Open Mic: The Enigma and the Anomaly ft. Que

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    Posted: 13 August 2017 at 5:41am

The Enigma and the Anomaly



Ready tuh Rock!


Listen!!!!


Que

My Punch Got mo power than your chin could Manage....

Sin Ravaged Chain of thought will Singe n Damage!

Wrap around ya Neck!..Decapitate and Spin yuh Cabbage!!!

Eviscerate..Bone , Organs n Muscle leavin yuh Skin as Baggage!

My Pen's the Brashest!! Your efforts are fruitless...

But!...

Que's Narcoctic-ish Quality's Qualude-ish!

Polished Products an Oddity.....

Extra Elusive!

Weapons to Body?....Intrusive! Blunt Bludgeons Abusive!!

Flow Fumes Entomb.....

Ya Nostrils Rot from a Few Whiffs!

Blade Stuck to your Face like it has a Super Glue Kiss....

Peel the flesh off yuh Skull...Yank the skin down in Two Strips!!

My style?!

....You can't Craft It ! You just Gassed Halfwits !!

I'm an addict of Scenes Past Tragic...

I see you brought a Grab Bag full uh yuh Trash Classics!!

But My ..... Traumatic

Attack Tactics'll rip your heart ouctha Rib Rack n Scrap It!!




Damn, that shit savage!!

I'm ready to roll


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Nigma

Nig and Que slay dragons just to prove who’s dangerous

Two true flame makers like we’re butane vapours

Burn the evil that consume you, it’s a new age danger

Youth paves the new way, even Luke changed Vader

Hit you with the 4th shots in Wu Tang’s chambers

Ruthless with the dues paid like Hussein’s hangers

Was 2 months clean to get a lock on the fitness

But I bought a bag of weed boys, Popeye’s got spinach

If we hit you up like “Dude’s great”, we mock you beginners

The vision and the views change, evolve till you're finished

Then you’ll switch it up to blu-ray and talk to me different

Pixels are the proof, pay the prophets they’re winnings

We all know winning… profits, forgive me. Wrote this quick, I promise

Bent the tense of death and I’ve seen more stiffs than the pits of Auschwitz

Que, how you put it? Those thoughts you used in descriptive context?

Ah, “A quantum killer who stalks civilians with cryptic monsters”
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Que the homie - My Pen's the Brashest!! Your efforts are fruitless...

But!...

Que's Narcoctic-ish Quality's Qualude-ish!

Polished Products an Oddity.....

Extra Elusive!

Weapons to Body?....Intrusive! Blunt Bludgeons Abusive!!


This is the fucking shit I miss from you, I can feel that aggression from just reading your text I love it! Overall the whole verse really was entertaining and the multies were dope, I really enjoy reading your text because you do sway a little from the norm in terms of structure style but it fucking works. Also you also seem to use multies I haven't seen before which allows a fresh side to the piece as well, dope my dude.


Nigma my countryman - The opener is next level shit and the next two bars that accompany it are ill as well. Your multies and rhyme structure IMO is on next level shit, i've seen a drastic improvement in the last couple years..not that you weren't nice before but took that next step. I seen you try to emulate Que's style in the rest of your verse and honestly I think his style would be one of the hardest to mimic for reasons stated in his feedback. You did a pretty good job though, that two months clean/weed popeyes spinach bar was hilarious. You got me looking like..




With that fucking "seen more stiffs" bar, definitely needed at least one "No homo" but none the less I dug the verse.


Props to both you fuckers, nice complimenting styles and it came off nice. 

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Right on DTK my brotha. I don't get much time to scribble anymore but it was nice to be able to loop wit Nigma. Appreciate the time bro.

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I liked this joint you little so and so's.


que - that two strips line was something else.


nigma - I dug your flow and true flame makers joint. also.. just FYI, weed doesnt ruin your fitness. just resist the munchies and you alright... Michael Phelps will show you how to do this son.
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It makes me not want to fitness
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stop smoking indica then.
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Lmaoo Neek is one crazy bastard lol. Right on Neek

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Sativa or sativa dominant hybrid only bro you know what it is
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God Mode.
Que is just next level. You're like a blaxploitation flick villain.

1. Eviscerate...bone, Organs n Muscle leaving yuh Skin as baggage
2. Weapons to Body?...Intrusive! Blunt Bludgeons Abusive!!
3. Peel the flesh off yuh Skull...Yank the Skin down in two strips !! [LMAO]

Nigma
It's really hard to match Que's intensity and "showmanship" but I know you'll bring it lyrically

1. The butane vapours bars...yeah called it lol
2. Damn @ the fluidity of the blu ray bar
3. @ emulating Que's style with the quantum killer bar

This is my shit. This was hard! I feel like writing again.

I'll be right back after these messages.

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Que - 
I can't recall reading anything from you before, so this was even more impressive. I loved the slightly aggressive tone and unconventional scheme you employed. The 'Narcotic-ish qualities' part was one of the highlights. 

Nigma - 
The opener was incredible, along with the entire segment from 'Luke changed Vader' to 'blu-ray', just the type of content I love to see in these kind of verses. 'Profits' reference was clever and well done as well. The smoothness of the entire verse was really nice. Impressive work. 
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