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Goryo. 
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 Topic: The Daydizzle DissPosted: 25 April 2017 at 5:23pm |
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And now for some very hot and spicy rhymes. I heard your mom pooped herself when she gave birth You were born into a pile of shit... face first Yo how do I taste? Your bitch was sucking my cock And a week after that she was fucking a jock I'll chain your mom to the radiator and fist her Then make her watch as I anally rape your sister Then make her suck my cock after it If she disobeys remind her 'I'm the master, bitch!' I'll fuckin stab your dad, make him cry like a sissy Tell your mom 'I'm a real man now fuckin kiss me' Slobber over her face, like a virgin geek Turn back to your daddy cause I heard him speak I make him fuck his own daughter, and slap him repeatedly Make him shout 'a real man has now defeated me!' I say 'I'm taking your wife to a place she's never been, Cause I'm gifting her the biggest fucking cock she's ever seen!'
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ch3kkgame
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 5:34pm |
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Bruh, TF wrong with you? The rhymes are basic. However, damn the bars. I think you may have been raised by power lines or ate paint chips as a baby. That's the most twisted shit I've seen since Rapper T dropped that dark thought piece about raping school girls n shit. If you gone go at Dizz you may wanna work on your bars, and maybe see a counselor. Keep at it tho.
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Goryo.
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 5:44pm |
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Haha @ the paint chips. Sup man? This is more for the sake of cheap humour than actually 'dissing' Dizz, so I wouldn't recommend you judge me based on this. I've been doing this a long long time, and didn't feel the need to overload it with 10-syllable multis and whatnot. Thanks for the feed.
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Neek
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 7:26pm |
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Goryo done stole my entire rap style and dissed dizzle with it.
I understand your dislike for dizz, but what did I do? |
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#Bananas
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 7:26pm |
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Ummmmm.....what the hell was that? lol
Goryo, this was pretty bad man you can definitely do better. You say it's not a "diss" yet you wrote diss in the title of the verse. |
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 7:30pm |
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If you could rewind your day and erase your mistakes. . this verse would probably be one of those mistakes you would erase.
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Goryo.
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 7:41pm |
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It is what it is. A bit of fun. It's clearly not meant to be offensive, and it's clearly not meant to be dope. Let's not start a hate bandwagon over it. Sometimes you just gotta fool around.
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 7:50pm |
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 8:32pm |
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response tomorrow.... Wtf is this though?
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 8:50pm |
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  Edited by Lord Puente - 25 April 2017 at 8:57pm |
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Neek
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 9:30pm |
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I thought that too, now im on my fourth divorce like the mad rapper was on his fourth album. |
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#Bananas
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Crimson Juice
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 9:31pm |
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^^lmao...
This thread is getting out of hand,but there have been some cool gfs and quiff..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 9:51pm |
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aye bruh.. shoulda took my route..
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 9:52pm |
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inwas thinking of making a OM to respond but it aint worth it kid... So heres my feed bar for bar
Fuck off you lame twerp, u write tameless work My mom shit herself? Ill leave ya gaped with girth Explain this verse. Your shits plain as fucking rocks My wife wouldnt suck your cock even if she was a slut with toms And your brain reminds me of jock playing ball in the winter Chain my mom? Ill leave yours with gapes and blisters Try raping my sister, she'll put a glock to your face and splatter it Shell become your master, bitch! Have ya slaving over her till yo hear the crackers whip Stab my dad, thats a great way to Diss me Your dead weight on LA, i bet you begging for you crew.. "Lift me" Fucking pipsqueek, pleb with style and your dissing a king I sit at top of my throne while you jester nd keep kissing Dizz feet This weak geek needs to have D show him who is boss Descreetly Its no secret G, or Y would i reply with no time to adress this weakling so easily? Matched your shit end rhymes to
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 10:09pm |
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Lol at what the law said, that's the only thing this verse deserves , nothing
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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 10:15pm |
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Yo Big G,
I'm not even hating on this one! As long as the punch was ironic? I see what you was going for here, cos ain't nobody can bring doubt on the plays and punches you can bring when needed... Only beef I got is with the word "pooped" 💩, That's not acceptable wording fam! Maybe just a UK thing |
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 10:19pm |
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I said you could post it, not should post it.
Your gonna have issues when you call it a dizz diss, and then say its not really diss. As a piece goes i didn't think it was great. The subject matter was juvenile and crude. It was more of a conceptual piece than s punchline piece. You didn't really bring much too impress with the mechanics, it did flow okay. Tbh content wise it was like something dizz would write. Just with less internals and a little less technical stuff going on. Your strong point is you know how to write a punchline, you've shown that in your battles and in a few opens. This didn't really show off any of those skills and didn't really replace them with anything to make up for it. I get what your saying it is what it is, you fooling around but do that in the cypher or your just gonna get people saying they ain't impressed. Just treat it as a learning curve Edited by Rutter knows best - 25 April 2017 at 11:29pm |
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#bananas
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 10:48pm |
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^^he means curve..lol.
Quote. "I said you could post it, not should post it". ^^lmao best pun yet.. Sorry for crashing your thread Goryo,and I know your piece was Tongue in Cheek,but these are funny,and remember it all started from you,so in essence your goal was attained, nothing wrong with humour..peace. |
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 10:56pm |
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Oh shit...Haha And also Neek does have a good point. |
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Posted: 25 April 2017 at 11:12pm |
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Wtf is up with Ya'll and these rape bars...that shit is played the fuck out and doesnt earn you props. We all adults here so that "yo mama this..yo mama that" doesnt work unless you actually know a personal about that person. Smh don't stoop to another persons level to diss them...point is to rap better than them and out personal them to win...rapping exactly like each other is winning a battle. What's the difference between this and grammar school jokes??
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