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    Posted: 19 October 2014 at 7:23am
Due in 48 hrs. 5 bars.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 October 2014 at 3:13pm
Yo Gen! You ready.. Heres what i got.






The general degenerate, want my medical
My style is effing on point like a decimal.

I'll stab you in the neck, make you hysterical
Creep up then i jump you with my lyrical - assault

That shit gon make you pause -raving am a mavin
then i cut your stolen balls.

Then i send you to the wall, with nothing but a sword
better kill the winterDemons before the winter Comes.

You feeling embarrassed, well-what did you expect
This happens when you fuck with Dr.lyrical -who the fuck is next!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 October 2014 at 3:27pm
Expo: For those of you who don't know, my 4th bar is mentioning some staples of Canadian Culture.

You talk like you're big money, when you're really bottom shelf.
Americans love the UK, but we don't fuck with the commonwealth.
You think you can beat me? No bro you must be loco.
I got this shit in a chokehold turn Sayso to so-so.
Then imma take so-so's so-so ho to So Ho.
Dead her in Central park, this Man Hadn't (Manhattan) know so I sent a photo.
Silly Say, you must be hopped up on maple and poutine.
You must be drunk on Tim Hortons if you don't think you're losing.
The truth is no one gives a fuck about what you say, so
Know I'm the type to replace the lightbulb over your head with a halo.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 October 2014 at 3:28pm
Also So Ho is another name for Manhattan.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2014 at 7:07am
This battle was a clear win for gen in my opinion. He had better just about everything. i like the say-so to so-so lines. Sayso, your flow was decent but at times your lyrics just didnt make actual sense to me. No disresepct but sending him to a wall and stolen balls just didnt do it for me. Work on your craft and try again you got nothing to lose....except your next battle i suppose but you get my point, lol.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2014 at 2:40pm
Ok. Weak battle. Sayso came with really generic lines but attempted punches where General had mostly aggression going for him. His punches weren't hard at all. But sayso really brought nothing to the table. He needed more to his verse to even have a chance. And general u got all the potential to be sick here but your punches are basic tbh. Turn him to so so? Come on man that's not hard. Your concepts need to be more clever and I hope u understand what I mean

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2014 at 8:48pm
Sayso, get more aggressive and direct,to much dancing around not enough punching.

Gen, you can come better than this, you need to work on your schemes then developing them into a build up diss followed by a stringer punch, if you battle anyone with any kind of idea you are going to get eaten up.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2014 at 9:03pm
3KO GENeral
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