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    Posted: 28 August 2015 at 8:40pm
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THEME : Thoughts and feelings you went through or experienced when you and your 1st lover was about to break up or divorce.
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I thought Debby was my destiny, angel from elysium fields,
hot lady i loved heavily, a cherub all museums shield,
forced to be exhibited, so I fought for her deliverance,
till love got me inspirited, with thoughts of no incurrence,
In endurance, sharing our peculiarity,
not our resemblance, nor our irregularity,
but activities all couples do, like making babies with struggles too,
till blessed with sick cupids, cursed like raging scrabies to trouble you.
Once a father, with heavy hunger for an etiquette future,
with wounds, i cried for steady docter, with an etiquette suture,
cuz i realised the little devils my freed wife had raised,
eventually grew up & screwed up the sweet life we praised,
heads they had sledged, reports got their case stretched,
their huge debts led to the divorce cost we had pledged,
cash was a thick problem, sensitive like a thin scrotum,
the sick emblem we named love, turned to be a weak totem,
just pain in the latter days, taking away peaceful seasons,
so we kissed then fucked goodbye all blissful feelings.
Suddenly tummy pains , ripping the shit out my six pack,
It felt like a thousand hooks stripping the skin off my meek back,
i couldn't commit suicide for her, or endorse the epic act,
while my intestines failed to digest divorce as a big fact,
who knew the seed of a cherubim would turn out so evil,?
Endin my love, my life, early like a veld fire burning a weevil,
leading us into cuddling for the last time, the last affection,
sad connection, in remembrance of our past reflection.


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