Open Mic: The Abyss

Well to say this is an old piece from 8yrs ago and still comes off
as fresh, show it has a rimless quality going for it, the opening bar
sets the tone up real nice with its (no pun intended) depth literally,
and as we know all to well, life isn't great for everybody, the emotion
within was cool too, i could feel that trapped vibe that which was the
main concept through out, which was displayed rather well i'll add,
and it also had a real real Ripe rolling theme that made the piece as
a whole come off as quaint and endearing plus fluid, enjoyed this 1
for many reasons, thanks for the read....peace.

Yeah flow and the contents/themes progression, you had a main
running theme concept, with little sprinkling of inner concepts that
kept it together..i hope that helps with what i mean by a rolling theme.
peace.