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Cuba
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Posted: 21 November 2004 at 5:42pm |
This 'tutorial' is designed to encourage growth within the community and will include tips on battling techniques and voting... Battling Also, there are MANY styles you can adopt...an important thing to remember is QUALITY not QUANTITY...too much of a good thing in a verse lessens the effectiveness of the element you used...for example, if you check my battle with Perfecto in Lyrical Warfare you will see 14bars of good wordplay but the problem with that verse was that there was too much wordplay, meaning the effectiveness of the verse and the punches was weakened...try to use a little bit of all the elements in an original way...and remember, some filler is a good thing...the longer the battle is, the more filler you want to see because when you have a punchline then its effect is increased...the key is that you need to make your filler interesting and occasionally dissing so that there is an actual point of it being there...which brings me onto: Voting Voting in Categories Really there are too many problems with this system, and it would be much easier to vote on how you thought the battle went rather than breaking down multis because categories take out the aspect of battle VERSE...like I sed above about my battle with perfecto...there may have been an occasion where elementally a person was good but ACROSS A VERSE the effect of the punches was weakoned...you should really try and take a battle verse as a battle verse...vote on what you know - if your not sure, dont vote on it and ask in rap tutorials later... PEace |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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Pinned.
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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In Lyrical Warfare... you relied too much on one specific element... thus punches and delivery seemed repetitive... You were punching... but you were not punching me... Adios... |
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Cuba
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Like I said, everyone has a different opinion...this is mine, that is yours
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Steevie Jay
Newbie Joined: 30 November 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 19 |
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nice explaination bro...didnt realise how hard it could be to explain that shit..but n e wayz keep it going
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"Never hate your enemy, It effects judgement"
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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...Exactly
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Noxious
Superior Member Joined: 29 January 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 4167 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 63-59-3 Form: NWLWLW |
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Props... i might read it all... ...1 |
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Eternity
Superior Member Joined: 16 July 2004 Location: Vietnam Status: Offline Points: 1656 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-3 Form: NWWWL |
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Debating it isn't an option.
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Bolo
Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
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seriously, somone take away game's shovel n hit him with it...its gettin annoyin...
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I am the one that knocks...
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I-kontinue
Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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mmm...Ice, I think I got it...when you punch, make it somethin like this:
You think your rhymes are "rich", when it's the bums you sweat You cant talk shit 'cus your record's "lame" like the 1-2 step (His record's 1-2) ...Somethin like dat Ice? |
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Bolo
Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
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ha...u got jokes?...
funny how wen u don't put ya captions ya punches can't phaze me records? u'd have to triple ur wins to just to come in in last place G |
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I am the one that knocks...
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Cuba
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Punchlines are suicidal, these kids poppin pills
Records are numbers ya obviously aint got the skills Tsk Tsk |
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dollaz
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some good advice u got here
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PIMP MASTA DOLLAZ
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THE PROFIT11790
Newbie Joined: 29 June 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 19 |
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heres a punchline.....
i got money and i do plan to toss da cake//
cuz my raps is great like frosted flakes//
im like the devil i bring hell to your block//
and leave all ya boys wit both hands up like twelve o clock//
hows that for punchlines....genius right..no biting those r two from my tracks...that are copyrighted...go head bite em...its your money on the line.....lol
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This is ya boyy NA$D PROFIT aka JSEIGE.I know im new to this site..but ive been on letsbeef for a while and im on both the top 100 text and audio rankings...im gonna ride on the rankings over here...
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DressToKill
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those werent good punches man...lol
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The original comeback kid
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DressToKill
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actually the last one was dope
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The original comeback kid
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SageOne
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Funny how a tutorial can become a cypher. Yikes! I better run and duck for cover, I'm LA's fence sitter, and right now, my ass is hurting!
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D.king
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sageone- talking bout his ass is hurt
rhymies are tase like food in the dirt
in his sig he's thinks he's the great Sage, son
but raps like an imfant, he's only on page,one
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I resemble the tooth fairy by the way i am taking your crown!!
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D.king
Standard Member Joined: 30 August 2005 Location: U.S. "Florida" Status: Offline Points: 573 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-10-0 Form: WWWLWW |
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like this
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I resemble the tooth fairy by the way i am taking your crown!!
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dalinquent
Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
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no, not like that
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