganeeeeeeee So really, who am I? What's my permanent name Will I swerve and move to servitude or personal gain? I want to engage, cleanse my flaws and write, But when they say I’m not concise, I cross the line Falsify my flaws and I will contradict this loss of time with Columbines of fallen idols all across my conscious mind shooting kids you idolizing isnt very nice, but dewwweetttt since you hate me im safer than arm wrestling your mother. I’m fond of life but still in hell from dawn to night Halt and hide inside the guise that walls provide probs my favorite segment of this battle. I stumble towards darkness and then crawl to light It’s all right there to harness, but I’ve lost this fight admitting defeat this early is a G move. ultimately trolling to throw in the towel on the chess match against yourself. topical bodied. Will I erase a species or cage my demons in villains cells Will I enrage what feeds me or save what's seen as an infidel My brain is plagued, relieve me.. This page and leaning quill will help To kill the other side of me, but scared that I might kill myself... lets hope not. the world needs more Nigma..so im glad you made an alt. well, this is a styles clash… seems Albatrose has a habit of that. I felt Al B Sure had the more focused verse, but Nigma had the better lines. I also didnt feel the more focused verse was the better verse.. altho it followed the "topic" more.. it wasnt like Nigma wrote about his moms bathrobe. vote = Nigma....la cara triste. |
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nomedic
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Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
Posted: 12 June 2017 at 8:00pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Amgin I totally could see over 4 elements in this verse it was direct in text terms and also included the confines of the topic that's a rare one to have balls to enter a battle with that so props on that the rhymes were okay for me not more and over all this verse was kind of expertly done seeing how it had so much in it Nigma The opening 4 bars were really funny mythic god fictitious pawns then insist your not I ain't going to jump much on the rhymes all of em were dope esp the run ons on the lower part you were also unconventional with your plot I could spot opposing ideas in mostly the first section and that made your approach interesting Mvgt Nigma He had a better verse in terms of presentation and schemes and also had a better grip on the topic with his verse IMO Amgin also had a nice verse but nigmas verse edged his on the factors I've mentioned Word |
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Cuba
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Posted: 08 July 2017 at 2:05pm |
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Original Nigma wins.
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