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Last Sesh 
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Joined: 06 May 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 52 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW |
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 Topic: Text RankPosted: 22 May 2008 at 7:37am |
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mhmm postin up some old battle shit
some random battle shit
AGAINST J-OH Sesh Punches Hit you Drool-and-you-Start-to-Sweat J-OH? Slap ya backwards but You-ll--Prey-N-Charged-wit-Death its a Cruel-State-Narcin-Sesh! see even in tha shallow end of the pool-he's-been-marked-as-dead! his flow deep? 'joh-nah!', cuz i'm 'building your downfall!' even if this Fool-Came-With-'Ark-A-Texts'! go ahead, get help from everyone, You Still-Buried-Washed-Up-In-Rhymes , im movin in all diections tryna follow... you Still-Scared-See-Walk-On-Crossed-Eyed! Dont think the outcome of the rematch Will-Very-Watch-Cuz-I-Drop-Fly J Can't Mod HellHe Can't Even Pay For The 'Dough-Mayne' Like Buyin Expensive Pillsbury-Products-Online! Stop it Please, shit Jus Get Off That Copied Flow.. Fuck your Audio's I Got Him Beat Wit a Text Drop this is Probablly his best Drop But Still This is Rap Nietzhe? you all Up on Fill-Office-Sea(t) Like Sacratese in a Desk Job! Against Ty Weezy sleep on me? ya dreaming-endeavors-futile! this is for those who thought cheating-was-ever-crucial .. so Run Tell Morgan This 'Free-Man'-Is-Ever-brutal! and TY want beef? then 'In-Vite-Em-In', Like Meetings-For-Metamusil! My Keyz'll-Twist-Him-Up My Heat'll-Rip-This-Punk Callin You hawii on hot dayz the way you Need-A-Lil-Punch NO DEAL im Evil-Sick-of-Fronts So when i Beat Ya Ass Ty-Tan Like Powerful People-in-The-Sun! AGAINST Crew iDominate u garbage, i'm litterin-out-the-facts! thank god the victors-allowed-to-rap! Sesh'll get ya 'Family Tree-did'! even ya sisters-about-to-clap! but ya verse? all i seen was filler wit a mixture-about-the-gats! but how come u Never 'Armed On The Spot' Like Twister-without-the-mat!? Woah-Man-These-Whores-Leave-Trashed , So-Stand-Leth's-Tore,-And-Weak-Graph..the whole crew Knows-And-Heat-Mourns-These-Cats Go-Man!-Re-Form-Each-Rap N Seriously give up the iDom thing, cuz its had more 'members in it' then Lindsay Lohan- Before-Rehab! and one against Higbrid off The gauge, so i Release and Pump It, You Got Annoying Sounds Like Screams and trumpets You downed and See im up Kid you're Shitty so Yeah Brid-Ish So Stick To Tea And Krumpets! |
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 11:35am |
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I only read about half....but first of all, fix your structure and shorten them lines as they are stretched as hell. You have a grasp on multies and wordplay but need to work on them. Rank: Ama
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Swift Styles
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Joined: 24 September 2007 Location: East Coast, US Status: Offline Points: 2014 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-4-1 Form: WWLWNL |
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 11:41am |
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i know some of those dude you dissed.
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Last Sesh
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 11:53am |
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which ones? and fatal if you only read half then wtf? you can;t posta ranking based on half my verse
Edited by Last Sesh - 22 May 2008 at 12:03pm |
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 12:18pm |
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TY weezy.. dude is shit... horrid.. hope youve beaten better textcee's than him
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dalinquent
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Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 12:55pm |
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lol...actually sesh, if u want a rank at all, i suggest you chilling on the fatal reading half ya verse...most the rankers wont bother reading any of ya verse cause there cunts...lol
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Last Sesh
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 1:24pm |
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for real? whats wit that and yes swift i have beaten way better then ty weezy
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dalinquent
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 1:41pm |
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naw, they all just lazy...u'll get ranked soon enough tho
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Swift Styles
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 3:11pm |
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if you ever plan on ranking higher than ama tho, i suggest trying to adapt to the style of writing here.
other rap sites structure there lines differently, and here.. your s4r is considerd very stretched.. |
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Fatal
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 3:12pm |
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Lol i started writing after half....i was feeding while i read the rest.
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Last Sesh
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 6:38am |
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oh iight cool,
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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 6:50am |
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UPPIN
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Posted: 27 May 2008 at 8:10am |
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wtf man
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Fatal
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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 12:04am |
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Chill out dude, the other rankers are hardly active...
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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 7:03am |
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yeah...i can see that but when i was told to get on this site iw as told it was the most active...
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 16 June 2008 at 8:34pm |
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maybe new s4r judges should be elected as the others are barely active these days? just a thought.
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G-Pfeif
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Posted: 16 June 2008 at 9:02pm |
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heres a thought... you suck a dick
ok.. i only read a little... thats all it takes... i think your structure sucks wang... i dont need to be told how to read a bar by u using a fuckload of punctuation... that shit just pisses me off.. secondly, your flow needs a lil polishing.. you try to have multis with all those fucking hyphens... but it is forced as fuck... which is why you use so many hyphens,.. cuz your multis dont speak strongly enough for themselves... thirdly, your punches are a lil forced... the ark-a-text, was ok... but you tried to do much... you tried for a word play on ark and architect... and architect with text... pick one and stick with it... also the biblical reference was off... its Noah and the ARK not Jonah... Jonah was swallowed by a whale... i give you AMA... but you got some work to do Edited by G-Pfeif - 16 June 2008 at 9:03pm |
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 8:30am |
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you dumb fuck Joan of Ark i wasnt going for noah Joan a ark learn what the fuck im talkin about before you make yourself look more stupid
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G-Pfeif
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 3:19pm |
you said Joh-nah.... sorry i got confused... because the rest of your wordplay was FUCKED... sorry
Joan of ARC is spelled with a C... not a K... as is Architect... so why did you spell it ARK?
so YOU learn what the fuck YOURE talkin about... before you come at me
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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 7:04am |
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ok so i had a spelling mistake...sub in a C for the K... either way doesnt make a difference, this shits being slept on anyways
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