Disqualification Archive: [Text topical]Endeavor vs. Zinaii |
Post Reply |
Author | |
Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
Topic: [Text topical]Endeavor vs. Zinaii Posted: 07 May 2016 at 8:16am |
Topic: You're an ex Nazi allegedly responsible for the deaths of thousands of Jews who is currently awaiting trial.
Limit: 16 bars (32 lines) Deadline: 7 days (05-14-2016) Good luck!
|
|
#Bananas
|
|
Zinaii
Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL |
Posted: 10 May 2016 at 12:06am |
Check just seeing this
|
|
Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 12 May 2016 at 10:44am |
My name
is Heimlich Himmler, accused women and children killer
The men were used as slaves, an image so bitter seeing them whither And pass the gates of decadence, not a choice but a forced position I was cursed when living but then came a great man named Hitler! It was simple, join the SS and hunt the long noses for their treasures They were the reason of our recession, their death would be the answer And after a year I was transferred to Auschwitz, honestly a blessing I wouldn’t have to hunt Jews, just put them in camps and process em At first their circumstances weren’t ideal but they were relatively safe Then Mengele, monster unchained, arrived and everything changed He separated twins from families each day and the screams still haunt me today His obsession for eugenics led him to these crazy experiments, the sentiment? Creating the perfect Aric twins by doing horrible things… Oh the arrogance And I, you ask, I witnessed everything! From blue liquids being injected in eyes To kids of 5 being sewn together without sedatives slowly brutalized And every single of one of them died! Honestly, there was nothing I could do A wrong move could lead to me and my family to being murdered too What did you expect me to do? I’ll be the first to admit all I have committed But what I witnessed is the worst punishment any man or God could deliver Me disappearing shouldn’t even strike you as odd, I wanted to run from it all I spent years in churches begging the lord, but there wasn’t a beckon or call My name is Heimlich Himmler, a villain who murdered women and children Who was a part of the Angel of Death’s experiments that were brutally wicked I said I was cursed when living… But I was never alive to begin with! So, I beg you, cast upon me your verdict but know this… I can never ask for forgiveness. |
|
#Bananas
|
|
Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 15 May 2016 at 12:44am |
Well, Neek warned me for this already. Guess old habits never change, eh?
No, I don't accept an extension and don't care your goldfish needed surgery. |
|
#Bananas
|
|
Exoduzt
Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 15 May 2016 at 1:01am |
sorry to post in here..but end..I'll drop a verse..give me 2 days...i don't want ya wasting this
|
|
|
|
Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 15 May 2016 at 1:55am |
That's fine, if Arthur is cool with it
|
|
#Bananas
|
|
Arthur
Veteran Joined: 23 August 2013 Location: London Status: Offline Points: 2310 Text Rank: #5 Stats: 36-7-0 Form: WWWWLL |
Posted: 16 May 2016 at 8:32pm |
Zinaii gets a no show.
if you would like to use this verse then start a new battle against exoduzt with the same topic. PM me if you want the verse removed from here. locked.
|
|
Post Reply | |
Tweet
|
Forum Jump | Forum Permissions You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |
|