Open Mic: Tha Dynasty Pt.3

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    Posted: 21 September 2004 at 9:08am
Aim at the singular but all you lames appear the same
I'll kill you at Point Blank Range like the video game
Fake facade in this fickle world is easy to control
Even I'm effected, why else would I rap bout con-soles?
Only difference is I mean a casket when I say X-box
My texts hot so y'all sit eagerly anticipatin my next drop
Lost parental guidance so my style is far from gentle
And it isnt religious when the nines next to ya temple
Im the sites most underated, ya defeat is fated
If not then why did you accept that I'm anticipated?
My every spit is a protest to show you the demonstration
I am constant growth so fuck any mention of elevation
I am the Judge that you Dread, that slug to ya head
Something you miss when its gone, the lover thats dead
People hate on my drops coz they say my names played out
Its subliminal, ya whole mindset telling you to obey doubt
My wordplay advanced yet you dont give it a second glance
Shit even the church says everyone deserves a second chance
And they corrupt as Hell, see children to touch and delve
Preachers reaping benefits from kids that are fucking twelve
It makes me sick that there raping quick and fake as shit
Society gets fucked from behind and yet they're taking it
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22 lines to follow that heat (continues where Ice left Off):

I'm labeled sick but always caught up in major shit
Stir up Controversy, bombs that burst be shaking this
I'm feelin you Ice, You can tell by the goosebumps
We rose with flows so cold to leave these dudes numb
More power than politicians, we'll never leave rap
But social commentary easily leads to negative feedback
I know I'm affected too:
And it's a fact, it's not an act, that priests might as well confess to you
My beliefs I can attest to, ask any god to bless you,
And it will always be more likely that some cop will arrest you
Hated on... King flips are played, Bloods and crips slayed
Online, offline murderers, peace slips away
When spits are sprayed, I'm quick to say I'm pissed today
Guys beat up, cauase they think everyone with a list is gay
So I'm fast to flip on catholics with classic spits
Quick to rip these hipocrites with massive hits
Now I'll wonder when you'll fight back...
And see you might hate a group of people, but your leaders are just like that
And we could make this a tight track...
But because it's not about about a club, a party or some bitches, some of you will think it's type wack
We beat crews, so don't be surprised when we beat you
Cause Ice and I are nice, so why are you so mad that that we speak truth?

Insert something rappy here
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Snaps, y'all... Ice, your spit jumped from topic to topic like Super Mario on crack, but it flowed well, and suited the verse overall. Not your best verse, but that's your own fault since you set your own bar so high. Structure was on point, and I agree with just about every point you made, except for the under-rated bit...

Jehu, I told you on MSN, and I'll tell you here: there may be people on this site that are better than you in one category or another, but you have got some of the smoothest, easiest to read shit that I've ever seen. That said, the verse was a little jumpy with the subject matter, but it suits the helter skelter nature of the verse.

All told - this wasn't the hottest shit either of you have dropped, but even at that, it's good quality shit. It's a shame that it's been slept on. Same for -Orion-'s shit. I guess peeps are running out of compliments... Peace.


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