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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Posted: 21 May 2014 at 9:10am |
A relentless freestyle session overheard from tha Syndicate headquarters, featuring Brotha Goose, levy420 and Concrete:
Brotha Goose We started out as the "new kids", the "who kids?", whom "nobody knew kids", And you goons openly boo'd SYN, but no one predicted that what wud ensue is.... A crew full of noobs that wud prove to produce hits and continually do this, The truth is, we boost scripts, littered with symbols assembled to resemble our true gifts. We've never pencilled our true grit, mislead'em into believing we're only half as gud as we are, My team never try's to see stars, but if our level was raised, you wouldn't be peep'n the bar. Our steeze is deep and it runs far, can't compete with our writers cuz they're ripe with finesse, Come put our hype to the test, line up all yur best fighters to see them sniped like Kiev.(Ki-ev) SYN is an engine and we're keyed up to rev, 0 to 60 speeds that lead the quarter in 10, Like Gordon at Indy hit'n corners to win, pack'n a Paki so we're drop'n mortars with pens. Equip'd with soldiers to lend, a blend of armed special forces each their own specialty niche, On guard and ready to recklessly breach, storm'n over your corpses like a Normandy Beach. Proficient in courses schools don't normally teach, show'n SYN is efficient when dwarf'n so call'd competition, laugh'n as the ambitious try to stall our position and befall the cognition that all are appalled by yur writtens You'd think Hitler had risen the way we're bomb'n on Britain, SYN still brawl'n blood ridden like we battle'd at Bulge Been spit'n writtens like daggers that seem to never come dull, watch these fags as they scatter, runnin, better call Dr. Scholl levy420 Pen game been vicious Since chains gang hungered scriptures Syn blundered sickness suspense the plot just thickens L.A. watched an witnessed as we chopped our victims No medic alive could doc u bitches: Threads chalked full of sloppy ass writtens Just a bunch of cocky children Soft as kittens We top notch syn`s pens drip wit slick shit Your styles forbidden we strong arm L.A.`s pimp stick What u bring to the table you dim twit Sit there conjuring fables that don't spark no intrest Mid tier at best creatively lacking intellect protect ur neck Or get whacked in a Mila sec Been a threat passing written test Place ya bets towards syns benefits Won't Find a better set till we dead n rest Wu God inspectah deck a tribe on quest Big daddy Kane-ing putting that soulja boy swag to death Mad respect u gotta give we on that other shit Bacon Greece an smothered grits hold heat like a oven mit Bars wit whit sparking spliffs shots fired target lips Head shot after head shot my gat spit a hat trick That sick twisted like metal murda a instrumental Bring drastic visions like acid In the ghetto Take heed you witnessing something special Syn take lead leave em hollowed threw credentials They follow the leader we get the leader to follow While y'all wallow in sorrow we pop bottles bringing on tomorrow Move work like Pablo when our bars drop you hear don donation!!!!! Concrete somebody raise the black flag Syn drop squares like hashtags we pack gats, peel caps back conceived in cracklabs, keys attack tracks feel the backslash geeky fad acts steezy bastards with that fake shit retro fade fucked from the start like a rape in retrograde we came here to slay, tha skull crowd assemble when Syndicate emerge from the shrouded temple the whole fucking ground trembles branded as beasts, the mark of a proud emblem the sound resembles a hazardous rap crew 9 riders coming at wack newbs like Nazgûl in a black gloom, seperate shadows stand formless then combine grand forces like vintage transformers that torments these fruitless newbie fruitcakes who don't know what koochie, booty or boobs taste finding their heterosexuality is a goose chase brother, it's too late, vs BG they can't compete JB is the guy to smash heads against concrete crews freeze up like bitches, Sin got souls on ice he hold the price while Lucky D rolls the dice unschooled fools fold their lives like dimwits that lipstick-bitch-shit ain't specifically explicit peep this, dipshits, tits is coming trough like nipslips just zip it, misfit shitkids, levy make em cry for help yet instead of trying to help.. Arthur will whop their punk asses with the title belt might aswell, as lyricists we're major slayers a dynasty of renegade players, paper chasers no games can't fade us, we run the colder gambits some wanna be kings of LA - Syndicate controls the planet Edited by Scotty32 - 24 May 2014 at 4:32pm |
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Ah, my bad levy.
Anyways, good shit Syn.
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
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Nice callab here guys props...
