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    Posted: 07 May 2016 at 8:16am
Topic: You're an ex Nazi allegedly responsible for the deaths of thousands of Jews who is currently awaiting trial. 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2016 at 12:06am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 May 2016 at 10:44am
My name is Heimlich Himmler, accused women and children killer
The men were used as slaves, an image so bitter seeing them whither
And pass the gates of decadence, not a choice but a forced position
I was cursed when living but then came a great man named Hitler!
It was simple, join the SS and hunt the long noses for their treasures
They  were the reason of our recession, their death would be the answer
And after a year I was transferred to Auschwitz, honestly a blessing
I wouldn’t have to hunt Jews, just put them in camps and process em
At first their circumstances weren’t ideal but they were relatively safe
Then Mengele, monster unchained, arrived and everything changed
He separated twins from families each day and the screams still haunt me today
His obsession for eugenics led him to these crazy experiments, the sentiment?
Creating the perfect Aric twins by doing horrible things… Oh the arrogance
And I, you ask, I witnessed everything! From blue liquids being injected in eyes
To kids of 5 being sewn together without sedatives slowly brutalized
And every single of one of them died! Honestly, there was nothing I could do
A wrong move could lead to me and my family to being murdered too
What did you expect me to do? I’ll be the first to admit all I have committed
But what I witnessed is the worst punishment any man or God could deliver
Me disappearing shouldn’t even strike you as odd, I wanted to run from it all
I spent years in churches begging the lord, but there wasn’t a beckon or call  
My name is Heimlich Himmler, a villain who murdered women and children
Who was a part of the Angel of Death’s experiments that were brutally wicked
I said I was cursed when living… But I was never alive to begin with!
So, I beg you, cast upon me your verdict but know this…
I can never ask for forgiveness.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 May 2016 at 12:44am
Well, Neek warned me for this already. Guess old habits never change, eh?

No, I don't accept an extension and don't care your goldfish needed surgery.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 May 2016 at 1:01am
sorry to post in here..but end..I'll drop a verse..give me 2 days...i don't want ya wasting this

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 May 2016 at 1:55am
That's fine, if Arthur is cool with it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 May 2016 at 8:32pm
Zinaii gets a no show. 

if you would like to use this verse then start a new battle against exoduzt with the same topic.

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