Brotha Goose: Real nice verse, had some nice internals to help with flow which was on point the whole way through. Had some nice word choices and some very quotable lines this stood out in particular Equip'd with soldiers to lend, a blend of armed special forces each their own specialty niche, On guard and ready to recklessly breach, storm'n over your corpses like a Normandy Beach. Proficient in courses schools don't normally teach, show'n SYN is efficient when dwarf'n so call'd competition, laugh'n as the ambitious try to stall our position and befall the cognition that all are appalled by yur writtens You'd think Hitler had risen the way we're bomb'n on Britain, SYN still brawl'n blood ridden like we battle'd at Bulge Been spit'n writtens like daggers that seem to never come dull, watch these fags as they scatter, runnin, better call Dr. Scholl ^ This right here was dope as fuck. Levy: This was a nice read. Your flow was not as smooth as BG but it was still alright. You had nice content some funny lines and some quotables. Sit there conjuring fables that don't spark no intrest Mid tier at best creatively lacking intellect protect ur neck Or get whacked in a Mila sec Been a threat passing written test Place ya bets towards syns benefits Won't Find a better set till we dead n rest I liked his in particular real smooth and great vocab Concrete: Stepped up the pace with this, Great verse real smooth flow I liked how you integrated the Syn crew members in the verse, I especially liked the Titu reference that shit was funny. I liked this in particular brother, it's too late, vs BG they can't compete JB is the guy to smash heads against concrete crews freeze up like bitches, Sin got souls on ice he hold the price while Lucky D rolls the dice unschooled fools fold their lives like dimwits that lipstick-bitch-shit ain't specifically explicit peep this, dipshits, tits is coming trough like nipslips just zip it, misfit shitkids, levy make em cry for help yet instead of trying to help.. Arthur will whop their punk asses with the title belt Real nice collab good to see some of the talent within Tha Syndicate. Props |
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IZIAH
Standard Member Joined: 31 August 2012 Location: alberta, Canada Status: Offline Points: 2041 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-3-1 Form: WLLWLN |
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dope shit guys, i loved yall flowing and its been awhile since syn made a collab, but its still good, keep it up, the dopeness of this was pretty god. i enjoyed tha read guys, keep writing more until yall die!!!
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
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This was dope as hell, each one of you brought the flames. Levy, one of the best verses I've seen from you. You got viscious in there son.
Bro goose, from 'syn is a keyed up engine ready to rev' to the final bar you fucking killed it. Your wordplay and references were super tight but-hole. Con, you came in with that fresh as fuck style that I've come to expect from you. Keep it up bruh. |
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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NoteBook
Groupie Joined: 20 September 2013 Location: Memphis Status: Offline Points: 66 |
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I had to crank the fan up this was too hot
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I'll relinquish one bullet. Where do you want it? "Commander Shepard"
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JBrenn
Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3757 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
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Syndicate style right here props to con and levy steady putting in work to up your om game! You two elevated a fuck load!!!
Goose you are so consistent with oms but this was on another level with your wp and I wana see you bring this to your battle field verses!!!!! Great drop syn!!!! |
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INK.
Banned Joined: 24 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 951 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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goose, is that dude. U went long bar - this was smooth flow was. You did the best here, definitely took it and ran with it. You the mannnnn daaaawwwggg..hahaha. But yea man i see you been readin other sites writers. This is not an LA format, i like it though you did well with this style. I just don't know how others might feel if you drop this on them in a battle. Cause most do short bar here, lol. But yeah it was cool sometimes u got a little to drawn out. But thats long bar for you. Fancy flashy multies usually help the read, but it can be a chore to read long bar. No matter how nice the multies are. But i like what i seen here.
Concrete: u did pretty good here some lines needed more detail. What i mean is some of your lines where filler multies that were fragments. But some of the multies would've been a punch. Had you put a set up in, but its all good. This to me is a flex piece honestly, that was smooth. You definitely have gotten better. I like what i see man, keep it up. I hope you sign up for the summer classic on NC or the LLL on RB. You'd explode in elevation against those monsters. Your wordplay needs more work though, but its a step up thats all i care to see. Some punches did fizzle out for me, the NAzgul line wasn't really tickling my fancy. I did enjoy this though, you are elevating. One of the top writers in the battle depo on LA. Good to see you back at it my dude. Levy: You're improving as well, just need to really bring home those concepts. I like your rhyming ability, now lets work on wording the lines a bit more. You have a good verse here, you really do. I just feel some lines that could've had the WOW-factor, fizzled. This was good though i like the follow the leader reverse idea. It was witty, a few other lines in there i liked. You have the tools just keep pluggin along, bro. |
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Brotha Goose
Standard Member Joined: 07 July 2013 Location: San Diego, CA Status: Offline Points: 2318 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-10-0 Form: LWLWLL |
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Thx for all the luv fellas!
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Thanks for breaking your feedie down properly INK, just gotta say that my verse is not a filler\punch verse in any way, shape or form. This is basically just freestyle selfhype and messing around with some wacky ideas for the funk of it. Props to all for peeping and feedin'.
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
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Props an thanks to all for reading an feeding this was a fun verse to create glad it's enjoyable for y'all
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
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An lol at the last part of.mines it's supposed to.read Don domarko!!! Not Don donation
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Kilo G
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This was too dope man!!!
Great verses Much respect!!! Stay Active!
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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
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There isn't much I can add to the thread. The drop delivered, it did what it had to do.
But why didn't y'all diss anybody, that was the only thing missing...a vicious diss lol. |
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Final bump, thanx for dropping comments Kilo & Chain.
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Notez
Groupie Joined: 21 May 2014 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 220 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-3-2 Form: WWNWLN |
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Goose: On guard and ready to recklessly breach, storm'n over your corpses like a Normandy Beach. ^^^^^ Fire.. all I can say is Fire overall i think u did the best....liked the flow if yours levy420: No medic alive could doc u bitches: Threads chalked full of sloppy ass writtens ^^^^^ so fucking true...... ur verse was the weakest imo u had good and bad spots where it was hard for me to read it in a flowing manner...maybe its just me...but overall still pretty solid Concrete: unschooled fools fold their lives like dimwits that lipstick-bitch-shit ain't specifically explicit peep this, dipshits, tits is coming trough like nipslips just zip it, misfit shitkids, levy make em cry for help yet instead of trying to help.. Arthur will whop their punk asses with the title belt ^^^^nice shit right here........you had a pretty solid verse liked reading this one Overall this was a Good Read i enjoyed it Keep'em Comin! |
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